The Great Slave Escape

Historical Fiction·Makeda

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A Reckoning at Tbilisi Gate
Julia
Julia
Queen Mariam Dadiani
Queen Mariam Dadiani
King Rostom's official
King Rostom's official

Three weeks after leaving the Black Sea, the survivors stand inside Tbilisi’s palace gate. Makeda’s palm is still wrapped in cloth, though the journey has healed the rest of her wounds.

Queen Mariam Dadiani waits beneath an arched portico in her rose-red, gold-trimmed gown. Beside her stands a lean, middle-aged official with a trimmed beard, dark robes, and a wax tablet.

Queen Mariam Dadiani

Queen Mariam Dadiani

Julia, your name brought you through my gate. It cannot, by itself, decide the fate of everyone who followed you.

King Rostom's official

King Rostom's official

His Majesty’s council must know whether these women are refugees, fugitives, or a diplomatic liability. We require an account of the ship, the escape, and your present claims.

Julia steps forward, pale and slender but steady, while Sofia, Angela, Daria, Petar, and the others remain behind her. Guards watch the group without drawing weapons.

Julia

Julia

They are not a liability. They were stolen, confined, and hunted. Makeda freed us and kept us alive when no court or army would.

The official lowers his stylus and studies Makeda, lingering on her dark skin and the guarded distance the court has left around her. Queen Mariam’s gaze remains direct and unreadable.

✓ Quest Accepted

Win formal sanctuary for the survivors

“I am among Persians now, thinks Makeda, and they are bitter enemies of the Turks. "I am Makeda, an Orthodox Christian from Abyssinia. I was enslaved as a child. My master was a Turkish ship captain who brought me with him to Podolia, where he picked up a cargo of Christian girls, who had been seized by the Turks and treated horribly. During the return voyage there was a storm and the ship was in danger of sinking. The cowardly Turks piled into a boat and left the Christian women to their fate. I was able to open a hatch and rescue four of them, but all the rest drowned. Since then, we have been on the run, with soldiers searching for us, but God was gracious. Good Christian people aided us and we were able to escape."”

SUCCESS (Legendary Oratory, rolled +2)

Makeda

Makeda

I am among Persians now, and they are bitter enemies of the Turks.

Makeda

Makeda

I am Makeda, an Orthodox Christian from Abyssinia. I was enslaved as a child, and my master was a Turkish ship captain who took me to Podolia.

Makeda

Makeda

There he gathered Christian girls seized by the Turks and treated horribly. During the return voyage, a storm threatened to sink us, and the cowardly Turks abandoned us in a boat.

Makeda

Makeda

I opened a hatch and rescued four of the women, but the rest drowned. Since then, soldiers have searched for us while we fled, and God was gracious to send good Christians who helped us escape.

Her account crosses the portico without faltering. The guards remain still, but several lower their eyes when she describes the abandoned ship and the drowned captives.

King Rostom's official

King Rostom's official

You speak plainly, and the sequence agrees with what Julia has told us. Your people will be recorded as Christian refugees, not accused criminals, pending the council’s formal protection.

Queen Mariam Dadiani

Queen Mariam Dadiani

Makeda, your testimony has weight here. You and the women who followed you will receive shelter while we decide how best to protect you from Turkish claims.

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Queen Mariam Dadiani
Queen Mariam Dadiani
King Rostom's official
King Rostom's official

“"We are most grateful, your Majesty."”

FAILURE (Good Etiquette, rolled -2)

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Queen Mariam Dadiani
Queen Mariam Dadiani
King Rostom's official
King Rostom's official
Makeda

Makeda

We are most grateful, Your Majesty.

Makeda bows, careful and sincere, but the gesture is slightly too deep for the court’s custom. Her wrapped palm remains visible against her cloak, marking hardship rather than rank.

Queen Mariam Dadiani

Queen Mariam Dadiani

Your gratitude is received, Makeda. Do not abase yourself before me. You have endured enough without becoming smaller for this court.

King Rostom's official

King Rostom's official

The sentiment is proper, though her manner confirms she is unused to formal audience. Her testimony remains credible, but protection must be recorded precisely.

King Rostom's official turns his wax tablet and indicates a blank space beneath the account. The court has not granted permanent asylum, yet Makeda now sees the useful opening: her testimony can be entered separately.

Queen Mariam Dadiani

Queen Mariam Dadiani

You may give that account directly, in your own words, when the council reviews these claims. Until then, shelter is granted to you and the women under my protection.

✓ Quest Accepted

Give Makeda’s personal account before the council

− Scene Quest Removed

Win formal sanctuary for the survivors

“"God be my witness, I ask nothing more than to tell the truth."”

SUCCESS (Legendary Oratory, rolled -1)

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Julia
Julia
Queen Mariam Dadiani
Queen Mariam Dadiani
King Rostom's official
King Rostom's official
Makeda

Makeda

God be my witness, I ask nothing more than to tell the truth.

The words settle beneath the portico. Makeda keeps her injured palm against her cloak and meets the queen’s gaze without lowering her eyes.

