C.S. Lewis Surving and Overthrowing a 1913 British Boarding School.

Historical Fiction·Aaron Barndell

16 scenes
Scene16
The Shop’s TributeA cramped village yard behind the shop
The Shop’s Tribute
John
John
Lewis
Lewis
Morris
Morris
Parsley
Parsley
The Older Boy
The Older Boy
The Shopkeeper
The Shopkeeper

The village shop stands at the bend of the road, its front window bright against the grey afternoon. Two older boys in Malvern blazers block the doorway, and the shopkeeper hovers behind his counter, stiff with unease.

One of the older boys taps the glass with a coin, then holds out his hand. The other watches the street, making sure everyone sees who owns the space.

The Older Boy

The Older Boy

You know the arrangement. Pay up, and there is no trouble.

Parsley slows beside Lewis, his mouth tightening. John and Morris stop in step, all four boys taking in the same ugly lesson at once.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

This is the school in miniature.

The Shopkeeper

The Shopkeeper

I have already paid what I can, sir. The man from the College was here yesterday.

The older boy smiles without warmth and turns his head, just enough to notice Lewis and the others. For a moment, the whole business hangs between them, a test of whether younger boys look away or stand their ground.

✓ Quest Accepted

Get past the older boys at the shop doorway

That boy is liable to receive corporal punishment for his insolence.

Lewis steps up to the door and asks to be let in.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +0)

Lewis steps in at once, taking the doorway with the calm of a boy who means to be admitted, not challenged. The older boy’s hand lowers a fraction, coin still in it, as he registers the move.

The Older Boy

The Older Boy

You want in? Then wait your turn.

Lewis reaches the threshold and the space inside the shop opens to him, small and warm behind the glass. The shopkeeper looks from him to the older boys, as if afraid of whichever answer comes next.

The Shopkeeper

The Shopkeeper

If the boy stands there, the others will make it trouble.

The lookout shifts aside half a step, forced to make room without quite surrendering the line. John and Morris hold back in the street, watching the opening Lewis has made.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

The door is no longer theirs alone.

A rule of the place seems to settle over the doorway, sudden and official, as the older boy’s show of authority hangs on his opening demand. Lewis is inside the mouth of the shop now, and the question becomes whether the others let him pass fully or try to crowd him back.

Lewis doesn't give them the option and pushes into the shop. He starts searching for fishing tackle.

SUCCESS (Fair Agility, rolled +1)

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John
John
Lewis
Lewis
Morris
Morris
The Older Boy
The Older Boy
The Shopkeeper
The Shopkeeper

Lewis slips past the edge of the doorway without waiting for permission, and the older boy’s coin hand hesitates as the body behind it has to make room. The shop breathes him in, smelling of paper, twine, damp wool, and river mud on boots.

He turns at once toward the tackle display, eyes skimming hooks, gut lines, and a brass reel in the window light. The shopkeeper watches him like a man hoping the smallest possible trouble is already done.

The Older Boy

The Older Boy

You heard me. Wait your turn.

But Lewis is already inside the shop’s line of sight, and the older boy’s warning has come too late to keep him at the threshold. John and Morris remain in the street, now only reflections in the glass and a pair of still faces beyond it.

The Shopkeeper

The Shopkeeper

If he is buying, let him buy.

Lewis reaches the counter and the tackle shelf in one smooth motion, close enough now to take stock of the hooks and bobbers laid out under the glass. The tribute at the door loses a little of its certainty when the boy it tried to stop is no longer outside it.

In the window’s faint reflection, a dark pebble sits in Edwin’s hand back on the street, while the older boy stands checked at the entrance and the shopkeeper waits for the next move.

✓ Quest Accepted

Secure fishing tackle

Quest Complete

Get past the older boys at the shop doorway

New Gift: Calculated Deception

Lewis points to the supplies he needs, hooks, lures, reels, etc. Enough for 5 people. He asks the merchant to ring him up. Ignoring the older boy.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled -1)

Lewis lifts a finger, then another, laying out the order on the glass with quiet precision. The older boy sees the gesture and gets nothing from it but a steady back and a boy who refuses to look his way.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Those hooks, the lures, and two reels. Enough for five.

The shopkeeper’s face loosens at once. He reaches for the ledger and the scale, as if speed itself might keep the doorway from hardening again.

