Dawn of Man, Dinosaur Era Fantasy - Descent into the Basin of Shadows

Fantasy·Kenny Brewster

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Trapped at the Crawlway LipThe Pit
Trapped at the Crawlway Lip
Sefru
Sefru
Huryol
Huryol
The Utahraptor
The Utahraptor

Hhannvis hauls for the crawlway throat, hunched low on the ledge. Below, the blind alpha raptor turns away from the rock and bolts toward the cowering refugees.

The yellow-green raptor breaks from its feed, a torn mouthful of flesh still between its teeth. It swallows, then snaps its head toward the lip where Hhannvis is climbing.

It lunges hard across the gap and barely clears the jump. Its jaws clamp onto Hhannvis's forearm, not deep enough to tear free, but enough to stop his climb cold.

Sefru

Sefru

Pull him now! Get him into the tunnel!

Huryol

Huryol

He is hooked. Haul with me!

Hhannvis hangs half inside, half outside the safe throat, his arm pinned in the raptor's bite as the rope ladder continues to come up behind him.

The containment core still tethers him. If he slips back, the escape line breaks with him.

✓ Quest Accepted

Break free into the crawlway

I lung the bitten arm over the ledge in a rush and snap it still to fling

SUCCESS (Great Strength, rolled +3)

Trapped at the Crawlway Lip
Sefru
Sefru
Huryol
Huryol

Hhannvis snaps the bitten arm upward and locks it hard over the lip. The raptor’s teeth skid off stone, its grip broken by the sudden wrench.

Huryol and Sefru heave at once, dragging his shoulders into the crawlway throat while the rope ladder jerks higher behind him.

His forearm clears the edge, and the beast loses purchase. Loose pebbles skitter down into the dark as its jaws bite only air.

The tunnel accepts him. Hhannvis slides belly-first over the threshold, spear scraping stone, frost-light flickering across the narrow walls.

Sefru

Sefru

Move, move, get inside!

Huryol

Huryol

He is in. Pull the line clear!

Behind him, the yellow-green raptor snaps at empty space and recoils from the tunnel mouth, left below the ledge while the crawlway closes around Hhannvis.

Quest Complete

Break free into the crawlway

Attribute Upgrade: Strength GreatSuperb

I take myself inside the entry and ready for another attack from it. I tell them to press on

SUCCESS (Superb Willpower, rolled -2)

Trapped at the Crawlway Lip
Sefru
Sefru
Huryol
Huryol

Hhannvis plants his boots in the crawlway and squares his shoulder to the opening, spear still ready in one hand. The tunnel is his ground now, narrow but held.

Hhannvis

Hhannvis

Press on.

Sefru jerks his head deeper into the passage and starts hauling the line after him, moving on the command at once.

Huryol

Huryol

Keep low. I am right behind you.

A harsh scrape shudders at the mouth behind them, then stops short. The yellow-green raptor cannot fit its rage through the choke point.

The crawlway is tighter than the ledge, but it holds.

Hhannvis’s bitten arm throbs as he shifts his grip, and a dark smear dots the stone where the wound brushes the wall. The line goes taut, then slips free into the dark.

Sefru

Sefru

Move, Hhannvis. We keep going now.

✓ Quest Accepted

Escape the Utahraptor

I escape

SUCCESS (Good Athletics, rolled +3)

Trapped at the Crawlway Lip
Sefru
Sefru
Huryol
Huryol

Hhannvis drives forward into the crawlway, his boots finding purchase where the tunnel narrows. The stone swallows the ledge behind him, and the raptor stays outside, cut off by the choke point.

Hhannvis

Hhannvis

Keep moving.

Sefru answers by yanking the line deeper into the dark, clearing the last drag of it from the mouth.

Huryol

Huryol

That’s it, stay down. The tunnel holds.

Hhannvis slips past the worst of the blood-slick stones, his wounded arm tucked in close as he gains the safer bend ahead.

Behind them, the entrance remains jammed with rock and shadow. The raptor cannot force its way through, and its scrape fades to a frustrated hiss.

Sefru

Sefru

Clear. Hhannvis, you’re through.

Quest Complete

Escape the Utahraptor

I cast lesser restoration on the wound

SUCCESS (Great Arcana, rolled +1)

Trapped at the Crawlway Lip
Sefru
Sefru
Huryol
Huryol

Hhannvis stops under the crawlway’s low throat and presses his free hand to the bite. Frost-light gathers in a thin ring around his fingers, then sinks into the wound with a quiet pulse.

Hhannvis

Hhannvis

The bite is closing.

The blood at the edge of the stone darkens, then stills. The sting drains away, and the torn flesh knits clean beneath his palm.

Sefru

Sefru

By the basin, that’s better. Keep your arm tight, just for a moment.

Huryol

Huryol

Good. We need you steady if that tunnel shifts.

The crawlway answers with a soft grind from deeper ahead, as if the old stone notices the healing and listens. Behind them, the blocked mouth remains dead to the raptor.

Sefru

Sefru

Something moved in the walls. Hhannvis, do you feel that?

✓ Quest Accepted

Investigate the fortress

I keep my senses sharp and investigate

FAILURE (Great Perception, rolled -3)

Trapped at the Crawlway Lip
Sefru
Sefru
Huryol
Huryol

Hhannvis keeps still and listens. The crawlway breathes around him, stone ticking softly as if something inside it is turning in its sleep.

Hhannvis

Hhannvis

The sound is not from the mouth behind us.

He reaches toward the wall, but the tunnel answers first. A seam of dust slips loose, then the passage gives a shallow shudder under his hand.

Sefru recoils a step, eyes on the darker seam ahead. Huryol braces one palm to the stone and leans in, listening for the next shift.

Sefru

Sefru

That is not just settling. Something under this crawlway is moving it.

