The Domini saga

Fantasy·Kynes

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The Tally Board Stares BackHigh Pass
The Tally Board Stares Back
Bren
Bren

The outpost yard goes still under the hard High Pass light. The woodpile stands neat, the fire steady, and every eye that has learned Kynes now waits to see if he stays plain or becomes trouble.

The Gatekeeper studies the bucket, then Kynes's scarred hand, and the thin violet trace that still haunts it. Bren shifts closer, ready but silent.

The Gatekeeper

The Gatekeeper

You’ve worked enough to earn a hearth. But if that mark pulls trouble here, I need to know now.

Bren

Bren

If it comes to it, he doesn’t face it alone.

Kynes

Kynes

Kynes asks for the ledger, or whatever passes for one here.

The Gatekeeper hesitates, then brings out a plain outpost tally board, scarred by years of names, counts, and weather. Its surface catches the firelight like a waiting eye.

Kynes

Kynes

This is a record. Records can be broken.

The fire pops once. Bren watches Kynes's hand move toward the board, and the whole yard seems to hold its breath at the edge of the choice.

I use an alias on the board

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled -1)

The Tally Board Stares Back
Bren
Bren

Kynes drags two fingers through the ash beside the board, then writes a different name than the one he wears. The strokes are clean, deliberate, and impossible to mistake.

Kynes

Kynes

He gives the outpost an alias, plain and unadorned.

The Gatekeeper’s eyes narrow as they read it, then ease. Bren’s shoulders loosen by a fraction, as if the room has chosen the safer lie.

The Gatekeeper

The Gatekeeper

If that is the name you want seen by candlelight, I can file that much.

The tally board tilts toward the fire, and the Gatekeeper scratches the alias into a fresh line, not Kynes’s true mark. The old scars on the wood swallow the new entry without complaint.

Bren

Bren

A name that stays put is worth more than a story.

The board settles back into the Gatekeeper’s hands. For the first time since it appeared, it stops feeling like a witness and starts feeling like work.

The Tally Board Stares Back

The outpost yard went quiet as the board took the alias and nothing else.

The Gatekeeper

The Gatekeeper

A hearth, if you keep to it. Trouble from that violet mark, you face at once.

Bren

Bren

He will not face it alone.

Kynes

Kynes

Then let this name stand. Not the one they hunt.

The board no longer watched like a tribunal. It sat in the yard as plain work, and Kynes walked free of its records for one more day. Bren stayed near, the Gatekeeper looked on without challenge, and the world made room for a name that was not true enough to trap him.

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