The Shopkeeper

The Shopkeeper

Very well. I will ring it up.

Behind the glass, Lewis’s chosen gear is drawn together into a single purchase, no longer scattered odds and ends but supplies with a purpose. The older boy stays at the entrance, now looking like a man who has been made to wait.

The Older Boy

The Older Boy

He is buying as if I am not here.

John and Morris hold their ground outside, watching the shopkeeper’s hands move to the till. Edwin’s dark pebble glints for a moment near the street glass, small and stubborn in the light.

Quest Complete

Secure fishing tackle

Lewis pays for his purchases and moves to leave. Casually, as if discussing the weather, Lewis mentions that this isn't Malvern, and constables are on the prowl. He didn't know why they would bully the old merchant anyway. If he ever leaves town they would lose access to his goods and be shit out of luck on Saturdays. It's poor strategy.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +1)

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Lewis
Lewis
The Older Boy
The Older Boy
The Shopkeeper
The Shopkeeper

Lewis hands over the coins and takes the little parcel from the counter. The shopkeeper wraps the tackle fast, as if speed can keep the room civil.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

This is not Malvern. Constables are about, and it is poor strategy to bully the man who sells your Saturdays.

The Older Boy

The Older Boy

He says it like a lesson, and everyone here can hear it.

The older boy’s mouth tightens. He shifts one step back from the threshold, and the doorway stops belonging to him.

The Shopkeeper

The Shopkeeper

Quite so. I serve my customers, and I have my own roof to mind.

Lewis turns for the street with his purchase in hand. Outside, John and Morris make room, while Edwin’s dark pebble flashes once near the glass like a small, watchful eye.

+ New Item Acquired

Fishing tackle parcel

Lewis looks back impassively to see of the older boy leaves the man alone.

The Shop’s Tribute
Lewis
Lewis
The Older Boy
The Older Boy
The Shopkeeper
The Shopkeeper

Lewis pauses in the street and looks back. The older boy, balked by the shopkeeper’s plain answer, lets the doorway go and drifts off along the pavement, empty-handed and mute.

Lewis thanks the shopkeeper for his time and apologizes for the trouble.

SUCCESS (Superb Etiquette, rolled +1)

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Thank you. Sorry for the trouble.

The Shopkeeper

The Shopkeeper

No trouble from you, sir. Only from the sort that likes to stand in doorways and call it business.

He gives a short, tired laugh and sets the ledger flat, the tension in his shoulders easing at last.

The Shopkeeper

The Shopkeeper

You have saved me a miserable evening, truth be told.

Outside, the pavement is suddenly ordinary again, with the older boy gone and the glass no longer serving as a stage for him.

The Shopkeeper

The Shopkeeper

If you and your friends come by again, you may do so without apology.

He reaches for Lewis's parcel with a small, appreciative nod, as if the transaction has become something steadier than a purchase.

Lewis takes his goods and smiles, saying they will definitely be back.

Lewis takes the parcel, and the shopkeeper’s hands fall away from the ledger at last. The boy’s smile is brief but real, and the room feels properly his again, if only for a moment.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

We shall.

The Shopkeeper

The Shopkeeper

I should be glad of it.

Lewis returns to his friends and asks Edwin if he was readying for battle with that pebble. He smiles as he says it.

The Shop’s Tribute
Edwin
Edwin
Lewis
Lewis

Lewis steps back out to the pavement, parcel snug under his arm, and finds his friends waiting in a loose knot by the shopfront. Edwin is there too, pebble in hand, looking as if he means to hide it.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Were you arming yourself with that pebble for battle, Edwin?

The question draws a small, easy grin from the group, and the street feels lighter for it.

Lewis smiles at him and waits for Edwin to answer

Edwin glances up from the pebble and gives a sheepish little shrug, then the grin spreads to the others. The street goes quiet around the small joke, and their shoulders ease as they wait for his answer.

Edwin

Edwin

Only in case you asked for one.

Lewis says he noticed right at thebstart and appreciated it. He's glad they have each other's backs.

SUCCESS (Superb Etiquette, rolled +1)

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

I noticed it at once, and I appreciated it. We do have each other’s backs.

Edwin

Edwin

His mouth quirks, and he lowers the pebble a little. I am glad, because I was trying.

John

John

John gives a brief nod toward Edwin, then Lewis. That is the only sensible way to do it.

