C.S. Lewis Surving and Overthrowing a 1913 British Boarding School.

Historical Fiction·Aaron Barndell

14 scenes
Scene7
Blugg on the TouchlineMalvern College playing fields
Blugg on the Touchline
John
John
Blugg
Blugg
Lewis
Lewis
Morris
Morris
Parsley
Parsley

The four boys rejoin the drill of sport on the hard, sunlit field, trying to look keen while the match grinds on around them.

Blugg prowls the touchline, puffed cheeks turning as he watches the younger boys for any sign of lagging, grumbling, or fear.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

The rules are not being enforced by the game, only by who is seen to care.

John

John

Keep moving, Lewis. If you stop, he will notice.

Parsley

Parsley

And if we look too cheerful, he will notice that too.

Morris

Morris

Then we are trapped between two performances, which seems very schoolish of them.

A shout rises from nearby as a weaker boy misses the ball, and the older fellows on the edge of the field look over at once, already eager to blame someone smaller.

I keep pace and copy the others

SUCCESS (Mediocre Agility, rolled +1)

Lewis settles into the line and matches the others, not flashing or falling back, just keeping the same strained rhythm as the rest of them.

John eases his pace by half a step, and Parsley copies the adjustment at once, so Lewis can mirror them without drawing the eye.

The four boys begin to look less like four separate targets and more like one awkward, obedient shape moving with the play.

On the touchline, Blugg’s gaze flicks over them, then past them, as if he has not yet found the slackness he wants.

A scuffed ball skids wide, and the nearest older boy barks at the runners to press harder, loud enough to make the whole field tense.

The boys answer with a louder burst of motion, all elbows, breath, and forced zeal, while the chair scraping deeper among the stacks seems suddenly far away.

I keep pace and match the line

SUCCESS (Mediocre Agility, rolled -1)

Lewis finds the rhythm and keeps it, his steps matching the line instead of fighting it.

The others tighten around him by inches, turning a scattered run into a single ugly discipline.

For one brief stretch, no one breaks formation, and the touchline has nothing easy to seize.

Blugg’s stare passes on, then returns with more care, as if the steadiness itself has caught his eye.

Lewis keeps breathing through it, but the effort bites, and his calves start to burn under the short grass.

Ahead of them, the scuffed ball is driven back into play, and the older boys shout for even louder zeal.

The line holds, but Blugg is still watching.

Lewis tries to focus less on Blugg and more on his friends. Matching them but preparing to pick up slack if he needs too.

FAILURE (Mediocre Agility, rolled -2)

Blugg on the Touchline
John
John
Blugg
Blugg
Lewis
Lewis
Parsley
Parsley

Lewis turns his eyes from the touchline and fixes them on the boys beside him, trying to borrow their pace instead of the older boy's stare.

It does not sit cleanly. His stride comes a fraction late, and the line loosens at his shoulder before he catches himself.

John shifts half a step nearer and matches him, tightening the gap so the pair still read as one unit.

Parsley runs on Lewis's other side, quick and careful, but he has to check his own feet to keep from clipping Lewis's slower step.

The little correction breaks the smoothness they had for a moment, enough to make the formation look worked at instead of natural.

Blugg

Blugg

There, that is the sort of thing.

Lewis keeps moving, but now he must choose between matching the others and covering for the stumble he has just made.

That boy is liable to receive corporal punishment for his insolence.

Lewis may be out of shape but he is still fairly agile. He tries to use the momentum from his stumble to correct his stride and close up the line.

SUCCESS (Mediocre Agility, rolled +3)

Lewis lets the missed beat carry him forward, then shortens his next stride and slots back into pace with the others. The line firms at once, his shoulder settling where it should be.

John mirrors the correction without looking over, and Parsley eases his own step to keep the three of them reading as one brisk schoolboy shape.

Blugg

Blugg

That is better. Keep it up.

Blugg turns his head away from them and toward the field, satisfied for the moment. The pressure of his stare lifts from the trio like a hand removed from a throat.

Farther upfield, the play surges on, and the boys’ line moves with it in a cleaner rhythm. A chair scrapes somewhere deeper among the stacks of bodies at the touchline, and no one in the group dares lose pace.

For this breath, they pass as obedient, attentive, and harmless, while Blugg watches for the next slack moment elsewhere.

They make it through the rest of the period, taking a moment to rest and catch their breath before they are due back inside.

By the end of the period, the line eases into a steadier jog, then a walk as the whistle’s work is done. Lewis and the others bend slightly at the waist, breathing hard but keeping their faces set, while the field noise rolls on around them.

The chair-scrape sounds again somewhere behind the press of bodies at the touchline, but Blugg is looking elsewhere now, and nobody calls their names.

Lewis whispers that that was way to close earlier. He's grateful the moved with him and glad he saved it.

SUCCESS (Superb Willpower, rolled +0)

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Lewis leans in, voice barely more than breath. That was far too close earlier.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

He adds, still keeping his eyes forward, thankful you moved with me. Glad you saved it.

