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Domini Chronicles: Mara

Fantasy·Silthalis

Mara is a Tavern hero

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The Disturbed Refusal MarkBeneath the third alder
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The Disturbed Refusal Mark
Seren Vale
Seren Vale

The shelter passage opens into an older eastern channel. Warm air carries ash, wet stone, and a faint trace of lamp smoke through the narrow dark.

Hadrik’s angular marks continue above the buried watercourse, but one refusal mark ahead has been freshly disturbed from the far side, its edges crumbled inward.

Seren Vale

Seren Vale

That mark was intact when Hadrik passed. Someone reached it from beyond the channel, then withdrew without leaving a full trail.

Seren raises her lantern without touching the wall. The light reveals damp grit pressed into the disturbed symbol and a thin smear of gray ash leading east.

Mara

Mara

The passage is warmer ahead, and the lamp smoke is recent.

Seren Vale

Seren Vale

Tarin is still guarding the lower ravine, so no one followed us from there. Whatever moved beyond this mark came through the older channel.

Seren Vale

Seren Vale

We can examine the disturbance, follow the ash, or wait and listen. I will not cross the refusal mark until we know what changed it.

“I examine the disturbed refusal mark, then " turn off the light and shhh a moment" I say softly”

SUCCESS (Legendary Perception, rolled -1)

The Disturbed Refusal Mark
Seren Vale
Seren Vale

Mara crouches beside the refusal mark and studies its crumbled edges. Damp grit lies within the symbol, pressed from beyond the channel, while gray ash trails east beneath the disturbed stone.

Mara

Mara

Turn off the light and shhh a moment.

Seren lowers the lantern’s shutter until darkness fills the channel. Warm air brushes Mara’s face, carrying wet stone, ash, and the recent mineral scent of lamp smoke.

Mara listens without crossing the refusal mark. Beyond it, water drips at uneven intervals; farther east, cloth shifts softly against stone, followed by one careful breath.

Seren Vale

Seren Vale

There. Someone is beyond the bend, and they know enough to keep quiet. No footsteps, no retreat.

The disturbed mark gives Mara its answer: whoever passed touched the refusal from the far side, then paused in the channel before withdrawing east. The ash trail remains clear.

“I advance quietly toward whoever is beyond the bend”

SUCCESS (Legendary Stealth, rolled -1)

The Disturbed Refusal Mark
Hadrik Voss
Hadrik Voss

Mara advances in silence, placing each step on damp stone beyond the refusal mark. The gray ash trail curves around the bend, and the hidden breath remains steady.

The channel opens into a shallow recess. Hadrik Voss, an elderly man with a lean, weathered build, crouches beside a hooded lamp, his gray hair tied at the nape and his travel coat stained with ash.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

Mara. I heard the mark answer you, but I did not know whether you would come quietly or bring the whole crossing down around me.

He keeps both hands visible beside the lamp. A narrow pack rests against the wall, and fresh gray ash marks his boots, while the passage behind him remains open.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

Seren is with you. I can hear her breathing beyond the bend. She should know I am alive, but not mistake that for safety.

Seren Vale

Seren Vale

Hadrik, you have three years of explaining to do. Start with why Veyra’s marks are guiding us here.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

Because Veyra is no longer searching for a ledger. She is searching for the people who refused to become one.

✓ Quest Accepted

Learn which people Veyra is searching for

“" interesting, last I heard you where in a flooding underground chamber, with Veyra, and a stab wound from Kynes." I say plainly. "I doubt she just let you walk away. So care to explain." I ask with a mesured look”

SUCCESS (Legendary Persuasion, rolled +0)

Mara

Mara

Interesting. Last I heard, you were in a flooding underground chamber with Veyra, carrying a stab wound from Kynes. I doubt she simply let you walk away. Explain.

Hadrik’s weathered face tightens. He keeps his hands visible beside the hooded lamp, while Seren remains just beyond the bend, listening in the dark.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

She did not let me walk away. Kynes’s blade opened my side, and Veyra sealed the wound only long enough to keep me useful.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

The chamber began to flood because I broke the ledger’s binding sequence. Veyra chose the records over me. That was the first freedom she ever gave me.

