C.S. Lewis Surving and Overthrowing a 1913 British Boarding School.

Historical Fiction·Aaron Barndell

featuring Paul Foot from the Tavern

29 scenes
Scene29
A Promise Beyond MalvernSchool House study
A Promise Beyond Malvern
Parsley
Parsley

The opened letter and correspondence sheet remain on the passage sill, beside the inkpot. Lewis, Parsley, and Paul carry the paper, tea, and silence into a nearby School House study.

Paul sets fresh paper on the table and divides the tea between three chipped cups. Parsley places his pressed-leaf notebook beside the sheet, as though an old promise has been brought to witness the new one.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

You need not promise your father more than a letter. Promise us only that the correspondence will not end when term does.

Parsley

Parsley

Not merely letters about surviving here. Ordinary things too. Books, weather, leaves, foolish discoveries. The sort of things that prove a life continues elsewhere.

Paul writes three addresses at the top of the page, leaving a careful space beneath each. Parsley turns the correspondence sheet toward Lewis, then withdraws his hand, leaving the choice where it belongs.

Parsley

Parsley

We can write beyond Malvern, if you want it. Not as a duty, and not as another rule. Just because we shall still be ourselves when the gates close behind us.

✓ Quest Accepted

Promise to continue correspondence beyond Malvern

Lewis eases back and says that he promises to correspond with them. They don't need to be afraid of that. He also plans to correspond with John, Morris, Edwin, and Francis. He knows Edwin and Francis really need the support. But he is absolutely livid with his father.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +2)

A Promise Beyond Malvern
Parsley
Parsley
C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Lewis eases back from the table. “I promise I’ll correspond with both of you. You needn’t be afraid of that. I’ll write to John, Morris, Edwin, and Francis too. Edwin and Francis need the support. I am absolutely livid with my father, but I won’t let that silence me.”

The words settle over the study, heavier than the tea steam and steadier than the afternoon light. Lewis’s anger remains, but it no longer stands between him and the people who are waiting for him beyond Malvern.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

“Then we make it practical. One letter from each of us before the first week has passed, and ordinary news as well as the difficult parts.”

Parsley

Parsley

“And no one has to earn a reply by being cheerful. A bad week is still worth writing about.”

Paul draws a firm line beneath the three addresses. Parsley opens his notebook and copies the promise without turning it into a command.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

“What shall we use as the first meeting place for the letters, if one of us is away from home?”

Parsley

Parsley

“A shared address, perhaps. Something dependable. We can decide it together.”

The blank spaces on the page now hold a future that belongs to all three boys, beyond the school gates and beyond this difficult term.

Quest Complete

Promise to continue correspondence beyond Malvern

Lewis eases back in his chair and sips his tea. He listens to them discuss the correspondence plan while he thinks about what to say or do regarding his father.

A Promise Beyond Malvern
Parsley
Parsley

Lewis eases back and sips his tea while Paul and Parsley compare practical addresses and posting arrangements. The quiet discussion leaves room for the difficult subject waiting behind his father’s letter, without demanding that he raise it yet.

+ New Item Acquired

Teacup

After a few minutes, Lewis asks them if they think he should press his father for answers?

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +2)

A Promise Beyond Malvern
Parsley
Parsley
C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

“Do you think I should press my father for answers?”

The question settles over the tea, plain and unadorned. Paul lowers his pen, giving it the seriousness of a matter entered into the record.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

“Yes, but ask for the truth you can reasonably receive. Do not let him turn silence into your duty.”

Parsley closes the notebook halfway, protecting the written promise while leaving the page open to whatever answer follows.

Parsley

Parsley

“Press him, if that is what you need. But you need not face his reply alone. Write to us before and after, even if all you can manage is one line.”

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

“Then that is our arrangement. Your letter goes to your father, and your next letter comes to us. We answer, whatever it says.”

The addresses cease to be mere plans. They become a route out of Malvern, marked in ink and shared by three boys who intend to keep it open.

✓ Quest Accepted

Press his father for answers

Lewis says that they are still 6 months from the end of term. He isn't going to see his father until then. His father expects him to wait 6 months?

SUCCESS (Mediocre Oratory, rolled -1)

A Promise Beyond Malvern
Parsley
Parsley
C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

There are still six months until the end of term. I shall not see my father before then. Does he expect me to wait six months for answers?

The question presses beyond the letter's polite wording. It asks whether delay is his father's decision, or merely the silence Lewis has been trained to endure.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

His letter says he will discuss it when you return. That is an answer about time, not an answer about truth. You may tell him plainly that six months is too long to leave you guessing.

Parsley

Parsley

And you need not make the request sound grateful. Ask what you need to know, then let us see whether he answers the question or only postpones it again.

Paul turns the correspondence sheet toward Lewis and adds a clean line beneath the three addresses. Parsley keeps the notebook open, ready to record the promise without claiming the decision.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

Write that you will discuss it in person, but cannot accept silence until then. We will read your reply before it goes, if you want us to.

Parsley

Parsley

And if you do not want us to read it, we will still be here afterward. Six months may separate you from your father, but it will not separate you from us.

Lewis eases at that. He says they are right. He just needed to hear someone tell him it was ok to write back that he can't wait that long to find out if his father cares about him. He was over here already trying to think of a way to get back home tomorrow and confront him himself.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +2)

A Promise Beyond Malvern
Parsley
Parsley
C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

You are right. I needed someone to tell me it is all right to write that I cannot wait six months to know whether my father cares about me. I was already thinking of going home tomorrow and confronting him myself.

