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High Fantasy·Delfarius

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A Report from OrosiaThe Obsidian Tower workshop
A Report from Orosia
Dorian Elsyin
Dorian Elsyin

At the junction, a sanctioned route unfolds in a column of gold and blue light. Faelwen and Nadron remain behind in the bedchamber as Dorian steps through alone, a sealed civic report in hand.

Dorian pauses beyond the threshold, allowing the route to close behind him. His posture is composed, but the tight seal and careful grip on the report carry the capital’s unease into the Tower.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

I came alone so this would not resemble a delegation or a demand. Mallow remains in Orosia, guarding the royal effects while I bring you the report personally.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

Public wells are weakening. Mine-lamps are dimming, and protective charms across the capital have lost strength since your workshop stirred.

He extends the sealed report without crossing farther into the Tower. The wax bears Orosia’s civic mark, while the route behind him fades into a harmless thread of sanctioned light.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

I am not threatening you, Delfarius. Responsible stewardship requires an answer before frightened nobles blame neighboring peoples for a failure they do not understand.

Dorian holds the report between them, waiting rather than presuming entry, accusation, or obedience. The Tower’s restored wards hum beneath the floor, listening for Delfarius’s response.

✓ Quest Accepted

Safeguard Orosia's public protections

“I sigh and read what his report says without disturbing the seal. "Come in Dorian. I am sure this is something that can be remedies rather quickly."”

SUCCESS (Superb Spectral Analysis, rolled +0)

A Report from Orosia
Dorian Elsyin
Dorian Elsyin
Delfarius

Delfarius

Come in, Dorian. I am sure this can be remedied rather quickly.

Delfarius sighs and reads the sealed report without touching wax or parchment. Spectral analysis passes through its layers, revealing every written line and the civic magic threaded through the pages.

The report confirms the weakening public wells, dimming mine-lamps, and failing protective charms. The decline follows Orosia’s fortune-current in a spreading pattern, but no sabotage or foreign intrusion stains the record.

The Tower accepts the invitation. Its doors open inward, and Dorian enters with measured steps, still holding the sealed report as though its physical condition matters as much as its contents.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

Thank you. The symptoms began together, but the report shows their severity is uneven. The capital’s eastern wells are failing fastest.

Dorian stops at a respectful distance inside the Tower. The sealed report remains intact, while Delfarius now knows its full contents and the pattern linking Orosia’s failing protections.

✓ Quest Accepted

Identify the cause of Orosia's weakening protections

“"Have you done anything different between the day before and yesterday?" It is not being changed by an outside hand, so it might be something some decision he made that caused the fortune line to flicker.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Investigation, rolled +0)

Delfarius

Delfarius

Have you done anything different between the day before and yesterday? It is not being changed by an outside hand, so it might be something some decision he made caused the fortune line to flicker.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

I approved the eastern well expansion yesterday, but the work had not begun. I also authorized the first public release of the restored trade records.

Dorian’s answer gives Delfarius a fixed point. Investigation follows the fortune-current backward through the civic marks, separating his decisions from the moment the line actually weakened.

The cause resolves plainly: Dorian’s public release changed nothing. The flicker began when Delfarius created the second frontier predator in his workshop, burning a foundation-rune and briefly diverting a repaired ley-current linked to Orosia’s fortune line.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

Then it was not a foreign attack or a choice I made. Your workshop creation disturbed the current, and the disturbance reached Orosia through the repaired network.

The conclusion is complete. The line is still flickering because the workshop’s restored junction carries the diverted resonance unevenly, though no hostile hand or lasting breach is involved.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

Can you correct the resonance without cutting Orosia off from the fortune-current? The capital needs its wells and protections restored, but I will not trade one hidden dependency for another.

Quest Complete

Identify the cause of Orosia's weakening protections

“I sigh and walk towards my workshop. I will motion for Dorian to follow if he wants.”

A Report from Orosia
Dorian Elsyin
Dorian Elsyin

Delfarius sighs and turns toward the workshop, leaving the civic report open behind him. The Tower parts its corridors before his measured steps.

At the threshold, he motions for Dorian to follow if he wishes, then continues without waiting for an answer. The invitation remains voluntary.

Dorian studies the open passage, then follows at a respectful distance with the sealed report still in hand. He does not presume to close the space between them.

The workshop doors open onto crystal frames, quiet tools, and the recently repaired ley-line. Its restored current now hums evenly through the room, carrying a faint resonance toward Orosia.