Morris

Morris

Morris lets out a small breath and looks from one face to the next. Better than standing about alone, anyway.

The shop window holds their reflections in a thin strip of glass, parcel tucked under Lewis’s arm, the pavement suddenly feeling less like a test and more like a place they have claimed together.

Edwin

Edwin

He glances down at the pebble, then back up with a shy, steady look. Shall I keep this on me, then, if we are walking on?

The question hangs in the warm street air, simple and practical, while the others wait for Lewis to decide the next step.

Lewis nods, he says he wants to make it to the stream in the next hour so they had better pick up the pace.

SUCCESS (Fair Agility, rolled +2)

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John
John
Edwin
Edwin
Lewis
Lewis
Morris
Morris
C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

We had better pick up the pace if we mean to reach the stream within the hour.

Lewis’s nod sets the others moving at once, and the loose little knot of boys breaks into a brisk walk down the narrow street, parcel steady under his arm.

Edwin

Edwin

He tucks the pebble tighter in his palm, then falls in step with the others, looking relieved to have a direction.

John

John

Then let us not loiter like town boys with nowhere to be.

Morris

Morris

Good. The river will not wait on us.

The shop window slips behind them. Boots begin to tap quicker on the pavement, and the lane ahead opens toward the fields.

By the time they clear the last cottages, the stream lies ahead within easy reach, its bank visible beyond the turn, and the question becomes who leads them down to it.

Lewis breaks into an eager run. Trying to find them a good spot.

SUCCESS (Fair Agility, rolled +1)

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John
John
Edwin
Edwin
Lewis
Lewis
Morris
Morris

Lewis breaks first, boots quickening into a run. The parcel bumps once against his side as he overtakes the others and heads for the bend where the stream comes into view.

John looks up in surprise and lengthens his stride after him, while Morris angles right to keep the whole party together on the narrow lane.

Edwin hurries along with his pebble still clenched tight, trying not to be left behind as the boys spill toward the turn.

At the bend, Lewis finds the first proper spot, a little grassy bank above the water with enough room to sit, watch, and keep the parcel dry.

John

John

That will do nicely. You have chosen better ground than I expected.

Morris

Morris

Yes. Here we can see anyone coming, and the stream gives us room.

Edwin

Edwin

Shall I put the pebble down there, or keep it ready?

The lane falls quiet behind them, but the bank waits for an answer, with the water running on below and the boys pausing at the edge of deciding what to do next.

✓ Quest Accepted

Settle the group at the stream bank

Lewis pulls Edwin into a brief hug. "You did good Edwin, you don't have to keep asking. Just pocket the pebble and focus on having a good time."

SUCCESS (Fair Agility, rolled +1)

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Edwin
Edwin
Lewis
Lewis
Morris
Morris

Lewis steps in close and gathers Edwin into a brief, brotherly hug, parcel tucked safely against his own side. Edwin stiffens for half a breath, then leans in and lets it happen.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

You did good, Edwin. You do not need to keep asking. Just pocket the pebble and enjoy yourself.

Edwin

Edwin

He is relieved by the certainty in Lewis's voice, and the pebble suddenly feels less like a weapon than a token.

Edwin slips the dark pebble away into his pocket, his shoulders loosening at once. John watches the exchange with a small, approving tilt of the head, while Morris's hard look eases into something warmer.

John

John

That settles it, then. We are not scouting for trouble, we are here together.

Morris

Morris

And the bank is a sound choice. Nobody can crowd us here without being seen.

The boys hold their ground by the water, parcel dry, pockets full, the stream running easy below them. For a moment, the whole party feels arranged rather than merely gathered.

Quest Complete

Settle the group at the stream bank

Lewis waves Parsley to come sit with him while he shows them how to set up the fishing kit.

SUCCESS (Fair Agility, rolled +3)

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Lewis lifts a hand and beckons Parsley over to the bank beside him. The parcel shifts under his arm as he makes room on the grass and starts laying out the tackle with quick, careful fingers.

Parsley

Parsley

All right, then. Show me.

Parsley comes at once and drops down close, knees tucked, eyes fixed on the wrapped gear. Edwin hovers a step nearer too, his dark pebble gone safely into his pocket, while John and Morris angle in to watch.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Here, this reel sits on first. The line goes through like this.

