Joyous Hunting

Slice of Life·Hunter McCready

Tavern hero

56 scenes
Scene47
The Evidence in the GardenHomestead garden beside the barn
The Evidence in the Garden
Nora
Nora
Mrs. Gable
Mrs. Gable

By the garden beds, Mrs. Gable keeps working the soil as if the barn full of papers never happened. Hunter stops at the fence line with the routed envelope and the vendor list in hand.

Hunter McCready

Hunter McCready

These marks. What are they for?

He turns the envelope so the corner stamp faces her. Nora stands a few steps behind him, eyes fixed on the routing code she warned him about.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

She knows exactly what this means. Too much is unraveling too fast.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

It is a tracking protocol. Office correspondence gets logged, routed, and cross-checked. I was told it was routine.

Hunter lays the vendor list on the fence rail. The names on it sit between the tomatoes and the garden hose like evidence that refuses to be ignored.

Hunter McCready

Hunter McCready

Routine does not put people on a removal list.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

No. It does not. I passed along what they asked for, and I kept telling myself it would stay quiet.

For a moment, the only sound is the soft scrape of her gloves against the dirt. Nora holds still, reading the pause like a final answer.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

She should have said less. The office will know now.

✓ Quest Accepted

Learn how far the office controls Mrs. Gable

I point to the names on the list and ask her who else she reported to the office.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +0)

The Evidence in the Garden
Nora
Nora
Mrs. Gable
Mrs. Gable

Hunter taps the list with one finger, then draws a slow line beneath the names. He does not raise his voice, but the question lands hard in the quiet garden.

Hunter McCready

Hunter McCready

Who else did you report to, Mrs. Gable?

Mrs. Gable's shoulders sink. She looks past him toward the barn, then back at the dirt clinging to her gloves.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

At first, just the office desk clerk. Then a courier with a logbook started coming by. They said it was only routing. It was never only routing.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

After that, the observers in the car wanted dates, names, habits. I gave them stall hours, then vendor names, then who would talk to whom. I told myself I was keeping things calm.

Nora's eyes narrow, fixed on Mrs. Gable's face instead of the papers. The garden feels smaller around the confession.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

The office had more than one hand in it. I was only speaking to the ones who showed their faces.

She finally meets Hunter's eyes, ashamed and cornered, while the list stays spread on the rail between them.

Quest Complete

Learn how far the office controls Mrs. Gable

I tell Mrs. Gable that i never wanna see her again and that she beeds to stay away from my home and my family

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +2)

The Evidence in the Garden
Nora
Nora
Mrs. Gable
Mrs. Gable
Hunter McCready

Hunter McCready

Then stay away from my home, and stay away from my family. I never want to see you here again.

The words hang over the fence rail. Mrs. Gable flinches like she has been struck, and the garden goes still except for the scrape of wind through the tomato cages.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

I hear you. I do. I should have kept my distance before this ever got this far.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

I was trying to keep my footing, and I kept handing them pieces of everyone else's lives instead.

Nora watches her in silence, jaw tight, while the list lies open like evidence that cannot be folded back up.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

I won't come to the house again. If the office asks, I will tell them I am done.

Her hands tighten around the trowel, then loosen. For a moment she looks older, smaller, and very tired.

I nod and leave

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +4)

The Evidence in the Garden
Nora
Nora
Mrs. Gable
Mrs. Gable

Hunter gives a single nod, already turning away from the fence. The vendor list stays open where it lies, and he leaves Mrs. Gable with the weight of it instead of another word.

He steps off along the garden path, boots brushing wet soil. Behind him, the scrape of the trowel stops completely.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

Hunter.

He does not look back.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

I was afraid of losing my place. That is what I kept choosing over people.

Nora stays by the fence rail, silent and rigid, while the open list catches the light between them. A folded page slips free of Mrs. Gable's apron pocket and lands in the dirt, a copied route sheet stamped with the office seal.

Hunter keeps walking, and the path opens toward the barn with the copied page left behind for anyone to see.

I pick up the route sheet

The Evidence in the Garden
Nora
Nora
Mrs. Gable
Mrs. Gable

Hunter stoops, picks up the route sheet, and straightens it against his palm. The office seal is plain in the dirt-smudged light.

I ask Nora to read the routing codes

SUCCESS (Superb Reasoning, rolled +0)

Hunter McCready

Hunter McCready

Nora, can you read the routing codes on this for me?

Nora takes one look at the smudged strip and steps in close, her attention narrowing on the printed marks.

Nora

Nora

Yes. These are office routing codes, not a vendor note. They tag who gets watched, and when.

Mrs. Gable’s hand tightens on the trowel. Her shoulders sink, like the words land harder than the paper did.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

I passed those along because they said it would keep the market calm. I thought I was buying time.

Nora

Nora

The code path runs straight through the office desk, then the courier, then the observers by the road.

Nora points once at the sheet, then back toward the lane, where a faint voice still carries from somewhere beyond the fence.

I tell Mrs. Gable to leave the garden

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled -2)

The Evidence in the Garden
Nora
Nora
Mrs. Gable
Mrs. Gable
Hunter McCready

Hunter McCready

Mrs. Gable, please leave the garden.

Hunter says it plain, without raising his voice. The paper dips in his hand as he turns from the bed and points her toward the gate.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

I hear you. I am going.

She sets the trowel down in the dirt instead of handing it over. It leaves a clean smear on her palm, and a small clink carries across the garden.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

I thought I was helping neighbors stay fed. The office wanted names, hours, habits, anything that made people easy to sort.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

I kept telling myself it was just a desk clerk and a few papers. Then there were cars at the road, and I kept talking anyway.

Nora stays close to Hunter, watching Mrs. Gable with a hard, thoughtful silence. In the distance, the faint voice from the lane still drifts over the fence.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

I do not expect you to forgive me. I only want to stop feeding them. If you need me gone, I will go.

I call the vendors to the barn

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +0)

The Evidence in the Garden
Joy
Joy
Nora
Nora
Mrs. Gable
Mrs. Gable

Hunter folds two fingers to his mouth and gives a sharp call toward the barn. His voice carries clean over the garden beds, cutting through the lane noise and the shame hanging in the air.

The call pulls movement from the yard. Footsteps answer from the barn, and the loose quiet around the homestead tightens into attention.

Nora

Nora

I hear you. I am coming.

Nora appears at the barn edge with a hand still dusted from work, then turns toward the garden without slowing. Joy is visible in the doorway behind her, still and watchful, one small hand near the wooden wedge.

Mrs. Gable

Mrs. Gable

If this is the meeting, I will stand where everyone can see me.

Mrs. Gable lifts her chin and steps away from the bed, leaving the trowel where it lies. Her words are steady, but her empty hands show the cost.

The faint voice from the lane still rides the fence line as the group starts toward the barn, and Hunter's call has put the whole yard on notice.

Quest Complete

Call the vendors together

Fault Removed: Anger Issues

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