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The Domini saga

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The Altered Destination
Bren
Bren
Tamsin Rook
Tamsin Rook

The last southbound boat pulls away into the fog, its lantern shrinking beyond the reeds. Tamsin draws Kynes and Bren beneath the accounting awning as river mist veils the landing.

Tamsin Rook

Tamsin Rook

Keep close to the post. If anyone watches the quay, they will see only a ferry clerk sorting the evening accounts.

Under a hooded lantern, Bren lays out the crossing slip, the blue thread, and Iven’s copied ledger. Their marks align around the scraped instruction directing Pellis toward the old salt warehouse.

Bren

Bren

The ink was removed, but not the pressure. Someone added Blackwater Quay after Pellis’s crossing, then tried to erase the destination.

Tamsin angles the slip toward the flame. The surviving strokes match a narrow, deliberate hand in the ledger’s altered entries, while a faint blue fiber clings to the wet ink.

Tamsin Rook

Tamsin Rook

That hand belongs to the passenger who carried Hale’s writ. He wrote the destination while I was counting the fares.

Bren

Bren

Then the Gray Glove did not merely follow Pellis. They changed the record to send anyone searching toward the kilns, where the veiled woman was waiting.

Kynes leaves Eastern landing behind and arrives at Blackwater Quay.

“I travel quietly toward Blackwater Quay”

SUCCESS (Legendary Agility, rolled -2)

The Altered Destination
Bren
Bren

Blackwater Quay lies beneath a veil of river fog, its warped piers creaking over dark water. Kynes and Bren arrive quietly beside abandoned salt kilns and a sagging warehouse.

The warehouse stands open to the rear yard, though no lantern burns within. Brine, wet ash, and old rope scent the air, while fresh wheel tracks mark the mud.

Bren

Bren

We are here, love. The tracks lead directly to the loading yard, and nothing suggests the warehouse has been empty tonight.

Bren crouches beside the tracks without touching them. A broken blue fiber clings to a splintered crate, matching the thread from Pellis’s altered crossing slip.

Bren

Bren

The Gray Glove’s passenger came through this gate. If Pellis was moved inland, the kilns and the sunken storehouse are the places to search first.

Beyond the warehouse, a concealed stair descends beneath the salt sheds. Its stone steps are damp, and a brass keyhole bears the open-door emblem.

Bren

Bren

The route is exposed now. Whatever waits below, we can meet it on ground chosen by us.

“I inspect the concealed stair with Bren.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Perception, rolled +1)

The Altered Destination
Bren
Bren

Kynes examines the damp steps beside Bren, tracing the brass keyhole, the worn edges, and the faint residue gathered in the grooves. The stair has seen recent passage.

Kynes

Kynes

The keyhole is clean, but the dust on the steps is disturbed from below.

His arcane sight follows the open-door emblem into the stone. The lock carries no active ward, only a sealed memory of authorized passage and a route descending beneath the kilns.

Bren

Bren

No trap in the mechanism, love. The danger was meant to be elsewhere, where witnesses could be redirected or silenced.

Kynes and Bren descend together, keeping their weight to the worn centers of the steps. The stair opens into a low salt passage lined with old alcoves and fresh wheel scuffs.

Bren

Bren

There. The wheels turned toward the sunken storehouse, and someone dragged a heavier load back toward the kilns. Pellis left this way, or was brought through it.

At the foot of the stair, a recessed door bears the same brass emblem. Its latch is already unfastened, revealing a narrow chamber beyond and a blue thread caught on the threshold.

✓ Quest Accepted

Reach the sunken storehouse

“I follow the wheel scuffs toward the sunken storehouse.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Agility, rolled +4)

The Altered Destination
Bren
Bren

Kynes follows the wheel scuffs through the low salt passage, reading their depth and direction without disturbing the damp grit. They lead directly beneath the kilns.

The passage opens into the sunken storehouse. Its warped doors stand ajar, revealing stacked salt crates, a covered handcart, and fresh tracks crossing the packed floor.

Bren

Bren

The cart came in empty and left weighted. Whatever they moved, it went toward the inland kilns, not back to the river.

Kynes’s arcane sight catches a thin residue along the cart’s runners, carrying Pellis’s familiar witness-pattern and the same blue fiber found on the crossing slip.

Bren

Bren

That is Pellis’s mark. He was here, and the residue says he was conscious when the cart passed this way.

Behind the crates, the cart’s movement has scraped open a concealed floor hatch. Beneath it, a lit stair descends toward a warm chamber, and Pellis’s mark continues below.

Bren

Bren

We have a clean route, proof Pellis survived this place, and a hidden stair the Gray Glove failed to seal. Let’s see where it ends.