Lewis fits the reel into place and threads the line cleanly, showing each step as if he means to make the whole business plain. Parsley leans in with absorbed seriousness, and Morris gives a brief nod at the neatness of it.

Edwin

Edwin

He makes it look easy.

When Lewis turns the second reel in his hands, the brass catches the light and reveals a tiny maker’s mark inside the casing, the sort of detail a shopkeeper would usually never mention. Parsley spots it too, and grins as if they have been let in on a private joke.

I help Parsley set up the second reel. Guiding his hands through the motions until he catches on.

SUCCESS (Fair Agility, rolled -1)

Lewis shifts closer to Parsley and takes his hands in the work, turning the second reel so the maker’s mark faces down and out of sight. He guides Parsley’s fingers to the spindle, then to the line, correcting the angle with a light touch until the boy follows cleanly.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Like this, keep the tension even.

Parsley nods and repeats the motion without hesitation. The line slips through properly, the reel seats with a neat little click, and his grin widens at the feel of it settling true in his hands.

Parsley

Parsley

That is better. I should think I can manage it now.

Lewis lets go once the trick is caught, and Parsley keeps going on his own, fingers steady where they were uncertain a moment before. Edwin leans in, pleased, while John watches the clean finish with a small approving tilt of the head.

Edwin

Edwin

See, he has it.

The reel is now fully set, the tackle no longer a parcel of parts but a working thing in Parsley’s hands. Beyond them, the stream runs under the bank and the open afternoon waits for what they will do next.

Lewis helps guide Edwin's hands insetting up the next one. Not looking to leave anyone out.

SUCCESS (Fair Agility, rolled +1)

Lewis shifts beside Edwin and takes his wrists gently, guiding them toward the reel. The boy’s fingers stop hovering and settle where the line needs them, while Parsley keeps working a step ahead and watches the lesson with open interest.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

There, yes, keep that pressure even.

Edwin follows the correction at once. The line lies straighter under his hands, and the little mechanism answers with a neat, obedient turn.

Edwin

Edwin

Oh, that is it. I thought I should muddle it.

John looks from Parsley to Edwin, then back to Lewis, his mouth easing into a small smile. The parcel paper slumps open at Lewis’s knee as the second setup begins to look less like gear and more like a shared craft.

John

John

You have a gift for making it plain.

Parsley

Parsley

He does. Now Edwin has it too.

Lewis lets Edwin try the motion alone, and the boy keeps it steady. Around them, the stream goes on under the bank, indifferent and bright, while the friends gather closer over the next reel.

Lewis helps John amd Morris with theirs next, until they are all ready to start casting into the stream.

SUCCESS (Legendary Reasoning, rolled +1)

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John
John
Edwin
Edwin
Lewis
Lewis
Morris
Morris

Lewis turns from Edwin’s finished reel and crosses to John and Morris, taking up the spare tackle with brisk hands. The stream keeps flashing below the bank, but the work now gathers around the last two setups.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Let us get yours sorted, then we can all cast together.

John crouches at once, laying his gear in Lewis’s reach. Morris follows, patient and neat, holding still while Lewis checks the line and guides the reel into place.

John

John

He makes even the fiddly part seem ordinary.

Lewis’s fingers move from knot to knot, and John’s rod settles into readiness. Morris tilts his own tackle closer, and Lewis adjusts that as well, straightening the line until it lies clean and taut.

Morris

Morris

There, that is proper now.

Edwin looks on with the pebble now hidden away, grinning as the last loose bit of paper is tucked aside. One by one, the boys rise with their rods in hand, their spacing along the bank opening into a neat line.

By the time Lewis steps back, John and Morris are ready, the tackle is set, and the bank itself has changed state, from a worksite into a launch point. The stream waits in front of them, and the first cast hangs on the edge of happening.

I cast my line into the stream

Lewis flicks the line outward, and the float lands cleanly on the stream with a soft tap. John and Morris shift to make room, while Edwin leans in, pleased to see it go right at once.

The bank settles into an easy hush, rods angled over the water, as the first ripples widen and thin.

I let Edwin take the next cast

Lewis eases the rod into Edwin’s hands, and the boy takes the line with a careful little grin. The float drifts on, the others make space, and the shared turn at the water feels settled at last.

Lewis helps show them all how to cast properly. Watching them cast the lines themselves.