John

John

John keeps walking, but his mouth quirks with quiet relief. We make a better line when we do not look as if we are thinking too hard.

Parsley

Parsley

Parsley gives the smallest nod, still breathing hard. I saw Blugg looking, so I stayed tight beside you.

Morris

Morris

Morris glances toward the touchline, then back to the boys beside him. The crowd is still there, but the danger has passed over for now.

The four keep their pace easy and ordinary, the kind of schoolboy drift that says nothing worth noticing. Behind them, the chair scrape goes on somewhere out of sight, swallowed by the field noise.

Lewis flashes a smile at Parsley and then asks the others if they think this will get any easier as the year goes on?

Lewis lets the smile come and keeps it light. The others stay in step, and the little line of boys still reads as dutiful enough for the touchline.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Will it get any easier as the year goes on?

John

John

A little, perhaps. Or at least we grow used to the shape of it.

Parsley

Parsley

I should hope so. If not, we shall all be old men before Christmas.

Morris

Morris

Best not look as though we are waiting for mercy. That is what catches the eye.

Lewis whispers that he really does miss the horses. Not because it's easier but just because he actually liked the horses.

SUCCESS (Superb Willpower, rolled +2)

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

I really do miss the horses.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Not because they made life easier. I just liked them.

The line keeps moving, but the words sit warmly between them, private against the field noise.

Parsley

Parsley

That sounds proper enough to miss, then. Horses are honest company.

John

John

Better than most company at Malvern, if we are candid.

Morris

Morris

Keep your faces schoolboy-bright, though. Blugg is still looking this way.

The boys do not break stride. The touchline watch remains distant, but their careful cheer now has a steadier edge, as if the little confession has given the line something real to carry.

Lewis says that if nothing else, he will definitely need a wash tonight after all the running. He hopes they don't have to smell each other all night.

SUCCESS (Good Etiquette, rolled -3)

Blugg on the Touchline
John
John
Lewis
Lewis
Morris
Morris
Parsley
Parsley
C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

If nothing else, I shall need a wash tonight after all this running.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

I hope we do not have to smell each other all evening.

The line keeps moving, and the remark breaks softly over the grass. It earns a couple of grins, but it also slips too clearly across the field, carrying a little farther than he means.

Parsley

Parsley

That is a mercy. I was beginning to think Malvern meant to season us with mud.

John

John

Then wash quickly, Lewis, before the school discovers the joke and taxes you for it.

Morris

Morris

Keep walking. If Blugg heard that, he has not shown it, but he is looking harder now.

Their pace stays neat, almost jaunty, but a small smear of sweat and dust on Lewis’s cuff marks the cost of keeping the joke alive under watchful eyes.

I keep pace and look properly enthusiastic

SUCCESS (Mediocre Agility, rolled +1)

Blugg on the Touchline
John
John
Lewis
Lewis
Morris
Morris
Parsley
Parsley

Lewis matches the line cleanly, shoulders set and step steady, while his face lifts into the sort of bright, obedient cheer Malvern likes to see.

The others catch it at once, and their own pace settles around him, the four boys reading as one tidy, spirited file across the turf.

John

John

That will do. Keep it there.

Parsley

Parsley

Look at us, then. Almost model schoolboys.

A faint bark of approval rises from farther off, not a summons, just enough to show the performance has landed.

Blugg’s gaze slides past them without stopping, and for the first time in several minutes he turns his attention toward the muddier knot of runners behind.

Morris

Morris

Move. Let them look at someone else.

Lewis keeps up the cheerful pace and uses it to disguise his scanning the sidelines for the power structures John mentioned

SUCCESS (Fair Perception, rolled -2)

The line keeps its bright, obedient swing, and Lewis lets his eyes travel with it, not his head. From the corner of his vision, he maps the touchline, the older boys, the clusters that gather and drift when a prefect looks their way.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Blugg is not standing alone. Two boys shadow him when he stops, and the rest seem to make room without being told.

A crude cheer breaks from the far side, and Lewis answers it with the same cheerful motion in his stride. The performance holds, but his left shoulder catches a jostle from Morris, a small hard knock that reminds him how little room there is to look elsewhere.

He still gets what he came for. The power on the edge of the field sits in the boys who circulate near Blugg, the ones who laugh before he does and fall silent when he turns. Their deference is visible, practiced, and enough to mark the rank below him.

Blugg

Blugg

There, keep it moving. That is better.

Blugg’s praise lands on some other knot of runners, not Lewis’s line, and the touchline shifts under it. The boys nearest him straighten at once, while the rest of the field keeps running under a new, sharper eye.

Lewis’s scan ends with a clear cost, a thin bruise starting where Morris clipped him and a little too much attention paid to the sideline. He has seen enough to know where the pressure gathers, and enough to know the moment may already be noticed.

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