Quest Complete

Reach the sunken storehouse

“I cast cloud of blindness and befuddle on the storehouse”

SUCCESS (Legendary Arcana, rolled +0)

The Altered Destination
Bren
Bren

Kynes raises his shadowed hand, and a dense silver-gray cloud spills through the sunken storehouse, filling the crates, cart, hatch, and descending stair.

The cloud dulls sight and direction alike. Footsteps below falter, scrape against stone, and lose all sense of distance as the befuddlement settles over the hidden chamber.

Bren

Bren

The whole storehouse is covered, love. Anyone below has lost the advantage of knowing where we are.

Through the haze, a startled voice calls from beneath the stair, followed by a dropped object and the clatter of someone searching for a wall that is no longer where memory places it.

Bren

Bren

That is not an empty chamber. Someone was waiting below, and now they cannot see the route they came through.

Kynes’s spell holds across the storehouse without disturbing the evidence. Pellis’s witness-pattern remains visible to his arcane sight, leading safely down toward the confused voices.

Bren

Bren

We have the concealment and the initiative. Let us take the stair while your cloud keeps every watcher blind.

✓ Quest Accepted

Learn who is waiting below

“I descend the stair, following Pellis’s witness-pattern through the cloud.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Agility, rolled +0)

The Altered Destination
Bren
Bren
the gray-gloved man
The Gray-Gloved Man

Kynes descends through the silver-gray cloud, following Pellis’s witness-pattern as it threads along the stair. The befuddlement bends every other sound away from his path.

Bren follows close behind, one hand skimming the wall while the haze erases their silhouettes. Below, a chamber opens around a covered table and scattered papers.

Pellis’s pattern gathers at the table’s edge, bright against the stone. A brass-bound chair stands empty, while a gray-gloved man crouches beside it, searching blindly.

The Gray-Gloved Man

The Gray-Gloved Man

Who is there? I cannot see the stair. Pellis, if you brought them here, answer me.

The cloud keeps the man disoriented as Kynes reaches the chamber floor. On the table, a fresh custody sheet bears Pellis’s hand and a half-completed transfer mark.

Bren

Bren

We have reached him, love. Pellis’s witness-pattern is here, and this man was waiting for the transfer to finish.

Beyond the table, a narrow arch leads deeper beneath the kilns. Pellis’s pattern continues through it, while the gray-gloved man’s searching hand closes around nothing.

Quest Complete

Learn who is waiting below

“We continue on following Pellis’s pattern”

SUCCESS (Legendary Perception, rolled +2)

The Altered Destination
Pellis Marr
Pellis Marr
the gray-gloved man
The Gray-Gloved Man

Kynes follows Pellis’s witness-pattern through the narrow arch. The silver-gray cloud pours after him, muffling the chamber behind and leaving the gray-gloved man lost among false distances.

The passage descends into a sealed records room beneath the kilns. Shelves line the walls, and a bound ledger rests open beside a lantern burning with steady blue flame.

Pellis’s pattern gathers around the ledger, then reaches toward a recessed alcove. There, a middle-aged man sits upright against the stone, wrists tied with ordinary cord, breathing shallowly but clearly alive.

Pellis Marr

Pellis Marr

You followed the mark. Good. Do not trust the transfer sheet. They changed the recipient after they brought me below.

The witness-pattern settles around Kynes’s hand without binding him, revealing a second page tucked beneath the ledger. Its ink names Magistrate Hale’s office and a hidden recipient at Blackwater Quay.

Pellis Marr

Pellis Marr

The real record is beneath that page. Take it, but leave the false transfer visible. The man above must believe the route still answers to him.

Behind Kynes, the befuddled gray-gloved man stumbles against the arch. The cloud holds him there, while Pellis’s living pattern remains clear, complete, and freely readable.

✓ Quest Accepted

Secure the true record

“I take the true record from beneath the false transfer page. " Will the miss you if your gone?" I ask”

SUCCESS (Legendary Thievery, rolled +0)

The Altered Destination
Pellis Marr
Pellis Marr
Kynes

Kynes

Will they miss you if you’re gone?

Kynes lifts the true record from beneath the false transfer page. The hidden sheet comes free intact, its ink naming the concealed recipient and the route’s altered custody.

Pellis Marr

Pellis Marr

Some will. The Gray Glove will notice because they need my testimony. Hale’s office will notice because they need my silence.

Pellis watches the false sheet remain visible beneath the ledger. His breathing steadies as the true record disappears into Kynes’s keeping.

Pellis Marr

Pellis Marr

But the people who trusted the real record will know I was taken. That is why I left marks. If I vanish, follow the crossings, not the orders.

The blue lantern flickers once. Beyond the arch, the gray-gloved man mutters against the cloud, still unable to find the chamber or understand what has changed.

Pellis Marr

Pellis Marr

Take me with you if you can. If you cannot, leave the false page where it lies and make them believe the route still belongs to them.