The admission leaves the study quieter, but not emptier. Lewis takes the pen and writes that he will discuss matters in person, yet cannot accept six months of silence before receiving an answer.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

That says the truth without making a demand you cannot keep. Put the date beneath it, and we shall know when the waiting began.

Lewis dates the letter and folds it into the envelope. Paul adds his address to the correspondence sheet, while Parsley copies all three addresses into his notebook as a promise meant to survive the term.

Parsley

Parsley

This is not merely a plan for letters. It is our agreement that silence will not decide who belongs to whom.

The three papers now form one route from Malvern outward, and Lewis's reply is ready to be sent. Paul rests two fingers on the envelope, waiting to learn whether Lewis wants the others to read it before it leaves his hands.

Quest Complete

Press his father for answers

Skill Upgrade: Oratory MediocreFair

+ New Item Acquired

Reply letter

Lewis lets the others read the letter and critique it. The important thing for him is if his father cares about and accepts him or not. He needs to know he has a home to return too, because he won't be broken into submission. Left unsaid is how much he was beginning to hope he misunderstood his father, and how much this reply hurts.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +1)

A Promise Beyond Malvern
Parsley
Parsley

Lewis passes the opened letter across the table. Paul takes it first, then gives it to Parsley, leaving no sentence hidden between them.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

You have not written that your father must feel as you wish. You have written what you need to know, and when you need an answer.

Parsley reads the page twice. His finger pauses beneath the dated line, careful not to smudge the ink.

Parsley

Parsley

This does not beg him to love you. It asks whether there is room for you at home without your being made smaller to fit it.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

That is the important distinction. If he cares, he can answer plainly. If he refuses, the refusal will belong to him, not to your honesty.

Parsley folds the letter along its existing crease and returns it. Paul marks one small place where the wording could be clearer, then leaves the choice with Lewis.

Parsley

Parsley

I would keep it as it stands. It sounds like you, and we promised not to improve one another into strangers.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

Shall we send it tomorrow, with the date recorded in all three places? Then whatever comes back, none of us has to pretend this conversation never happened.

✓ Quest Accepted

Send the reply letter

Lewis nods. He thanks then both for being here for him. Lewis admits he is more than a little saddened by this. He wanted his next letter home to be him telling his mom about Parsley.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +2)

A Promise Beyond Malvern
Parsley
Parsley

Lewis nods, and the tension in his shoulders eases by a fraction. He thanks Parsley and Paul for staying with him.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Thank you both, for being here. I am more than a little saddened by this. I wanted my next letter home to tell my mother about Parsley.

Parsley

Parsley

Then she may still hear about me, when the time is right. I would rather be told honestly than introduced as part of a story you had to pretend was cheerful.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

And the letter need not carry the whole weight of it. Write to your mother because you wish to write to her, not because this answer has made the writing impossible.

Parsley places his notebook beside the sealed envelope. Paul folds the address sheet and sets it beneath the blotter, making the arrangement practical rather than ceremonial.

Parsley

Parsley

Tomorrow, we record the date and take it to the post together. After that, we write as promised, whether the house is kind to us or not.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

Three addresses, one record, and no one left waiting alone. Is that a promise you can accept?

Lewis nods abs says it is. He asks Parsley if he is comfortable with Lewis telling his mother that he has a boyfriend?

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +0)

A Promise Beyond Malvern
Parsley
Parsley
C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Lewis nods. He asks Parsley whether he is comfortable with Lewis telling his mother that Parsley is his boyfriend.

For a moment, the study holds only the faint ticking of the clock and the smell of cooling tea.

Parsley

Parsley

Yes. If you tell her plainly, I am comfortable. I would rather be named honestly than hidden behind some safer word.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

Then write it as part of an ordinary letter. Not as a declaration for the whole school, only as truth offered to someone you trust.

Parsley opens his notebook again and writes a single line beneath the addresses: Parsley is Lewis's boyfriend. He turns the page toward Lewis, leaving the pen beside it.

Parsley

Parsley

That is my consent, and it is also my boundary. Tell your mother because you wish her to know me, not because either of us owes the school an explanation.

The arrangement becomes concrete. Tomorrow, the sealed reply goes to the post, and the next letter home may carry Parsley's name without disguise. Paul gathers the address sheet, and the three boys leave the study together, their correspondence no longer merely promised but prepared to travel beyond Malvern.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

When you write it, shall we read that letter with you, or shall it belong only to you and your mother?

Lewis says it would mean a lot to him if they read it first. He trusts them and it helps him.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled -2)

A Promise Beyond Malvern
Parsley
Parsley
C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

It would mean a great deal if you read it first. I trust you both, and it helps me.

Paul breaks the seal carefully. The letter passes between three pairs of hands, its private words made bearable by their shared attention.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

Then we will read it with you, before it goes anywhere. We will not correct your truth unless you ask us to.

Parsley

Parsley

And if your mother answers, you may show us that letter too, or keep it yours. The promise does not require surrendering the choice.

The opened seal leaves the envelope unusable for posting. Paul spends one of his saved pennies on a fresh envelope from the house office, while Parsley copies the date into his notebook.

Paul Foot

Paul Foot

Tomorrow, we read the final copy together, then walk it to the post. After that, we write again, whatever answer comes.

By the time they reach the study door, the plan has become a promise with a date, a witness, and room for each boy to keep his own boundaries.

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