C.S. Lewis Surving and Overthrowing a 1913 British Boarding School.

Historical Fiction·Aaron Barndell

22 scenes
Scene21
Housemaster Catches the JuniorsLibrary corridor
Housemaster Catches the Juniors
John
John
Edwin
Edwin
Lewis
Lewis
Morris
Morris
Parsley
Parsley
Edward Harbury
Edward Harbury
The Housemaster of School House
The Housemaster of School House

Boots hammer closer along the corridor, and the Housemaster rounds the turn at once. The boys are already on their knees with buckets and brushes, and Edward Harbury is among them, scrubbing beside the juniors instead of looming over them.

The Housemaster of School House

The Housemaster of School House

Harbury, on the floor with them. What nonsense is this?

His eyes move from the wet stone to the line of bowed heads, measuring the whole company as if it were a single offence. Lewis keeps still beside the brush bucket, aware that any sign of flinching would be read as cheek.

Edward Harbury

Edward Harbury

Sir, we are cleaning the corridor. I set the others to it, and then I took a brush myself.

The Housemaster of School House

The Housemaster of School House

A senior boy does not usually set the example by kneeling with the juniors. Explain yourself.

The corridor seems to narrow around them. If the Housemaster accepts the picture before him, Edward’s authority cracks in public, and Lewis’s company learns that strength at Malvern can only survive by being seen, shared, and defended.

Lewis looks up and asks what is wrong with men who stand with and help their fellow men? Isn't that the way men should be? Isn't that what the scriptures teach them in chapel? Why would the Housemaster want anything else?

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +1)

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

What is wrong with men who stand with and help their fellow men? Is not that what men should do? Is not that what scripture in chapel teaches? Why would you want anything else?

The Housemaster of School House

The Housemaster of School House

Because order is not made by sentiment, Lewis, and a school does not run on boys deciding for themselves who shall lead.

Edward Harbury

Edward Harbury

He is hearing it. Perhaps he will see we are not shirking.

The Housemaster of School House

The Housemaster of School House

Harbury, stand up. If you mean to work, do it properly, and the rest of you will answer for yourselves if this is playacting.

Parsley

Parsley

He has not sent us away.

John

John

He is weighing it, not striking it down.

The Housemaster of School House

The Housemaster of School House

Very well. Go on with the scrubbing, and see that it is finished.

Lewis moves to Harbury and keeps scrubbing next to him

Housemaster Catches the Juniors
John
John
Edwin
Edwin
Lewis
Lewis
Morris
Morris
Parsley
Parsley
Edward Harbury
Edward Harbury
The Housemaster of School House
The Housemaster of School House

Lewis shifts in beside Harbury and keeps the brush moving, the water whitening under his hands. The Housemaster’s boots linger a moment, then pass on down the corridor while the boys work in a quieter rhythm.

Lewis smiles as the housemaster leaves. They stood together, and they won

Parsley sees Lewis turn his head and let a quick grin slip out, small and private as the corridor empties. Around them, the brushes keep whispering over stone, but the boys settle into the work with the easy calm of a shared victory.

Lewis quietly tells Edward that leadership isn't about age. It's about doing right by the people you lead. And that's why the system has to change. Why it will change.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +1)

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Lewis says, very quietly, that being older is not the same as leading, and leading means doing right by the boys under you. He adds that the whole arrangement has to change, and that it will change.

Edward Harbury

Edward Harbury

Edward glances up from the brush, the color in his face shifting as the words land. He does not answer at once.

Edward Harbury

Edward Harbury

Then he says that is the first sensible thing anyone has said to him in a long while.

His hand slows, then sets the brush down by the bucket. The wet stone keeps shining under their knees, but the line of labor loosens into a listening circle.

John

John

John looks from Lewis to Edward, weighing the moment, and the corners of his mouth turn with faint approval.

Morris

Morris

Morris says the trouble with the school is not merely who gives orders, but who pretends the orders are natural.

Parsley

Parsley

Parsley, half-amused and half-serious, asks whether the next sensible step is to make the sensible thing impossible to ignore.

Edward gives a short, rueful huff, then reaches for the brush again, but now with an air of choice rather than obedience. The corridor remains quiet, waiting on what they decide to call this new way of working.

Lewis grins and says that is exactly what they do next.

SUCCESS (Legendary Humour, rolled +0)

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Lewis grins and says that is exactly what they do next.

Edward Harbury

Edward Harbury

Then let us do it properly, and let it be seen.

Morris

Morris

Seen by whom matters less than whether it holds.

John

John

It will hold better if we keep the order ourselves.

Parsley

Parsley

That sounds terribly like a motto, which is usually a good sign.

Edwin

Edwin

He fingers the dark pebble in his pocket and looks from one boy to the next, as if counting them.

The brushes resume in a steadier scrape, but now the line feels chosen. Even kneeling, Edward works like one of them, and the corridor keeps its hush while the agreement settles into the stone.

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