Quest Complete

Secure the true record

Skill Upgrade: Stealth Fair→Good

+ New Item Acquired

True record

“"nah this is more fun" I cast the spell duplicate, a spell that will make a second Pellis Marr, but it will be mindless and cooperative.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Arcana, rolled -2)

The Altered Destination
Pellis Marr
Pellis Marr
the gray-gloved man
The Gray-Gloved Man

Kynes shapes the duplicate spell over the true record. Violet shadow gathers beside Pellis, copying his face, clothing, posture, and shallow breathing without touching his mind.

The copy solidifies as a second Pellis Marr, blank-eyed and cooperative. The spell succeeds, but its formation tears a sharp line of pain through Kynes’s burned palm.

Pellis Marr

Pellis Marr

That is either cleverness or the strangest rescue I have ever witnessed.

The duplicate turns toward the arch at once, awaiting instruction. It carries no witness-pattern, no private memory, and no hesitation, only the shape Kynes gave it.

Pellis Marr

Pellis Marr

Awaiting direction.

Pellis Marr

Pellis Marr

It could pass for me in poor light. Give it a simple task, and make the Gray Glove believe the false transfer still matters.

Beyond the arch, the gray-gloved man remains lost in the befuddling cloud. The duplicate steps toward his muffled voice, while the true Pellis watches Kynes carefully.

“To the pellis duplicate. " Stay here and just smile and nod" I command. To Bren and the real pellis " back the way we came " I weave an illusion over pellis to distort his face."”

SUCCESS (Legendary Arcana, rolled +0)

The Altered Destination
Bren
Bren
Pellis Marr
Pellis Marr
Kynes

Kynes

Stay here and just smile and nod.

The duplicate obeys, settling beside the false transfer with a mild smile. When the gray-gloved man stumbles closer, it nods silently, preserving the deception.

Pellis Marr

Pellis Marr

...

Kynes

Kynes

Back the way we came.

Kynes weaves violet shadow across Pellis’s face, distorting his features into an unfamiliar arrangement. The illusion holds without touching his thoughts or witness-pattern.

Pellis Marr

Pellis Marr

The disguise feels strange, but the path behind us remains clear.

Bren guides Pellis toward the arch while Kynes follows, keeping the cloud between them and the confused watcher. Behind them, the duplicate continues smiling and nodding beside the ledger.

✓ Quest Accepted

Get Pellis to safety

Kynes leaves Sealed records room beneath the kilns behind and arrives at the quarry.

“We return to the quarry”

SUCCESS (Legendary Agility, rolled -2)

The Altered Destination
Bren
Bren
Pellis Marr
Pellis Marr

The quarry receives Kynes, Bren, and the disguised Pellis beneath a hard afternoon sky. Dust hangs over the cut stone, while the old iron door stands sealed below.

Bren guides Pellis behind a broken ore cart, keeping his altered face turned from the quarry floor. Fresh bootprints cross the grit toward the western passage.

Pellis Marr

Pellis Marr

The prints are recent. Someone came after we left, and they knew exactly which route to search.

At the sealed door, a new strip of blue thread is tied around the handle. Beneath it, chalk marks identify the old weighing room and a second descent.

Bren

Bren

That is not Pellis’s trail, love. Someone has marked the quarry since our last visit, and they expect the record to draw us back.

Kynes’s shadow slips across the threshold and returns with the echo of a recently opened lock. Below the weighing room, a faint lantern glow moves between the stones.

Pellis Marr

Pellis Marr

The route is active again. Whatever waits below has found the surviving chain, but it has not found the true ledger.

“I open a gate to the mirror realm of the shadow fell so the 3 of us can talk in private”

SUCCESS (Legendary Arcana, rolled -3)

The Altered Destination
Bren
Bren
Pellis Marr
Pellis Marr

Kynes raises his shadowed hand beside the sealed quarry door. Darkness unfolds into a tall, glass-black gate, reflecting the three travelers beneath a colorless sky.

The gate opens onto a silent mirror realm of the Shadowfell, where pale stone stretches beneath a dim violet horizon. Its threshold admits Kynes, Bren, and Pellis together.

The passage seals behind them with a deep, echoing crack. The effort splits the burned skin of Kynes’s palm, and a thin line of blood darkens his wrist.

Pellis Marr

Pellis Marr

Private, then. Good. No Gray Glove listener can follow us here, and no quarry wall will carry our voices.

Bren

Bren

You paid for the quiet with your hand, love. Let us make the conversation worth the cost before we leave.

Pellis Marr

Pellis Marr

The marked route below is active because someone is searching for the true ledger. I know who altered it, but not why they need you involved.

Behind them, the mirror gate remains closed and soundless. Pellis faces Kynes and Bren in the private gray expanse, ready to explain what the surviving record conceals.

Quest Complete

Get Pellis to safety

Skill Upgrade: Stealth Good→Great

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