He touches the scar beneath his coat without exposing it. Gray ash clings to his fingers, and the lamp flame bends toward the eastern channel.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

I used the refusal mark to separate myself from her observation. The water carried me through an older channel, wounded, half drowned, but unclaimed. She could not follow without abandoning the ledger.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

I survived because Veyra valued her experiment more than my life, and because I finally made myself useless to it. I have been hiding ever since.

✓ Quest Accepted

Learn where Veyra’s search is headed

“Mara raises an eyebrow. “That's amazing. However, everything you just said is wrong.” She smiles coldly. “Kynes didn't stab your side, darling. He drove Soul-Cutter through your chest, severing your connection to Veyra without spilling your blood. Then he carried your immobilized ass into her chamber and dropped you in the water.” She folds her arms. “Kynes broke the transfer seal. Kynes confronted Veyra. And Kynes secured the evidence while you stood in the flooding chamber. Whatever happened afterward, I wasn't there to witness.” Her smile disappears. “So let's try again, Hadrik. This time, tell me what you actually did.””

SUCCESS (Legendary Persuasion, rolled -1)

Mara

Mara

That is amazing. However, everything you just said is wrong. Kynes did not stab your side, darling. He drove Soul-Cutter through your chest, severing your connection to Veyra without spilling your blood.

Mara

Mara

He carried your immobilized body into her chamber and dropped you in the water. Kynes broke the transfer seal, confronted Veyra, and secured the evidence. I was not there afterward.

Mara folds her arms and smiles coldly. Then the smile disappears, leaving the hooded lamp’s thin glow across her raised brow and Hadrik’s ash-streaked face.

Mara

Mara

So let us try again, Hadrik. This time, tell me what you actually did.

Hadrik’s fingers tighten against his knees. The lamp flame steadies, and his gaze drops to the channel floor before returning to Mara.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

You are right. I lied about the wound, the escape, and the choice. Kynes severed Veyra’s connection, and I was helpless when he carried me into that chamber.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

After he left, I crawled from the water and took the ledger fragment. I hid it beneath the refusal mark, then used Veyra’s own method to make the trail look like my warning. I wanted her followers to find it, and I wanted them to believe I still served her.

“Mara gives Hadrik a thin smile. “Darling, you seem to be confusing survival with innocence.” She folds her arms. “a fortnight ago ,Daggerford's council has already stripped Veyra of her authority, outlawed the Grey Gloves, and issued a warrant. And a surviving ledger-carrier testified that you ordered men to alter her memory when she refused.” She glances toward Seren. “So spare me the tragic tale of your liberation. You weren't merely caught in Veyra's machinery. You helped operate it.” Her crimson eyes settle on Hadrik. “Now, about that ledger fragment you conveniently stole after Kynes left. Where is it, and what exactly did you intend to accomplish with it?””

SUCCESS (Legendary Persuasion, rolled -1)

The Disturbed Refusal Mark
Seren Vale
Seren Vale
Hadrik Voss
Hadrik Voss
Mara

Mara

Darling, you seem to be confusing survival with innocence. A fortnight ago, Daggerford’s council stripped Veyra of authority, outlawed the Grey Gloves, and issued a warrant. A surviving ledger-carrier testified that you ordered men to alter her memory when she refused. Spare me the tragic tale. You helped operate Veyra’s machinery. Where is the ledger fragment, and what did you intend to accomplish with it?

Mara gives Hadrik a thin smile, then folds her arms. Her crimson eyes settle on him as the hooded lamp throws stark light across his weathered face.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

The fragment is beneath the third alder, inside a split stone sealed with gray wax. I placed it there after Kynes left, believing Veyra’s surviving agents would find it.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

I intended to draw them toward a false ledger route, then expose which Grey Gloves still answered her. The carrier’s testimony is true. I ordered the memory alteration, and refusal was the reason.