SUCCESS (Fair Agility, rolled +0)

Lewis takes the lead without asking for it, stepping in close enough to show the angle of the wrist and the pause before the cast. The others copy him, and the bank becomes a little school of its own.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

The line runs straighter when the wrist stays loose.

John flicks his rod out and the float lands clean, farther than before. Morris follows with a smaller, steadier cast, and his line settles neatly on the water.

John

John

So that is the trick of it, is it?

Morris

Morris

Aye, much better than flinging it.

Edwin tries again, this time copying the timing instead of the force, and his cast goes out true. The little pebble in his pocket gives a faint hard bump as he shifts his balance.

Edwin

Edwin

I can do that properly now.

For a moment all four lines are out together, each boy managing his own cast, each float making its own patient little path.

Then a rough shout carries up from the lane behind them, and the spell of the bank breaks at once as every head turns toward the sound.

✓ Quest Accepted

Deal with the shout from the lane

Lewis turns to look at the source of the noise

Lewis turns toward the lane, and the others follow his look as a figure barrels into view. The shout was for them, and the next moment is already here.

I face the runner and ask what he wants

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +2)

Lewis squares himself to the lane, rod still down at his side. The runner slows at last, close enough now to be read, and the whole bank holds on that shape.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

What do you want?

Runner Boy

Runner Boy

You lot are wanted. Not for trouble, just, come on. The older boys are at the shop, and they are talking about your gear.

John shifts a half-step nearer to Lewis, eyes fixed on the lane. The stream keeps slipping over stones below them, bright and unconcerned.

Runner Boy

Runner Boy

If they go now, maybe it stays quiet.

The boy jerks a thumb back toward the road, breathless and urgent. Behind him, the lane lies open, but the mention of their tackle makes the invitation feel like a test.

Edwin is just visible beyond John, one hand at his pocket where the pebble rests. The bank, the rods, and the path all seem to wait for Lewis to choose the next move.

Lewis asks Edwin and Morris to protect Parsley while he and John see what this is about.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled -1)

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John
John
Edwin
Edwin
Lewis
Lewis
Morris
Morris
Runner Boy
Runner Boy
C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Edwin, Morris, keep Parsley with you. John and I will see what this is about.

Edwin nods at once and shifts closer to Parsley, his hand leaving his pocket but not the pebble in his head. Morris steps in beside him, squaring his shoulders as a quiet wall between Parsley and the lane.

John answers with a brief look and a small movement of his rod, ready to go. The runner boy watches the exchange, panting, as if the message has finally been taken seriously.

Runner Boy

Runner Boy

Good. Come now, then.

Behind Edwin’s elbow, Parsley is left in safe company while Lewis and John angle toward the road. The stream keeps ticking over stones, indifferent to the new division of the party.

The runner boy jerks his chin toward the lane and backs off a pace, making room for them to pass. What was a summons becomes a route, and the bank is no longer the whole of the matter.

Lewis looks to Parsley real quick and nods to him. "I'll be back."

SUCCESS (Fair Agility, rolled -1)

Lewis glances to Parsley and gives a quick nod, the parcel tucked firm under his arm. His mouth opens just enough for the words to land plainly.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

I’ll be back.

Parsley

Parsley

He takes it at once, his face easing while he keeps to Edwin and Morris.

Parsley answers with a small, steady look, not reaching out, only holding the promise in place. Edwin and Morris keep their quiet wall around him as the bank gives Lewis and John room to move.

John

John

Then let us make it quick.

Lewis turns with John toward the lane. Behind them, Parsley stays put, guarded and visible, while the stream keeps slipping over the stones below.

Lewis and John follow the boy to whoever summoned them.

SUCCESS (Fair Agility, rolled +1)

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John
John
Lewis
Lewis
Runner Boy
Runner Boy

Lewis and John follow the boy along the lane, quick over the ruts and grass. The stream drops behind them, and the village shop recedes to a hard little strip of glass and brick.

The runner cuts between hedge and wall, then veers toward a narrow side yard behind the buildings. Lewis keeps the parcel tucked close, matching John step for step as the path tightens.

Ahead, the boy stops at a back gate and points once toward the yard beyond. A small knot of older boys is visible there, with one broad-shouldered figure turned to listen.

Runner Boy

Runner Boy

There, that is where they are.

Morris is not with them, but from his angle the little yard looks boxed in, and the older boys seem to have found the very place the runner meant. John draws a slower breath beside Lewis, ready but waiting.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

The gate is already half open.

