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Adventure of Tuiwen 2

High Fantasy·Tuiwen

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Scene101
The Altered Instruction RevealedEdoras, Rohan's royal hall
The Altered Instruction Revealed
Bereth
Bereth
Saruman
Saruman
Galadriel
Galadriel
Lord Herun
Lord Herun
King Théoden
King Théoden

The counselors summon the office named in the hidden notation. A guarded woman, a human woman with a weathered oval face and light olive skin in late middle age enters, broad-shouldered beneath a dark blue mantle, with iron-gray hair braided close and a seal-ring scar on her thumb.

King Théoden

King Théoden

You will answer before the record, without counsel prepared to speak for you. State your office, your custody of the first altered instruction, and who delivered it.

Bereth

Bereth

I am Bereth, keeper of the southern protection office. The first altered wording arrived beneath a lawful docket, carried by a royal courier and sealed for private review.

She places a narrow custody tablet on the table but keeps her hands away from its seal. Galadriel compares its date with the three entries already preserved, while the counselors copy every mark.

Galadriel

Galadriel

The docket is lawful, but its private-review mark appears nowhere in the ordinary register. Who ordered that exception, and what did you do when the condition changed?

Bereth

Bereth

The order bore Saruman’s dictated phrasing, though it named Lord Herun as its authority. I copied the obedience condition into the schedule and reported the discrepancy only after the payments had begun.

The admission reaches the king’s tablet as a direct custody statement, not yet a judgment. Théoden orders the office sealed, its records brought under guard, and the next responsible authority summoned before the inquiry proceeds.

“I ask Bereth which courier delivered the docket”

SUCCESS (Legendary Reasoning, rolled +4)

Tuiwen

Tuiwen

Which courier delivered the docket to you, Bereth?

Bereth

Bereth

A royal courier named Iven delivered it at dusk, bearing the private-review seal. He signed the outer register, and I can identify the stable where he changed horses.

Bereth indicates the matching entry without touching the sealed tablet. The courier’s name, arrival hour, and stable mark provide a direct custody trail beyond the altered docket.

King Théoden

King Théoden

Record Iven as the delivering courier. Send guards to secure his register and stable, and bring him here under protection, not threat.

The counselors enter the name and route into separate witness tablets. Two guards receive the order, while Bereth’s custody statement remains sealed apart from the courier’s future testimony.

Galadriel

Galadriel

This gives us a witness to the delivery and a place to test the docket’s passage. Let Iven speak before anyone supplies him with the record’s contents.

The inquiry gains its next lawful step. The sealed docket stays untouched, while the courier’s trail is secured before rumor or pressure can reach him.

The Altered Instruction Revealed
Bereth
Bereth
Galadriel
Galadriel
King Théoden
King Théoden

The custody tablet lay beneath the lamplight, its testimony no longer buried beneath obedience and fear.

King Théoden

King Théoden

Seal the office. Guard every record. Summon the next authority.

Galadriel

Galadriel

The trail is clear enough for law to follow, and the docket remains untouched.

Bereth

Bereth

Then let it follow. I will give the inquiry everything I withheld.

King Théoden

King Théoden

And Iven shall answer under protection, not in secret.

So the first false word was named, its courier’s road recorded, and the southern office placed beneath lawful guard. Rohan’s inquiry moved forward through sealed ledgers, sworn testimony, and the patient weight of accountability. With Saruman’s design no longer hidden, the chapter closed in the quiet certainty that truth had found its proper road.

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