The Great Slave Escape

Historical Fiction·Makeda

32 scenes
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A Sound Beyond the TorrentSheltered rock spring beneath the broad rock shelf
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A Sound Beyond the Torrent
Daria
Daria
Julia
Julia
Petar
Petar
Sofia
Sofia
Angela
Angela
the charcoal burner’s elder son
The Charcoal Burner’s Elder Son
the charcoal burner’s younger son
The Charcoal Burner’s Younger Son

The charcoal burner’s elder son leads them beneath a broad shelf of rock, where a stone spring gathers in a shallow basin. The road lies hidden beyond the trees.

Packs come open beside the spring. Water is measured into the clay flask, grain bundles are checked, and the survivors settle into the first quiet rest since crossing the torrent.

The Charcoal Burner’s Elder Son

The Charcoal Burner’s Elder Son

Drink slowly. The climb ahead is worse than the gorge, and this spring will not be found from the road.

The charcoal burner’s younger son crouches near the entrance, listening toward the valley. Daria rests with one hand on the sickle, while Sofia helps Julia loosen her pack and Angela guards the provisions.

Petar

Petar

Something crossed after us. I heard stones shift beyond the torrent, then again on the slope. I cannot tell whether it was a person, an animal, or a patrol.

The Charcoal Burner’s Younger Son

The Charcoal Burner’s Younger Son

How far behind? Did it follow the ford, or come down from the road?

Petar turns toward the trees, weighing the faint sounds against the rushing water. The sheltering rock conceals the spring, but the narrow approach offers few places to hide.

✓ Quest Accepted

Determine who or what crossed the torrent

“"Wait here. I'll have a look."”

SUCCESS (Superb Perception, rolled +2)

A Sound Beyond the Torrent
Makeda

Makeda

Wait here. I’ll have a look.

Makeda leaves her pack beneath the rock shelf and slips toward the torrent, keeping low among the fir roots. She follows the disturbed stones above the waterline.

Makeda

Makeda

The stones are fresh, but no boot heel marks follow them.

Beyond the torrent, a narrow ledge bends around the gorge. A tawny wild goat stands there, picking its way upward, and dislodges another scatter of stones.

Makeda searches the slope, ford, and road below. She finds only hoofprints in the damp earth, with no human trail or patrol sign among them.

Makeda

Makeda

It was a wild goat. Nothing followed us from the road or the ford.

Petar

Petar

Then we have a little time. I will watch the valley while the others drink and repack.

Quest Complete

Determine who or what crossed the torrent

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