Lewis and John reach the gate and stop at the mouth of the yard, where the older boys can see them if they turn. The runner holds just ahead, no longer guiding, as if the next word must come from inside.

Quest Complete

Deal with the shout from the lane

Attribute Upgrade: Agility FairGood

Calmly, Lewis walks inside.

SUCCESS (Good Agility, rolled -2)

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John
John
Lewis
Lewis
Runner Boy
Runner Boy

Lewis steps through the gate at once, keeping his parcel hugged tight as the runner slips aside. The yard takes him in, tight and ordinary, with the older boys now inside the same space as his boots.

John follows on his heel, and the half open gate swings farther back behind them. The click of it against the post sounds louder than it should.

Runner Boy

Runner Boy

They are all here.

One broad boy turns his head toward the gate, then another. The little knot in the yard breaks its own stillness and starts to look at Lewis instead of each other.

The Older Boy

The Older Boy

Well then, he has come in.

Lewis keeps moving two paces farther before stopping, and the parcel bumps hard under his arm. A faint scrape of paper on wood gives away how tightly he has been holding it.

The yard falls quiet around him, but not kindly. Someone inside shifts a step to block the back way, and the boys at the far side hold their ground, waiting for what this means now.

Lewis does a headcount. Assessing their numbers and physical size.

SUCCESS (Good Perception, rolled +3)

Lewis lets his eyes move once, quick and exact, over the yard. Three older boys stand in the open, two by the wall and one broader figure near the back way. A fourth shape is half-hidden by the shed, making four that he can see, with the gate behind him and John to his right.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

Four. One is built to shove, not run.

The broad-shouldered one is the largest by far, thick through the chest and set to cover the yard, while the others are slimmer and a little younger-looking than he is. None of them are as tall as he first seemed from the lane.

That measurement changes the yard at once. It is not a pack waiting to swarm, but a small knot trying to look larger by holding still.

Runner Boy

Runner Boy

He has counted them already. Good.

The runner, still at the threshold, edges his weight back as if the numbers have given him permission to breathe. His hand brushes the gatepost, and he glances from Lewis to the bigger boy, waiting for the first move.

Lewis also sees something useful by the back wall, a stack of cracked crates that could block a rush or a retreat. The yard is still closed, but now it is mapped.

That boy is liable to receive corporal punishment for his insolence.

Lewis asks quietly what they are interrupting his hike that he put so much effort into planning with College Head Porridge for.

SUCCESS (Superb Etiquette, rolled -1)

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Broad-Shouldered Boy
Broad-Shouldered Boy
C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

What are we interrupting my hike for? I put a good deal of effort into planning it with Porridge.

The question lands cleanly. A couple of the older boys shift their weight, and the broad-shouldered one looks past Lewis at the gate as if weighing whether the answer matters.

Runner Boy

Runner Boy

You are meant to come quiet. They are calling it in, and they want the gear seen.

Broad-Shouldered Boy

Broad-Shouldered Boy

A hike, is it? Then perhaps you should have stayed with your little party and not wandered into our yard.

At the back wall, one of the slimmer boys reaches for the cracked crates and drags them half a foot, making a rough barricade that changes the yard at once. John angles closer to Lewis, and the runner swallows hard, trapped between them and the gate.

Lewis actually grins. "This isn't a Malvern schoolyard big guy. I don't have to bow my head and take it here. You want to do this you best be prepare to lose an eye. I get to fight out here."

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +1)

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John
John
Lewis
Lewis
Runner Boy
Runner Boy
Broad-Shouldered Boy
Broad-Shouldered Boy
C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

This isn't a Malvern schoolyard, big fellow. I don't have to bow and take it here. If you want this, you best be ready to lose an eye. I get to fight out here.

Lewis's grin lands like a challenge thrown flat across the yard. The broad-shouldered boy stiffens, and the two slimmer ones stop moving their crates. Even the runner goes still, caught between the gate and the wall.

Broad-Shouldered Boy

Broad-Shouldered Boy

You talk brave for a smaller chap. But this is still our place.

John shifts his footing beside Lewis, while the yard seems to tighten around the half-built barricade. The crate stack holds at the back wall, but the back way is no longer open in any easy sense, and the older boys are now watching Lewis as if he has changed the terms.

