The Domini saga

Fantasy·Kynes

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Deer at the Clearing Edgeuntethered valley hollow
Deer at the Clearing Edge
Bren
Bren

The shadow-crow breaks apart over the fire, and its smoke curls back into Kynes’s outstretched hand. In the woods, the sound resolves into soft chewing and the faint, cautious steps of deer.

Bren eases out a breath and lowers her shoulders. She keeps watching the treeline, but the tension leaves her face.

Bren

Bren

Just deer. A whole little herd, by the sound of it.

Beyond the clearing, pale shapes shift between the trunks, half-seen in the dark. The animals do not rush, only test the edge of the house line and drift nearer to the safer grass.

Kynes

Kynes

They are close enough to count.

Bren glances toward Kynes, then back to the deer, a small smile touching her mouth. The fire burns steady, and the valley stays quiet around them.

Bren

Bren

Let them have the edge of the clearing. They look more curious than bold.

One deer lifts its head, ears forward, then resumes grazing. The night settles into an easy hush, warm with firelight and the slow, ordinary breath of the valley.

✓ Quest Accepted

Allow the deer to graze undisturbed.

I lean on Bren " is this what you wanted, our own house with the wildlife chewing away at our yard..." I stop and think " when we put the garden in will have to have it large enough for our guests"

SUCCESS (Legendary Persuasion, rolled -2)

Kynes

Kynes

Is this what you wanted, our own house with the wildlife chewing away at our yard... When we put the garden in, it will have to be large enough for our guests.

Bren

Bren

A yard with deer in it feels honest. I can live with that.

Bren leans into Kynes’s shoulder, and the firelight warms the line of her mouth as she looks from him to the grazing deer. The valley’s low hum stays steady under their feet.

Bren

Bren

A garden large enough for guests, though. That sounds like you already expect this place to be lived in.

Kynes’s words sit between them like a laid stone, and Bren’s grin softens into something more tender than teasing. The faint shimmer beneath the floorboards gives one quiet pulse, then settles.

Bren

Bren

If the deer trust the edge, maybe we can too.

At the treeline, the nearest deer lowers its head again and keeps chewing, unbothered by the fire or the voices. Bren stays close to Kynes, her shoulder against his, while the yard remains calm.

I strength the ward so it dispelled the whatever is going on with the floor board and I lean into bren

SUCCESS (Legendary Strength, rolled +1)

Kynes lifts his staff and pours a steadier ward through the floorboards, and the faint shimmer beneath them goes still. The valley’s hum answers once, then settles back into its slow, even note.

Kynes

Kynes

The floor is quiet again.

He leans into Bren, shoulder to shoulder by the fire, and the tension leaves the space between them. Her arm settles against him with easy trust.

Bren

Bren

That feels better. Like the house is breathing instead of listening.

Beyond the clearing, the nearest deer keeps its head down and grazes on, unstartled by the ward or the voices. The rest of the small herd drifts with it at the edge of the dark grass.

Bren

Bren

If they stay that calm, maybe we can be calm too.

Kynes stays pressed to her side as the fire lowers to a warm, steady glow. The little herd remains in the open, and the yard feels quietly claimed for the moment.

" yeah let the dear do dear stuff"

Kynes

Kynes

Yeah, let the deer do deer stuff.

Bren huffs a quiet laugh and leans her head against Kynes again. Beyond the grass, the herd keeps grazing, and the valley’s steady hum holds the peace in place.

I let the crow stand watch over the house

Deer at the Clearing Edge
Bren
Bren

Kynes lifts a hand, and the shadow-crow settles on the roofline above the house, black against the dusk. Bren stays close at his side, while the deer keep grazing at the edge of the hollow, unbothered and calm.

✓ Quest Accepted

Learn what is stirring beneath the floorboards.

" ok so the floor boards are acting up again. We built this with no basement correct?"

Kynes checks the floor with a glance and a hand, and the boards stay firm. No basement, just sealed stone and a quiet, breathing house.

Bren gives a small, relieved laugh beside him, and the deer at the edge of the hollow keep grazing as if they have already decided the night is harmless.

I ask Bren if the house feels wrong

Kynes

Kynes

Does the house feel wrong to you?

Bren

Bren

No. It feels quiet, held, and a little too careful, but not wrong. More like something that learned to stay still.

Bren

Bren

The deer keep grazing, which is a good sign... unless they are pretending.

I watch the deer for signs of panic

SUCCESS (Legendary Perception, rolled -1)

Kynes keeps his gaze on the treeline, measuring the deer’s posture one by one. One lifts its head too fast, ears hardening, then freezes instead of bolting.

Kynes

Kynes

The herd is tense, but not panicked.

A smaller doe steps sideways, then lowers her head again. The others follow her lead, chewing, but they keep angling their bodies toward the dark wood.

Bren

Bren

They are staying. Something else has them listening.

Kynes catches the pattern at once, no stampede, no wild scattering, just caution pulled tight toward the same patch of trees. The valley hum stays even, but the grass at the edge of the clearing ripples as if a breath passes through it.

The deer finish their warning glance and keep grazing, yet they never turn their backs fully on the woods. The false alarm is gone, but the quiet is no longer empty.