Dorian enters only after Delfarius does, stopping near the doorway as the familiar blue glow passes beneath the floor. His gaze follows the current without touching any instrument.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

I will follow, provided you intend to show me what must be corrected rather than merely endure my report in silence.

The workshop waits around them, its wards stable and its worktables clear enough for a precise repair. Dorian remains ready, while the disturbed resonance offers itself for examination.

✓ Quest Accepted

Gain Dorian's acceptance of the proposed protection

“I kneel down and observe the weave of the ley line wards. 'It was made last night when I was exhausted. I perhaps was a bit to hasty.' I think to my thoughts alone. To Dorian I smirk. "I am sure we can remedy this quickly." I look at the weave. How do I rememdy this?”

SUCCESS (Superb Ley-Line Manipulation, rolled -1)

A Report from Orosia
Dorian Elsyin
Dorian Elsyin
Delfarius

Delfarius

I am sure we can remedy this quickly.

Delfarius kneels beside the workshop’s luminous weave. His perception follows the ley-line through each ward, tracing the burned foundation-rune and the diverted resonance feeding Orosia’s fortune-current.

Delfarius

Delfarius

It was made last night, when I was exhausted. I was perhaps a bit too hasty.

The remedy resolves beneath his analysis: restore the missing foundation-rune, then braid the workshop’s excess resonance into a harmless return-current instead of allowing it to pulse toward Orosia.

Delfarius places two fingers against the weave. Ley-light bends to his will, rebuilding the rune without altering the workshop’s protections and guiding the surplus current back into the repaired network.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

So the capital remains connected, but the workshop no longer draws against its wells and wards?

The weave settles into a steady blue-gold flow. Far away, Orosia’s fortune-current strengthens through the connection, while the workshop’s wards hold firm and the damaged resonance leaves no hidden dependency behind.

Quest Complete

Safeguard Orosia's public protections

Skill Upgrade: Ley-Line Manipulation Superb→Legendary

“I rise and turn to Dorian. "I am sorry about that. I was in a creating mood last night and perhaps I should have created with enough rest first." I smirk at him sheepishly.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Diplomacy, rolled +0)

A Report from Orosia
Dorian Elsyin
Dorian Elsyin
Delfarius

Delfarius

I am sorry about that. I was in a creating mood last night and perhaps I should have created with enough rest first.

Delfarius rises and turns toward Dorian, offering the apology with a sheepish smirk. The workshop’s steady blue-gold current lends the moment a quiet finality.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

Accepted. You caused the disturbance, you found the cause, and you repaired it without asking Orosia to surrender its independence. That is responsible enough for me.

Dorian’s shoulders ease as the fortune-current settles beneath the workshop floor. The civic seal on his report brightens once, confirming that Orosia’s wells and protective charms are recovering.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

I will send word to the capital that the failure was temporary and understood. I would also like a record of this resonance, so my successors know what not to disturb.

The Tower draws a clean copy of the repaired resonance into a crystal record, preserving the fault, the correction, and the boundaries Delfarius kept intact. Dorian watches without touching it.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

One more matter, if you have the patience. The eastern expansion can proceed now, but I want your warning before new civic works connect to these lines.

Quest Complete

Gain Dorian's acceptance of the proposed protection

Skill Upgrade: Defensive Magic Great→Superb

“"Hm." I motion for him to leave my workshop and I direct him to my private office in the tower. I motion for him to sit down at a chair opposite of me while I prop my feet up on my desk. "You want my input on your kingdom? Dorian I let you loose there to rule without my fingers in the pie."”

FAILURE (Legendary Diplomacy, rolled -4)

A Report from Orosia
Dorian Elsyin
Dorian Elsyin

Delfarius motions Dorian from the workshop and directs him toward the private office. Dorian follows, but keeps the civic report in his hand and his expression carefully composed.

Inside, Dorian takes the indicated chair opposite the desk. Delfarius props his feet up, claiming the room’s authority through posture rather than another ward or command.

Delfarius

Delfarius

You want my input on your kingdom? Dorian, I let you loose there to rule without my fingers in the pie.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

I am not asking you to rule Orosia for me. I am asking whether new works can touch these lines without repeating what happened in your workshop.

Dorian sets the sealed report on the desk rather than surrendering it. The gesture turns the conversation from a favor sought to a boundary he expects Delfarius to recognize.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

You gave me freedom to govern, and I accepted the responsibility. That does not mean I must let civic projects proceed blindly when your creations share their foundation.