Seren’s face hardens. She steps fully into the recess, keeping her distance from Hadrik and the lamp.

Seren Vale

Seren Vale

You used the people who refused as bait, then called yourself liberated. The fragment is evidence, not a lure. We recover it without letting your scheme choose our next step.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

Take it. I will show you the alder and the split stone. No agents remain there by my knowledge, and I will not touch the fragment again.

Quest Complete

Learn which people Veyra is searching for

Skill Upgrade: Intimidation Mediocre→Fair

“" take us to it there." I say plainly”

SUCCESS (Legendary Agility, rolled -1)

The Disturbed Refusal Mark
Seren Vale
Seren Vale
Hadrik Voss
Hadrik Voss
Mara

Mara

Take us to it there.

Hadrik Voss nods once, extinguishes the hooded lamp, and leads them through the eastern channel. Seren follows behind Mara, keeping Hadrik Voss in sight.

They emerge beneath the third alder. Hadrik Voss kneels beside a split stone half-buried in ash, where gray wax seals a narrow hollow between its halves.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

This is it. I placed the fragment here after Kynes left, then marked the route to attract whoever still served Veyra.

Hadrik Voss breaks the gray wax and opens the split stone without touching the contents. A thin ledger fragment rests inside, its ink preserved beneath a dull protective film.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

The fragment is yours to witness. It lists transfers, altered memories, and three surviving routes used by the Grey Gloves.

Seren Vale

Seren Vale

Then we have the evidence. We read it as a record, not as Hadrik’s lure, and decide our next step ourselves.

“" agreed, there's nothing to witness, it's evidence, plain and simple. Let's call it what it is. With the archive dead, it is a piece of paper with information." I say plainly”

SUCCESS (Legendary Persuasion, rolled -3)

The Disturbed Refusal Mark
Hadrik Voss
Hadrik Voss
Mara

Mara

Agreed. There is nothing to witness. It is evidence, plain and simple. With the archive dead, it is a piece of paper with information.

The words settle beneath the alder. The fragment remains in its hollow, stripped of the old archive’s significance and reduced to ink, fibers, and preserved facts.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

Then call it that. No welcome, no authority, no sacred custody. Just a record of what we did and what was done to others.

As the protective film fades from the fragment, several lines blur at the edges. The information survives, but two route marks and a transfer date become unreadable.

Seren Vale

Seren Vale

A piece of paper can still condemn the people named on it. We copy what remains, preserve the damage, and never let the fragment choose our orders.

Cold seeps through Mara’s scarred palm as the fragment’s residue drains away. Her fingers stiffen briefly, but the paper is fully in hand, its surviving contents clear enough to record.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

The archive is dead. The record is not. That distinction is yours now, and I will not dress it in better words.

+ New Item Acquired

Ledger fragment

Director's note

Director's Note: Mara did not cast a spell in this scene or the previous one. She merely identified the fragment as mundane evidence. There is no established reason for magical backlash, stiffened fingers, or the protective film to fail because she rejected Archive terminology. The Archive is dead.

“I copy the fragment’s surviving routes and names, I question Hadrik about the surviving Grey Gloves”

SUCCESS (Legendary Reasoning, rolled +0)

Mara lays the ledger fragment flat on a clean strip of parchment and copies every surviving route, name, transfer notation, and date without embellishing the damaged lines.

The work is quiet and exact. Ink, fibers, and preserved facts remain ordinary evidence, while the copied record separates readable testimony from the two ruined route marks.

Mara

Mara

Hadrik, which Grey Gloves survive, and where are they operating now?

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

Three routes remain legible. One leads north toward the old quarry, one follows the coast, and one turns inland toward Daggerford. I know of four surviving Gloves.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

The quarry pair still move messages and supplies. The coastal pair handled altered memories and witness pressure. I do not know whether they still answer Veyra, but they know the machinery.

Mara adds those distinctions to the copy, marking Hadrik’s knowledge separately from inference. The surviving routes and names are secured in her journal, while the original fragment remains preserved as evidence.