I sence the deer , are they normal deer

SUCCESS (Legendary Perception, rolled -1)

Kynes lets his sight sink past fur and posture, past the grazing and the stillness.

Kynes

Kynes

They are normal deer.

The herd reads clean to him, all instinct and skittish muscle, no mark of spellcraft, no hidden binding, no wrong shape under the skin.

One doe lifts her muzzle toward the trees again, but what pulls her attention is ordinary fear, not enchantment.

Bren sees the shift in Kynes’s face and eases a fraction closer, her hand brushing his sleeve.

Bren

Bren

So it is only deer. That is a relief.

The valley hum stays steady, the fire does not stir, and the herd keeps grazing at the edge of the clearing, wary but calm.

I have the crow cheak inside the house for anything off or odd

SUCCESS (Legendary Arcana, rolled -1)

Deer at the Clearing Edge
Bren
Bren

Kynes lifts his hand, and the shadow-crow on the roofline answers at once. It slips through the shutter seam and drops into the house like a living scrap of night.

It glides low over the hearth, then angles toward the floorboards, circling the faint shimmer beneath them with sharp, measuring turns.

Kynes

Kynes

There is a seam under the room, and the crow can see it better than he can.

The bird dips, listens, then pecks once at the boards near the hidden glow. A thin pulse answers from below, dry and old, like stone waking in its sleep.

Bren straightens beside him, her relief narrowing into alertness as she follows the crow’s path across the room.

Bren

Bren

Something is still down there.

The crow flares its wings and settles on the beam above the hearth, facing the floor as the valley hum deepens one steady note. Outside, the deer keep grazing, but their heads lift all at once toward the woods.

Inside the house, the hidden pulse goes quiet again, waiting.

I sigh"what are we dealing with first... Woods or the house" I duplicate the crow and send that one into the woods to cheak it out further

SUCCESS (Legendary Arcana, rolled -2)

Deer at the Clearing Edge
Bren
Bren
Kynes

Kynes

What are we dealing with first, the woods or the house?

Kynes lifts his hand and shapes a second crow from the first shadow, splitting the dark with a soft arc of magic.

The copy slips through the shutter seam and into the trees, low and quick, while the original stays above the hearth.

From outside comes a dry crack, then another, and the deer freeze at the clearing edge instead of grazing on.

Bren rises partway, eyes fixed on the woods, as the room’s faint floor shimmer thins to a single cold pulse.

Bren

Bren

That sound is not the deer.

Inside the house, the hidden pressure settles again, but Kynes now has the crow’s sight aimed into the treeline, and the cost is a little more strain in his palm, like a spell spent thin.

" woods it is." I get up and head to the source of the sound

SUCCESS (Legendary Agility, rolled +2)

Deer at the Clearing Edge
Bren
Bren

Kynes rises from the hearth, staff in hand, and turns from the fire toward the dark line of trees.

Bren straightens behind him, tense but steady, as the deer at the edge of the clearing lift their heads and bunch together.

He crosses the threshold of the house and takes the first quiet steps into the hollow, following the dry crack through the grass.

The valley hum stays low underfoot, but the air near the treeline feels thinner, as if the woods are holding still on purpose.

Bren remains by the doorway, watching him go, one hand lifted slightly as if ready to call him back if the shape in the trees changes.

At the trees, Kynes finds the source of the sound: not a threat, but the deer huddled closer than before, noses angled toward something beyond the dark brush.

The herd stills, then begins to graze again in uneasy fits, and the clearing shifts from alarm to a wary calm that leaves the deeper question hanging.

I look back" you coming?" I ask bren

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled -1)

Deer at the Clearing Edge
Bren
Bren

Kynes turns back from the treeline, staff steady in his hand, and looks toward the doorway instead of the woods.

Kynes

Kynes

You coming?

Bren

Bren

Always.

Bren leaves the threshold and starts across the hollow toward him, her shoulders easing now that the deer keep grazing.

Bren

Bren

It is only the two of them again, and the house still holds.

The nearest deer lower their heads and crop the grass in short, cautious bites, no longer crowding the edge of the clearing.

Behind them, the house stays quiet, the faint shimmer beneath the floorboards calm, while the valley hum keeps its steady, low note.

Bren

Bren

Come back to the fire with me, and tell me what you saw.

Let's go" I say as we head into the woods

SUCCESS (Legendary Agility, rolled -3)

Deer at the Clearing Edge
Bren
Bren
Kynes

Kynes

Let's go.

Kynes turns from the fire and heads into the woods, staff low and careful. The deer lift their heads once, then keep grazing at the edge of the clearing.

Bren follows him to the treeline, then slows as the hollow falls behind them. The house stays quiet, its floorboards sealed and still.

Under the roots, the buried ward gives one soft answering pulse, then settles again. Kynes feels it through the ground, along with a faint sting from the strain of the earlier spell.

The woods open into darker brush, and the deer are gone from sight. In their place, a dry crack sounds deeper ahead, not loud, but deliberate.

Kynes reaches the first shadowed trunks and stops at the edge of the trees. Bren comes up beside him, her hand brushing his sleeve as she listens too.

Bren

Bren

It is not the deer now. Do you want to keep going?

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