The Great Slave Escape

Historical Fiction·Makeda

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Clues Beneath the ShrineHigher eastern track beneath the firs
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Clues Beneath the Shrine
Daria
Daria
Julia
Julia
Petar
Petar
Sofia
Sofia
Angela
Angela

The mountain path descends toward a roofless stone shrine beside an abandoned mule track. Faded Orthodox markings remain above the cracked entrance, sheltered from the weather.

Petar

Petar

This mark is Orthodox. Someone kept faith here, or wanted travelers to believe they did.

Petar crouches beside the cold hearth and studies a thin layer of fresh ash. Beneath it lies a torn scrap covered in cramped Armenian writing.

Petar

Petar

Armenian. The ash is recent, and whoever wrote this knew enough to leave word without leaving a name.

He lifts a fallen slab near the shrine wall and finds a cloth-wrapped bundle of dry bread. The stone’s underside is clean, while damp earth marks its recent movement.

Daria

Daria

Then someone connected to the eastern refuge used this place. They left recently, and they may have gone toward the same mountain paths.

Daria watches the mule track while Sofia keeps Julia close, Angela guards the flask and provisions, and Petar holds the bundle without opening it further. The shrine offers clues, food, and a fresh uncertainty.

+ New Item Acquired

Bread bundle

“"What can you tell us about those tracks, Daria? Can anyone read Armenian?"”

SUCCESS (Good Reasoning, rolled +3)

Clues Beneath the Shrine
Daria
Daria
Angela
Angela
Makeda

Makeda

What can you tell us about those tracks, Daria? Can anyone read Armenian?

Daria

Daria

Three people, perhaps four. They came from the eastern mountain path, paused here, and left before the ash cooled. Their loads were light.

Daria kneels beside the mule track and follows the impressions beyond the shrine. The heels point east, while a second set of marks turns briefly toward the higher slope.

Daria

Daria

They did not take the mule road. The higher track leads toward the Armenian charcoal burners’ country, and they knew enough to avoid open ground.

Angela

Angela

I can read enough Armenian to understand this. It says, ‘To the charcoal burners east of the shrine: travelers seeking refuge may follow the high path. Trust the bearer of this bread.’

Angela turns the scrap toward the fading light, then examines the wrapped bread without disturbing it. Beneath the cloth, a small bronze token bears the same cross scratched above the shrine door.

Angela

Angela

The message is recent, and this token is meant to identify us. We have both a route and a way to prove we came under the shrine’s protection.

“"It must have been Mikayel who did this, nice of him. No one eat that bread! I think if we join the Armenians, we may get a warm welcome."”

SUCCESS (Legendary Oratory, rolled +0)

Clues Beneath the Shrine
Daria
Daria
Julia
Julia
Petar
Petar
Sofia
Sofia
Angela
Angela
Makeda

Makeda

It must have been Mikayel who did this. Nice of him. No one eat that bread. If we join the Armenians, we may get a warm welcome.

Makeda keeps her hands away from the cloth-wrapped loaf. Angela immediately folds the message and token back beneath the bundle, preserving the sign of protection.

Daria

Daria

Mikayel knew these hills and the charcoal burners. If this is his word, the high path is safer than the mule track.

Angela

Angela

Agreed. The bread remains untouched. The token and message should be shown first, before anyone accepts food or shelter.

Petar

Petar

Armenian charcoal burners may fear soldiers as much as we do. They might hide us, especially if they recognize Mikayel’s mark.

Daria wraps the bread securely and places it with the provisions. The group leaves the exposed shrine, turning onto the higher eastern track beneath the firs.

Daria

Daria

Then we go east together. Keep the token dry, keep the bread sealed, and speak only when the charcoal burners can hear us.

✓ Quest Accepted

Gain refuge from the Armenian charcoal burners

+ New Item Acquired

Armenian message

+ New Item Acquired

Bronze token

“They go east, keeping silent.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Agility, rolled +0)

Clues Beneath the Shrine
Daria
Daria
Julia
Julia
Petar
Petar
Sofia
Sofia
Angela
Angela

The survivors leave the shrine by the higher eastern track, keeping the sealed bread and bronze token beneath Angela’s coat. Fir branches swallow the mule road behind them.

Daria leads with measured steps, reading the packed earth and roots. Petar watches the rear, while Sofia supports Julia across the steeper patches without breaking the quiet.

Makeda follows near the center, preserving the group’s close formation. Angela keeps the message dry, and the wrapped loaf remains untouched among their dwindling provisions.

Makeda

Makeda

The high track keeps us hidden, and the charcoal burners’ country lies ahead.

They pass beneath darker firs and cross a narrow shoulder above the valley. No lanterns move below, and no voices rise from the distant roads.

At last the track descends toward thicker woodland marked by charcoal smoke faintly staining the evening air. Daria raises one hand, and the survivors halt together beneath the trees.

East lies the hidden country of the Armenian charcoal burners. The group has reached its edge in silence, carrying Mikayel’s token and sealed bread into the gathering dusk.

“"Why don't I go ahead and have a look. I'll let you know if I see anything suspicious."”

SUCCESS (Superb Perception, rolled +0)

Clues Beneath the Shrine
Daria
Daria
Petar
Petar
Angela
Angela
Makeda

Makeda

Why don’t I go ahead and have a look? I’ll let you know if I see anything suspicious.

Makeda slips ahead beneath the firs, keeping below the ridge of the track. She circles through brush and roots until the charcoal smoke reveals a concealed hollow.

Three low charcoal mounds stand beyond the trees, tended by distant figures near a rough shelter. No soldiers, weapons, or lanterns are visible, and the eastern path remains clear.

Makeda

Makeda

I see charcoal burners ahead. There are three mounds and a shelter, but no soldiers or weapons. The path east is clear.

Makeda returns without breaking a branch and reports from beneath the firs. The bronze token stays dry beneath Angela’s coat, and the sealed bread remains untouched.

Daria

Daria

Good. We approach openly enough to show the token, but keep our hands visible and our group together.

Petar

Petar

Then the refuge is real, and we have found it before night closes the path.

“"Sounds good. Let Angela go first, with the bread, note and the token."”

SUCCESS (Legendary Agility, rolled -1)

Clues Beneath the Shrine
Daria
Daria
Julia
Julia
Petar
Petar
Sofia
Sofia
Angela
Angela
the elderly charcoal burner
The Elderly Charcoal Burner

Angela steps from the firs carrying the sealed bread, folded Armenian message, and bronze token where the charcoal burners can see them. The others remain together behind her.

She crosses the open ground toward the rough shelter. Three charcoal burners, including two young adult men with lean builds, soot-streaked faces, and patched dark work clothes pause beside their mounds, studying her approach through the drifting smoke.

Angela

Angela

I bring Mikayel’s message and token. We seek refuge, and we have come peacefully.

An elderly Armenian man with a broad, soot-darkened face and a gray beard steps from the shelter. His patched brown coat hangs heavily from his sturdy frame.

The Elderly Charcoal Burner

The Elderly Charcoal Burner

Mikayel sent you? Show me the mark, and keep the bread sealed until I read his word.

Angela presents the token and message without opening the bread. The old burner compares the scratched cross with the token, then beckons her toward the shelter.

The Elderly Charcoal Burner

The Elderly Charcoal Burner

You are under his protection. Bring the others from the trees. There is room by the hearth, and no soldier comes here tonight.

Quest Complete

Gain refuge from the Armenian charcoal burners

Skill Upgrade: Etiquette Fair→Good

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