“I nod as I work the numbness out of my hand”

SUCCESS (Good Health, rolled -2)

The Disturbed Refusal Mark
Seren Vale
Seren Vale
Hadrik Voss
Hadrik Voss

Mara nods once and flexes her numb hand beneath the alder’s shade, pressing each stiff finger against her palm until sensation returns. The effort leaves a sharp cramp along her wrist.

Her copied lines remain intact, though a fresh ink blot spreads across the margin where her recovering hand brushes the parchment. The routes and Hadrik’s distinctions stay readable.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

The quarry pair use an abandoned watch road north of the old cut. They move food, messages, and sometimes people who know too much.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

The coastal pair change names and memories through pressure, not always magic. Their last confirmed contact was south of the river road.

Hadrik points to the copied routes without touching the parchment. Seren studies the quarry line, then the inland turn toward Daggerford, her expression tightening.

Seren Vale

Seren Vale

Four survivors, three routes, and no certainty who still serves Veyra. We should preserve this copy, then decide whether any trail can be approached without warning them.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

The quarry route is closest, but it is also the one most likely to be watched. The inland road is slower and less predictable.

“" where is Veyra searching next, and what is she up to.?" I ask Hadrik”

SUCCESS (Legendary Persuasion, rolled +2)

Mara

Mara

Where is Veyra searching next, and what is she doing?

Hadrik studies the copied routes, then points beyond the inland turn toward Daggerford. He keeps his finger above the parchment without touching it.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

Daggerford is her next search. She is not seeking a ledger there. She is looking for the surviving carriers and anyone who refused her system.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

Veyra has divided the work. One pair pressures old witnesses into changing their accounts. Another follows names from the damaged records, offering protection first and demanding usefulness afterward.

Seren’s gaze hardens at the inland route. Hadrik marks a small crossroads south of Daggerford, then draws his hand back before the ink.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

Her purpose is reconstruction. She is rebuilding the network without calling it the Grey Gloves, finding who can be made useful and removing anyone who will not cooperate.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

The next operation is likely a quiet retrieval at that crossroads. A former carrier knows where the coastal names were transferred. Veyra wants that knowledge before it reaches a lawful witness.

✓ Quest Accepted

Protect the former carrier from Veyra’s retrieval

Quest Complete

Learn where Veyra’s search is headed

Attribute Upgrade: Health Good→Great

“" that is interesting of her, hide either in or near the town that wants your arrest." I smirk . "I am sure we're looking for her sympathizers or loyalists." I ask plainly”

SUCCESS (Legendary Reasoning, rolled +1)

The Disturbed Refusal Mark
Seren Vale
Seren Vale
Hadrik Voss
Hadrik Voss
Mara

Mara

That is interesting of her, hiding in or near the town that wants her arrested.

Mara smirks, keeping one hand beside the copied routes while Hadrik’s finger remains suspended above the inland turn.

Mara

Mara

I am sure we are looking for her sympathizers or loyalists.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

Both, but not in equal measure. Veyra is hiding among sympathizers who fear Daggerford’s warrant, while her loyalists conduct the retrieval.

Hadrik Voss

Hadrik Voss

Some believe she can protect them if they keep her network alive. Others know exactly what she did and serve because they profited from it.

Seren studies the crossroads mark, then draws a separate circle around it on the copied parchment, leaving Hadrik’s route untouched.

Seren Vale

Seren Vale

Then we should distinguish frightened sympathizers from active loyalists. The former may know where the retrieval happens without choosing Veyra’s cause.

✓ Quest Accepted

Determine whether the crossroads retrieval involves sympathizers or loyalists

“I draw soulcatcher and using the scabbard I draw a summoning circle in the ground , the start the chant of the dead asking for 2 spirits to answer. 1 is to look for loyalists and the other is to look for sympathizers.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Arcana, rolled +1)

The Disturbed Refusal Mark
Seren Vale
Seren Vale
Hadrik Voss
Hadrik Voss
the loyalist spirit
The Loyalist Spirit
the sympathizer spirit
The Sympathizer Spirit

Mara draws Soulcatcher and uses its scabbard to score a clean circle into the ash-dark earth. Seren and Hadrik step back as the boundary settles.