Queen Mariam Dadiani

Queen Mariam Dadiani

Then the council shall hear you plainly. I will order your account entered without alteration, and I will stand witness to its giving.

King Rostom's official

King Rostom's official

It shall be recorded as sworn testimony, not supplication. But understand this: your words will bind your standing here, and contradictions will be remembered.

He presses the stylus into the wax and writes Makeda’s name beneath the refugees’ account. The gesture grants her a separate voice, while making her credibility part of the court’s record.

Queen Mariam Dadiani

Queen Mariam Dadiani

You have what you asked for, Makeda. Rest tonight, then speak before the council tomorrow. Until then, my protection remains upon you and the women.

Julia

Julia

We will stand beside her, Your Majesty. Whatever the council asks, she will not face it alone.

“She attempts to bow in the approved manner.”

SUCCESS (Good Etiquette, rolled +0)

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Julia
Julia
King Rostom
King Rostom
Queen Mariam Dadiani
Queen Mariam Dadiani
King Rostom's official
King Rostom's official

Makeda shifts her weight carefully and performs the court’s approved bow: neither abasement nor defiance, her head lowered while her injured palm remains hidden against her cloak.

Queen Mariam Dadiani

Queen Mariam Dadiani

That is properly given. Rise, Makeda. You stand here as a witness under my protection.

Makeda straightens. The gesture earns the queen’s approval, but its public precision also places Makeda visibly within Mariam’s protection, making her testimony a matter of courtly responsibility.

King Rostom's official

King Rostom's official

The form is acceptable. Let the record show that she has entered the queen’s protection knowingly, and that her testimony will bear upon that protection.

The official adds the clause to the wax tablet. Several guards glance toward Makeda, no longer seeing merely a rescued slave, but a protected claimant whose words may affect the court.

Julia

Julia

You gave them neither surrender nor insult. That will matter tomorrow.

Queen Mariam Dadiani

Queen Mariam Dadiani

Rest tonight. Tomorrow, speak plainly, and let the court judge the truth rather than your station.

“She goes wherever they are taking her.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Agility, rolled +0)

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the palace guard
The Palace Guard

A palace guard gestures toward the inner court, and Makeda follows without hesitation. She keeps her pace measured, neither hurrying nor lagging behind the escort.

The portico gives way to shadowed corridors of stone and painted plaster. Servants pause beside the walls as the protected claimant passes, then lower their eyes.

The Palace Guard

The Palace Guard

This way. Your lodging has been prepared near the women’s quarters.

Makeda crosses a small courtyard where a fountain murmurs beneath carved arches. The guard leads her through another doorway into a quiet receiving room furnished with cushions, a low table, and a covered water jar.

Julia, Sofia, Angela, Daria, and Petar are directed onward by separate attendants, their voices fading along the corridor. No one bars Makeda’s passage or takes her from the queen’s protection.

Makeda

Makeda

The court has given me shelter, and tomorrow it will hear my testimony.

The guard indicates a place beside the water and withdraws to the doorway. Makeda arrives safely at the assigned lodging, with her wrapped palm protected and the council’s hearing set for morning.

“She eats whatever is offered for supper and goes to sleep.”

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A servant brings Makeda a simple supper of bread, lentils, olives, and watered wine, setting it on the low table before withdrawing.

Makeda eats everything offered, slowly at first, then with the practical attention of someone accustomed to measuring food against tomorrow’s demands.

The covered jar provides fresh water. Her wrapped palm remains undisturbed as she drinks, then places the empty cup beside the untouched lamp.

The Palace Guard

The Palace Guard

Sleep well. The council will receive you after morning prayers.

The palace guard closes the door from outside, leaving Makeda alone in the quiet receiving room. Beyond the walls, the palace settles into evening.

Makeda

Makeda

The hearing is tomorrow, and I am sheltered tonight.

Makeda lies down on the prepared bedding, keeping her bandaged palm above the coverlet. Weariness carries her into a deep, undisturbed sleep.

“She sleeps.”

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the attendant
The Attendant
the palace guard
The Palace Guard

Night passes quietly around the receiving room. The lamp burns low, palace footsteps fade, and Makeda remains undisturbed beneath the coverlet, her bandaged palm resting clear of the bedding.

Before dawn, servants begin moving through distant corridors. A muted bell sounds beyond the walls, followed by the first murmurs of morning prayers.

Gray light gathers through the shutters. Makeda wakes rested, with the wrapped cut unchanged and the supper tray cleared away.

Makeda

Makeda

The hearing is today, and the queen’s protection still holds.

A knock comes at the door. The palace guard waits outside with another attendant, a young adult woman with a slim build, warm brown skin, dark braided hair, and a muted blue-gray robe, allowing Makeda time to rise and prepare without haste.

The Palace Guard

The Palace Guard

Makeda, the council will receive you after prayers. Come when you are ready.

“She does as she is told.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Agility, rolled -1)

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the attendant
The Attendant
the palace guard
The Palace Guard

Makeda rises, secures her clothing, and follows the palace guard into the corridor. As she passes through the narrow doorway, her shoulder catches the stone jamb, leaving a sharp scrape beneath her sleeve.