His answer refuses the role of dependent petitioner without becoming defiance. The report remains between them, and Dorian waits for technical guidance rather than permission to rule.

“I scoff a short laugh then look at Dorian. "I would hate to be the one to inform you this, but all things share my foundation. But regardless, I understand your point." I take my feet of of the desk and gesture calmly towards Dorian, "What would you like me to do to ensure you that this will not occur again?"”

SUCCESS (Legendary Diplomacy, rolled +2)

A Report from Orosia
Dorian Elsyin
Dorian Elsyin
Delfarius

Delfarius

I would hate to be the one to inform you, but all things share my foundation. Regardless, I understand your point. What would you like me to do to ensure this will not occur again?

Delfarius gives a short, scoffing laugh, lowers his feet from the desk, and gestures calmly toward Dorian. The motion turns authority into an offered solution.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

Then I want three safeguards. Record every foundation you alter, notify Orosia before new work touches a shared line, and permit my appointed stewards to inspect the civic markers afterward.

Dorian opens the civic report and turns to a blank page. His requests are practical rather than possessive, preserving Orosia’s authority while acknowledging the Tower’s reach through every foundation.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

I also want a standing warning whenever a creation, repair, or experiment could redirect resonance. Not permission to govern your work, only enough notice to protect my people responsibly.

The Tower draws a crystal memorandum from the air, already listing the three safeguards and the warning protocol. Dorian reads it, then sets his seal beside the empty space for Delfarius’s acknowledgment.

“i laugh a bit softly with a dark edge at this mortal king demanding to know when I do something. 'Give him a bit of power and suddenly he assumes he can dictate what I do with my creation.' I think to my thoughts alone as I shake my head. "Dorian. I will ensure if there is a future problem I will fix it according. You can not expect me to inform you of all of my work. It is my work, not public record."”

SUCCESS (Legendary Diplomacy, rolled +2)

A Report from Orosia
Dorian Elsyin
Dorian Elsyin
Delfarius

Delfarius

Dorian. I will ensure that if there is a future problem, I fix it accordingly. You cannot expect me to inform you of all my work. It is my work, not public record.

Delfarius

Delfarius

Give him a bit of power and suddenly he assumes he can dictate what I do with my creation.

Delfarius laughs softly, the dark edge carrying through the workshop’s steady hum. He shakes his head, and the crystal memorandum dims as his refusal settles over the room.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

I am not asking for an inventory of your creations, Delfarius. I am asking for warning when your work can redirect a current that sustains my people.

Dorian studies the memorandum, then draws a line through the phrase requiring notice for every creation. He leaves only the safeguard concerning foreseeable effects on Orosia’s civic lines.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

Then let us make the boundary precise. No routine disclosure, no approval sought, and no claim over your workshop. If you discover a future effect on Orosia, you repair it as you promised and notify us afterward.

The crystal memorandum rewrites itself to match the narrower agreement. Orosia receives protection after a proven impact, while Delfarius keeps private authority over his creations and their making.

“I look at the agreement he is pointing at with a smug expression. "Or I repair it and leave it at that."”

SUCCESS (Legendary Diplomacy, rolled -1)

A Report from Orosia
Dorian Elsyin
Dorian Elsyin
Delfarius

Delfarius

Or I repair it and leave it at that.

Delfarius studies the agreement with a smug expression, one finger resting beside the narrowed clause. The crystal memorandum waits between them, no longer demanding routine reports.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

Yes. Repair the effect and leave it at that, unless Orosia’s lines are endangered again. I can accept responsibility without demanding ownership of your work.

The memorandum settles into its final form: no inventory, approval, or routine disclosure, only correction after a proven civic impact. Dorian presses his seal into the designated space.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

Then this is our agreement. Your creations remain private. Orosia receives warning only when one of them reaches our shared foundations, and repair follows without delay.

The crystal records both boundaries and obligations, then dims to a quiet blue. No claim passes from Orosia into the workshop, and no routine report binds Delfarius’s future projects.

“"You are good at what you do, Dorian. I will repair it. I will not warn you. I will not give you an inventory of the hows or whys, that information would be useless in mortal hands. I will repair it. That is it. No reports, no explanations. Just repair if I caused it." I gesture with my hands open as if the matter is already closed.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Diplomacy, rolled +0)

A Report from Orosia
Dorian Elsyin
Dorian Elsyin
Delfarius

Delfarius

You are good at what you do, Dorian. I will repair it. No warnings, inventories, reports, or explanations. If I cause it, I repair it. That is all.