She begins the Chant of the Dead. Two pale figures rise within the circle, one armored in a torn gray glove, the other wrapped in a traveler's faded shawl.

The Loyalist Spirit

The Loyalist Spirit

I served Veyra knowingly. The quarry pair remain active loyalists, moving supplies and messages north of the old cut. A third loyalist watches the Daggerford crossroads.

The Sympathizer Spirit

The Sympathizer Spirit

I feared Veyra more than I followed her. Sympathizers shelter near the river road and in Daggerford's poorer lanes. They hide names, not weapons, and may speak if offered protection.

The spirits' words settle into the circle as separate impressions, loyal service distinct from frightened concealment. Neither presence reaches beyond the marked boundary.

Seren Vale

Seren Vale

That gives us a difference we can use. The loyalists guard the retrieval, while the sympathizers may know which former carrier Veyra seeks.

The chant ends without resistance. Both spirits remain available for one final clarification, their pale forms waiting beneath the alder's shifting shadow.

Quest Complete

Determine whether the crossroads retrieval involves sympathizers or loyalists

Skill Upgrade: Intimidation Fair→Good

“I ask both spirits if they wish to move on to the afterlife?”

SUCCESS (Legendary Persuasion, rolled -1)

The Disturbed Refusal Mark
the loyalist spirit
The Loyalist Spirit
the sympathizer spirit
The Sympathizer Spirit
Mara

Mara

Do you wish to move on to the afterlife?

The question rests gently within the circle. Neither spirit is pulled or held; the boundary preserves their forms while leaving the choice entirely theirs.

The Loyalist Spirit

The Loyalist Spirit

Yes. I served Veyra knowingly, and I have no defense left to make. Let my service end with my name, and let me go.

The Sympathizer Spirit

The Sympathizer Spirit

Yes, but not as one of hers. I hid names because I was afraid. I would rather carry no fear beyond this life.

Their pale outlines loosen without struggle. The torn glove and faded shawl become indistinct, while the circle remains clear and undisturbed beneath the alder.

The Loyalist Spirit

The Loyalist Spirit

Tell the living this: knowledge of wrongdoing is not the same as permission to repeat it.

The Sympathizer Spirit

The Sympathizer Spirit

Protect the frightened if they speak freely. Do not make their refuge another chain.

✓ Quest Accepted

Learn what Hadrik knows about the surviving Grey Gloves

“" Thank you my dear for you knowledge and your final words." I say with kindness.With soulcatchers but if it's hilt I perform the blessing of crossing, allowing the sports to rest in the afterlife.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Arcana, rolled +0)

The Disturbed Refusal Mark
Seren Vale
Seren Vale
Mara

Mara

Thank you, my dears, for your knowledge and your final words.

Mara rests Soulcatcher’s hilt against her palm and raises the blade within the circle. Her voice carries the blessing of crossing, offering both spirits a free road beyond fear, service, and borrowed names.

The loyalist spirit and the sympathizer spirit bow their pale heads. Their forms loosen into quiet silver motes, and the boundary releases them without tether, summons, or claim.

The Loyalist Spirit

The Loyalist Spirit

Then let my knowledge serve one final purpose. The watcher at Daggerford’s crossroads wears a gray glove beneath a traveler’s cloak.

The Sympathizer Spirit

The Sympathizer Spirit

The former carrier is hidden near the river road, in a cooper’s abandoned yard. She fears every offer of protection, because Veyra used that promise before.

The last motes rise through the alder branches and vanish into the daylight. Seren watches the empty circle, then looks toward the inland route on the copied parchment.

Seren Vale

Seren Vale

We have the watcher’s sign and the carrier’s refuge. We should reach the river road before Veyra’s loyalist does, without turning protection into another demand.

Quest Complete

Learn what Hadrik knows about the surviving Grey Gloves

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