The floor does not open, but the right wall slides a finger-width out of alignment, revealing a thin black line of deeper space before grinding back into place.

Hhannvis cannot read the mechanism cleanly before it seals again. The tunnel has made itself harder to study, and now the wall waits in tense silence.

I cast Din

SUCCESS (Great Arcana, rolled +0)

Trapped at the Crawlway Lip
Sefru
Sefru
Huryol
Huryol

Hhannvis murmurs Din into the stone. The crawlway hushes at once, and the wall answers with a dull, listening pulse.

Hhannvis

Hhannvis

There is a chamber behind it.

The seam widens in his senses before it widens in sight, showing a shallow maintenance hollow packed with old dust, cut marks, and a tight row of locking grooves.

But the spell bites back. Frost crawls over his knuckles, and a thin crack of blue light flashes along the stone, loud enough to make the tunnel shiver.

Sefru

Sefru

Hhannvis, it heard that.

Huryol

Huryol

And it is not empty. Something has used this space before us.

The hidden hollow seals again, but not before Hhannvis catches the shape of a narrow handhold and a scorched glyph inside. The way is known now, even if the wall is angry about it.

I investigate it

SUCCESS (Great Perception, rolled -1)

Trapped at the Crawlway Lip
Sefru
Sefru
Huryol
Huryol

Hhannvis presses closer to the seam, and the crawlway gives him just enough space to work. The hidden hollow stays open in his senses, shallow but real, with scrape marks that show repeated use.

Hhannvis

Hhannvis

The grooves are worn by hands, not teeth.

He finds the narrow handhold and the scorched glyph at once. The symbol is old, deliberate, and tied to the locking pattern, as if someone marked the way for those who knew where to look.

The stone bites back as he studies it, frosting his fingertips and stealing warmth from the knuckles he braces against the wall. A dry crack of blue light spits through the seam, then dies.

Sefru

Sefru

That mark is basin-made. Somebody here wanted it found.

Huryol

Huryol

And wanted it hidden again afterward. The wall is not just a wall.

Behind the trio, the crawlway floor shudders once, a hard reminder of the chamber below. The hidden hollow is mapped now, but the cold sting on Hhannvis's hand deepens, and the seam seals tighter than before.

I use a technique by my people of regenerating mana, i perform it i get in push up postition, low, and hold it. Transfering stamina through isometric stress and precise practiced method

SUCCESS (Great Arcana, rolled +1)

Trapped at the Crawlway Lip
Sefru
Sefru
Huryol
Huryol

Hhannvis lowers himself into the practiced stance, chest close to the stone, spear laid within reach. The crawlway tightens around his breath, but his body settles into still strain instead of panic.

Hhannvis

Hhannvis

The pressure is steady enough to work with.

He holds the isometric pose. Slow, deliberate force gathers through his shoulders, back, and core, then sinks inward as if the effort itself becomes a channel.

Sefru

Sefru

That looks like temple breathing. My elders used to call it a thief of fatigue.

Huryol

Huryol

Or a maker of it, if the posture is wrong. He keeps it perfect.

Warmth returns in a measured pulse, not wild, but clean. The frost on Hhannvis’s hand thins and pulls back from the knuckles as mana settles deeper under his skin.

Sefru leans closer, watching the change with new respect, while Huryol eases his stance by a fraction. The sealed seam stays shut, and the crawlway grows quiet enough for the next word to matter.

I continue, embracing the floor as a ceiling upsidedown, static to the planet

SUCCESS (Good Athletics, rolled +0)

Trapped at the Crawlway Lip
Sefru
Sefru
Huryol
Huryol

Hhannvis drives forward through the crawlway, body flattened to the stone as if the tunnel itself is his roof. His shoulders glide, then lock, then glide again, and his spear slides with him in a careful line.

The motion carries him into the next reach of passage. Behind him, the sealed seam stays shut, and ahead the hollow narrows around a faintly warmer patch of stone.

A gritty rasp shivers under his weight, not a collapse, but a dry stone note that carries too far in the tight dark. A dusting of black powder sifts down from the ceiling onto his cape and forearms.

Sefru

Sefru

Easy. The wall heard that.

Huryol

Huryol

He is through. Now keep moving, before anything answers.

Hhannvis reaches the warmer patch and settles there, braced and fully inside the new section of crawlway. The cost lands at once, a shallow scrape along his forearm where stone bites through the sleeve, but the passage remains his.

Ahead, the tunnel bends toward a darker pocket where the maintenance hollow was mapped. Sefru and Huryol both turn that way, waiting for Hhannvis to choose whether to press on or stop and inspect it.

✓ Quest Accepted

Explore the dark pocket in the crawlway

I press on, investigating

SUCCESS (Great Perception, rolled -1)

Trapped at the Crawlway Lip
Sefru
Sefru
Huryol
Huryol

Hhannvis shifts forward into the darker pocket, and the crawlway opens just enough for his shoulders to pass. The warmer stone gives way to a worked edge, cut straighter than the surrounding rock.

His hand finds the maintenance hollow. Inside, a scorched glyph sits on a flat panel, half-burned and half-polished, with tool marks around it like something was repaired in haste.

Hhannvis

Hhannvis

This is built, not natural.

A thin seam beside the glyph loosens under his touch. Dust drops from the lip, and a stale breath of colder air leaks from deeper inside.

Sefru

Sefru

There. It opens for him.

Huryol

Huryol

Then we have the way. But keep your head low, something heard us already.

The hollow yawns wide enough to show a slanted maintenance crawl beyond it, and the black dust on Hhannvis's forearm stings where the fresh scrape breaks the skin. Behind the opening, the tunnel’s darkness does not sit still.

Quest Complete

Explore the dark pocket in the crawlway

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