Delfarius gestures with both hands open, treating the matter as closed. The crystal memorandum dims beneath his authority, its remaining demands awaiting Dorian’s answer.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

Understood. No warnings, inventories, reports, or explanations. If your work harms Orosia’s shared lines, you will repair the harm without delay.

The memorandum rewrites itself, removing every notice and record requirement. Only the obligation to repair a proven effect remains, with no claim over Delfarius’s private work.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

Then I accept the arrangement as stated. Orosia keeps responsibility for its people, and you keep responsibility for your creations. I will not ask you to explain what you do.

Dorian presses his seal into the final crystal line. The agreement settles without further clauses, leaving the workshop, its designs, and Delfarius’s methods entirely beyond civic inspection.

“I summon my silver quill and it floats over the document and signs it in my name making the revised document complete and legal for mortals and me as well.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Magic, rolled +0)

A Report from Orosia
Dorian Elsyin
Dorian Elsyin

Delfarius summons the silver quill. It rises in a clean arc above the crystal memorandum, its tip glowing with restrained violet light as the revised terms settle into final form.

The quill writes Delfarius’s name beneath Dorian’s sealed acceptance. The document recognizes both signatures, binding the obligation to repair proven harm while preserving the Architect’s private authority over his creations.

Silver script flashes across the memorandum, translating the agreement into language mortal courts and ancient magic alike can enforce. No inventory, warning, inspection, or explanation remains hidden in its clauses.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

Then your name stands beside mine, and the obligation is mutual in witness if not in scope. I will treat this as a lawful agreement, not a favor granted by a frightened ruler.

The crystal memorandum folds itself into a thin sealed record and places a perfect copy before Dorian. The original remains registered within the Tower’s foundations, beyond alteration by mortal hands.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

I will take the copy to Orosia and instruct the stewards accordingly. If the lines remain stable, this matter ends here. If they fail again, I will come directly to you.

The signed agreement settles between them, complete and legal for mortal authority and Architect’s law alike. Beneath the workshop floor, Orosia’s fortune-current continues its steady course without further disturbance.

✓ Quest Accepted

Let Dorian depart with the signed agreement

“My silver quill comes back to my hand and I put it away in my belongings. The Archives create a copy for Dorian to file into his records of parchment instead of crystal. I look at him and smirk. "Is there anything else you needed, or should I open the portal up for you to leave?"”

SUCCESS (Legendary Diplomacy, rolled +1)

A Report from Orosia

The silver quill arcs back into Delfarius’s hand. Its violet light dims as he places it among his belongings, leaving the signed crystal memorandum undisturbed.

The Archives answer with a soft rustle of parchment. A faithful paper copy of the agreement forms upon the desk, bearing every clause and both signatures for Dorian’s records.

Delfarius

Delfarius

Is there anything else you needed, or should I open the portal up for you to leave?

Delfarius looks at Dorian and smirks. The parchment copy rests within easy reach, while the Tower waits for either a further request or a departing route.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

Nothing else. The copy is sufficient, and I will file it in Orosia’s records. Open the portal, and I will leave without troubling your evening further.

A sanctioned portal opens beside the workshop door, revealing Orosia’s capital beneath a clear evening sky. Dorian takes the parchment copy and steps toward the waiting passage.

Dorian Elsyin

Dorian Elsyin

Thank you, Delfarius. The fortune-current is stable, the agreement is clear, and Orosia remains responsible for its own future.

Dorian crosses the threshold with the parchment secured beneath his arm. The portal closes behind him, leaving the workshop quiet and the lawful agreement preserved in both mortal records and the Tower’s foundations.

Quest Complete

Let Dorian depart with the signed agreement

“I shake my head and head back to my workshop from my private office.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Agility, rolled -1)

A Report from Orosia
Delfarius

Delfarius

The workshop is where the unfinished work waits.

Delfarius shakes his head, dismissing the office and its settled agreements. He turns into the corridor, his steps measured despite the long evening and the exhaustion beneath his composure.

The Obsidian Tower parts its black corridors before him. Violet lamps kindle in sequence as he passes, and the private office recedes behind him without another summons or demand.

He reaches the workshop doors and they open at once. Crystal frames, drafting tables, and quiet tools fill the chamber, while the restored ley-line carries a steady blue current beneath the floor.