Runner Boy

Runner Boy

Oh, no.

From above, the yard reads like a trap being measured, with Lewis and John near the gate, the runner boxed in, and the older boys fanned between wall and crates. Edwin's dark pebble is still visible near the lane edge where he clutched it earlier, a small, stubborn witness to the whole affair.

That boy is liable to receive corporal punishment for his insolence.

Lewis lets the ice of his malice back into his voice. He says with absolute certainty, "No, it's my place now. You just haven't figured that out. But you will. I'm willing to go much farther than you are."

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +1)

Lewis lets the smile vanish from his face, and the yard seems to feel the change before anyone speaks.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

No, it is my place now. You have only not understood that yet. But you will. I am willing to go much farther than you are.

The broad-shouldered boy’s chin lifts a fraction, then stills. One of the slimmer boys glances from Lewis to the crates as if measuring distance instead of loyalty.

Broad-Shouldered Boy

Broad-Shouldered Boy

You are a bold little brute, then.

John edges half a step nearer Lewis, keeping his rod low. The runner boy swallows and presses himself flatter against the gatepost, while Edwin’s dark pebble remains a hard little dot in the lane beyond.

Runner Boy

Runner Boy

He means it.

The older boys do not advance, but the crates and wall no longer look like their whole answer. The yard has changed, Lewis’s claim hanging over it like a fresh order.

Lewis takes a step forward. He says simply, "I always speak sincerely. I was threatening a black eye. I will take that eye. With my fishing hook specifically."

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +1)

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John
John
Lewis
Lewis
Runner Boy
Runner Boy
Broad-Shouldered Boy
Broad-Shouldered Boy

Lewis steps forward into the yard’s center, and the little advance shifts the whole balance of it.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

I always speak sincerely. I was threatening a black eye. I will take that eye, with my fishing hook specifically.

The broad-shouldered boy stops broadening. The nearer boys draw back from the crates, leaving a thin, clear lane between the gate and the wall.

Broad-Shouldered Boy

Broad-Shouldered Boy

You mean to say that plainly?

John holds his ground beside Lewis, rod low and ready, while the runner boy flattens harder against the gatepost as if the boards might swallow him.

Far beyond the gate, Edwin’s pebble is still a dark dot in the lane, and the yard has gone very still around the hook in Lewis’s words.

Runner Boy

Runner Boy

He does.

That boy is liable to receive corporal punishment for his insolence.

Lewis draws a fishing hook from the parcel. "I do

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John
John
Lewis
Lewis
Runner Boy
Runner Boy
Broad-Shouldered Boy
Broad-Shouldered Boy
C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

I do.

Lewis eases the parcel open and lifts out the hook at last. The older boys see the gleam of it, and the yard tightens around the simple, ugly little tool.

Broad-Shouldered Boy

Broad-Shouldered Boy

That will do.

That boy is liable to receive corporal punishment for his insolence.

Lewis says simply he intends to change things around here. Even if he has to do it by force. He may be small now but he won't always be. And he is already as dark inside as the worst of them. But he would rather it not come to that. It's a waste of both their time and resources.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +2)

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John
John
Lewis
Lewis
Runner Boy
Runner Boy
Broad-Shouldered Boy
Broad-Shouldered Boy
C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

He says he means to change things around here, even if force is what it takes.

C. S. Lewis

C. S. Lewis

He adds that he may be small now, but he will not always be. He is already as dark inside as the worst of them, though he would rather it not come to that.

The yard goes still. The older boys do not rush him, but their feet shift, and the rough little barricade by the back wall suddenly looks less like confidence and more like a habit under strain.

Broad-Shouldered Boy

Broad-Shouldered Boy

You are a bold little brute.

Lewis keeps the hook raised. John stays close enough to count as a promise, and the runner at the gate is now plainly boxed in by the law of the place, miserable enough to draw notice from the wrong sort of authority.

Then the broad-shouldered boy gives a short, cutting glance toward the gate and the lane beyond, and the whole yard feels as if it has to decide whether this is still a shakedown or a retreat.

That boy is liable to receive corporal punishment for his insolence.

Lewis says he wouldn't consider himself a brute. Brutes may be big but they are mostly bluster. Om the ither hand, every threat from Lewis is a promise. Malvern will change. And what happens to them will be determined by whether they try to stand in his way.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +0)

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