The Palace Guard

The Palace Guard

Keep close. The council chamber lies beyond the prayer court.

The young attendant walks beside her, carrying no weapon and keeping a respectful distance. Makeda matches the escort’s pace despite the sting in her shoulder.

They cross the quiet courtyard beneath fading gray light. Servants move along the covered walkways, while distant prayers conclude behind carved wooden doors.

The Young Woman

The Young Woman

Your place is prepared near the council entrance. You will not be left to find it alone.

The guard opens a tall door, and Makeda enters the council antechamber. Benches line the walls; beyond an inner arch, voices and the scrape of styluses announce the waiting officials.

She has arrived before the council as summoned, with the queen’s protection still over her and the fresh scrape burning quietly beneath her sleeve.

“She waits patiently to be called.”

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the clerk
The Clerk
the attendant
The Attendant
the palace guard
The Palace Guard

Makeda takes the nearest bench in the council antechamber and waits without fidgeting. Her wrapped palm rests lightly against her cloak, protected from the hard stone.

The Palace Guard

The Palace Guard

You will be called when the council is ready. Remain here, and no one will trouble you.

The palace guard returns to the doorway. The young attendant stands beside the inner arch, while muted voices continue beyond it and styluses scratch steadily across wax.

Morning light strengthens through the high windows, laying pale bars across the floor. Servants pass quietly along the walls, giving Makeda respectful space.

The Young Woman

The Young Woman

Your patience is noted. The council has heard that you speak plainly, and they will not keep you waiting beyond necessity.

Time passes without disturbance. Makeda remains seated, conserving her strength and listening as the chamber’s formal murmurs rise and fall beyond the closed arch.

At last, the inner door opens. A clerk appears and gestures toward Makeda, while the guard steps aside to clear her passage into the council chamber.

“She enters the council chamber”

SUCCESS (Legendary Agility, rolled -1)

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the young woman
The Young Woman
King Rostom's official
King Rostom's official
the elderly Armenian councillor
the elderly Armenian councillor

Makeda crosses the threshold into the council chamber. Her bandaged palm remains protected against her cloak as she walks with measured, confident steps.

The chamber is broad and austere, with painted beams, high windows, and a long table crowded by wax tablets. King Rostom's official sits at its center.

Beside him sits an elderly Armenian man in a dark wool robe, his silver beard neatly combed, and a young Georgian woman in a crimson veil, poised over a tablet.

King Rostom's official

King Rostom's official

Makeda of Abyssinia, you stand before the council under Queen Mariam's protection. Give your account plainly, and we will record it.

The clerk closes the door behind her. The officials turn their attention fully upon Makeda, while two unarmed guards remain beside the walls and the styluses fall silent.

the elderly Armenian councillor

the elderly Armenian councillor

Begin with the ship, the captives, and the manner of your escape. Distinguish what you witnessed from what you were told.

A space waits before the council table. Makeda has entered safely, and the chamber is ready to receive her testimony.

“"My master was a Turkish ship captain who took me to Podolia. There he gathered Christian girls seized by the Turks and treated horribly. During the return voyage, a storm threatened to sink us, and the cowardly Turks abandoned us in a boat. I opened a hatch and rescued four of the women, but the rest drowned. Since then, soldiers have searched for us while we fled, and God was gracious to send good Christians who helped us escape. All this I witnessed with my own eyes, so help me God."”

FAILURE (Legendary Oratory, rolled -2)

A Reckoning at Tbilisi Gate
the clerk
The Clerk
King Rostom's official
King Rostom's official
the elderly Armenian councillor
the elderly Armenian councillor
Makeda

Makeda

My master was a Turkish ship captain who took me to Podolia. He gathered Christian girls seized by the Turks and treated them horribly. During the return voyage, a storm threatened to sink us, and the Turks abandoned us in a boat. I opened a hatch and rescued four women, but the rest drowned. Soldiers searched for us while we fled, and good Christians helped us escape. I witnessed all this with my own eyes, so help me God.

Makeda’s account carries clearly through the chamber, but her accusation against the Turks draws a guarded exchange of glances. The the clerk writes rapidly, then pauses over several phrases.

the elderly Armenian councillor

the elderly Armenian councillor

You distinguish the shipwreck and your escape as witnessed facts. The treatment of the captives and the soldiers’ purpose require corroboration, not merely conviction.

King Rostom's official

King Rostom's official

Your testimony is forceful, but not yet sufficient for an unqualified sworn record. We will enter it as a refugee’s account pending confirmation.

The judgment falls short of full acceptance, yet the clerk continues writing. No guard moves toward Makeda, and her status under Queen Mariam’s protection remains untouched.

the elderly Armenian councillor

the elderly Armenian councillor

There is another course. The Armenian churches and charcoal camps along the western road may confirm your flight, your companions, and the marks of your journey.

A narrow door opens before her: the council will preserve her account while seeking testimony from the Christian network that sheltered the fugitives. The styluses resume their measured scratching.

Win formal sanctuary for the survivors

Quest Complete

Give Makeda’s personal account before the council

Skill Upgrade: Etiquette Good→Great

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