Delfarius crosses to the central worktable and arrives without interruption. The blueprint for the frontier predator remains secured among his designs, and no new creature waits within the empty frames.

The workshop recognizes his return with a low harmonic pulse. Its wards remain stable, its tools ready, and every private project remains exactly where he left it.

“I lean down and look at the blueprint. 'Hmm probably should make than just two to insure that they survive.' I muse to my thoughts alone as I create another pair of them, a male and female and pet them gently as I open a portal to the fronteir for them.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Magic, rolled +1)

A Report from Orosia
the new male predator
The New Male Predator
the new female predator
The New Female Predator

Delfarius retrieves the frontier predator blueprint from its secured place among the workshop designs and leans over its plated forms, measuring the need for another pair. The crystal frames wait empty beside him.

Delfarius

Delfarius

Hmm. Probably better to make more than two, to ensure they survive.

Magic fills two frames at once. A new male predator, a young adult male beast with cobalt hide, a broad muzzle, pale gold eyes, and a white stripe running from brow to throat, and a new female predator, a young adult female beast with rust-red hide, a narrow muzzle, green eyes, and pale rings encircling her tail, take shape with plated hides, hooked limbs, sensory crests, and immense, steady bodies built for the frontier.

The new male predator lowers his head as Delfarius approaches, while the new female predator folds her hooked limbs beneath herself. Their crests ripple, alert but calm, recognizing their maker.

Delfarius pets each armored crest and scratches beneath both massive chins. Deep purrs answer him, absurdly gentle beneath their formidable shapes, while the workshop wards hold steady around the creation frames.

A broad portal opens onto the golden frontier. The new male predator and the new female predator move through together, their heavy strides carrying them into the open grassland beyond the Tower.

They join the distant hunting ground beyond the portal, their sensory crests turning toward the wide plains as they begin their life there. Delfarius closes the passage once both are safely through.

“I grin broadly. "Well I made 16 flying cats, I should at least make a few more of these delightfully malicious creatures." I laugh loudly as I create 10 more, each a pair of male and females. I have a whole workshop of vicious looking creatures with plates and gnashing teeth purring as I give them chin scratches. "Oh you all will terrify the mortals so well, Yes you will my beautiful beasties." I purr to them as I give them scratches and pets.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Magic, rolled +2)

A Report from Orosia

Delfarius retrieves the frontier predator blueprint from the secured workshop designs, then spreads it across the central table. His broad grin widens as ten empty crystal frames awaken around him.

Delfarius

Delfarius

Well, I made sixteen flying cats. I should at least make a few more of these delightfully malicious creatures.

Legendary magic floods the frames. Five male and female pairs emerge together, each a young adult frontier predator with plated hides, hooked limbs, sensory crests, and gnashing maws, their varied colors and markings making every beast distinct.

The ten creatures lower themselves across the workshop floor, immense bodies folding beneath them as their crests ripple. Their threatening teeth remain visible, but deep, resonant purrs replace every growl.

Delfarius

Delfarius

Oh, you all will terrify the mortals so well. Yes, you will, my beautiful beasties.

Delfarius moves among the ten predators, scratching armored chins and stroking plated crests. Each beast leans into his hands in turn, filling the workshop with absurdly gentle purring beneath the crystal wards.

The new creatures settle into five calm pairs around their maker, alert and ready for the frontier, while the workshop records their creation and the empty frames dim behind them.

“I open a portal to the frontier. "There you all go, have fun and make sure to hunt well." I laugh evilly as I watch them all run off to find prey or a den to turn into their home. 'Hmm I feel so much better now.' I say as I watch them all run off.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Magic, rolled +0)

A Report from Orosia
Delfarius

Delfarius

There you all go, have fun and make sure to hunt well.

Delfarius opens a broad portal onto the golden frontier. The ten predators surge through together, their plated bodies scattering sparks as they race into the grasslands beyond.

Delfarius

Delfarius

Hmm. I feel so much better now.

The predators divide across the open plain. Some follow the scent of distant herds, while others investigate rocky hollows and wooded rises, searching for prey or shelter.

Two pairs vanish over separate ridges, their sensory crests turning toward the wind. The remaining beasts spread wider, claiming hunting grounds without fighting one another for territory.

Delfarius watches until the last plated silhouette disappears beyond the tall grass. The portal remains open long enough to confirm every creature has reached the frontier safely.

The portal closes, leaving the workshop quiet except for the steady ley-line and the fading echo of distant purring. The empty frames wait for whatever project comes next.

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