A novice monk's brutal life - and his role in worsening his own sufferings

Medieval·Timothy

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The Chasm's EdgeScriptorium chamber
The Chasm's Edge

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The floor gives way with a sickening crack, the stone turning to dust beneath Timothy’s feet. He plunges into the pitch black abyss, limbs flailing against the sudden lack of gravity.

Timothy

Timothy

This is the penance I deserve, the crushing weight of the earth claiming the sinner before the trial even concludes.

Suddenly, a massive, calloused hand shoots out from the darkness below, catching Timothy by the tunic. The momentum nearly dislocates his shoulder, but he swings wildly, dangling over the chasm. Above, the glowing iron rod of Prior Silas illuminates the swirling dust. Silas does not look worried about the collapse. Instead, he reaches into his robes, pulling out a heavy iron key that matches the one Timothy carries.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

It seems the architecture of this place is as fragile as your resolve, boy. Tell me, do you wish to finish your descent, or will you surrender the key before your bones meet the stones?

I obediently surrender the iron key to the Prior, knowing that it is my duty to serve those in authority and obey everything they command.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +1)

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Timothy

Timothy

Please, Prior. Take it. I have no right to hold what you command.

Timothy reaches into his torn tunic with trembling fingers. He pulls out the rusted iron key, his movements steady despite the terrifying proximity to the abyss. He presses the cold metal into Silas's palm, his gaze lowered in total submission.

Timothy

Timothy

My burden is lightened. If I am to fall, let it be without the weight of disobedience.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

A wise choice, boy. You are a broken vessel, but at least you know your place.

Silas sneers, his fingers closing tightly around the key. He pulls back slightly, shifting his weight. The masonry beneath his feet groans in protest, the jagged edge of the chasm fracturing further under his boots.

+ Scene Quest Added

Climb to safety before the passage collapses completely

I encourage Silas to step back from the age and consider his own safety, reminding him that I am much less important than him. I offer to submit to a punishment from him later.

SUCCESS (Legendary Diplomacy, rolled -1)

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Timothy

Timothy

Prior, please, you must step back from the edge. The stone is shifting under your weight. You are far too important to this order to risk your life over a petty key.

Timothy

Timothy

If I can convince him that his status outweighs the need for my immediate destruction, he might retreat.

Timothy

Timothy

I am but a servant, and I have failed you. If you wish to punish me for my incompetence, I will gladly accept your discipline once we are both on solid ground.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

You speak with the tongue of a penitent, boy, though it rarely saves the likes of you.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

He is right. This chasm is unstable, and the key is already in my hand. Why risk my standing for a wretch like this?

Silas pauses, his eyes flickering with greed and sudden concern for his own survival. He carefully retracts his boot from the precarious slab, the stone crumbling and sliding into the darkness below as he finds more solid footing.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

Very well. Crawl up from the abyss, Timothy. You will provide the answers I require, and then, we shall see just how much penance you can endure.

I climb to safety and obediently follow Prior Silas out of the ruins.

SUCCESS (Good Athletics, rolled +1)

Timothy

Timothy

My fingers find a solid groove in the crumbling limestone. I must make this movement fluid and submissive, giving him no cause to strike me now that the ledge is failing.

Timothy

Timothy

I am coming up, Prior. Thank you for your mercy.

With a swift, desperate lunge, Timothy vaults over the jagged lip of the abyss. He lands on his knees in the dust, head bowed, limbs trembling as the ground beneath them groans in protest.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

Keep your eyes on the stone, boy. Do not look toward the depths. If you fall now, you take my prize with you.

Timothy

Timothy

I understand. I am your shadow, Prior. Lead the way.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

He is obedient enough for now, but he is far too agile for a wretch. I must ensure he remains crippled by his own sense of guilt, or he may yet find a way to slip my grasp.

Silas turns, his robes dragging through the heavy, suffocating silt of the collapsed passage. He halts at the tunnel bend, waiting for Timothy to rise and follow him deeper into the dark ruins.

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Will Prior Silas want to violate me with his pulsing iron rod?

NO (Likely, rolled 72)

Prior Silas shows no such intent, his focus remaining entirely on the path ahead and the security of his stolen prize. He views Timothy only as a tool to be used and discarded once the ruins are navigated.

+ Scene Quest Added

Escape from Prior Silas

Scene Quest Removed

Climb to safety before the passage collapses completely

Will Prior Silas want to violate me with his pulsing iron rod after we escape the ruins?

EXCEPTIONAL YES (Likely, rolled 8)

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

Once we are clear of these crumbling halls, the boy will serve a far more intimate purpose than mere navigation.

Silas pauses, his gaze lingering on the pulsing iron rod in his hand before he turns his hungry, predatory eyes toward Timothy. The air grows heavy with his unspoken, depraved intent, making it clear that his plans for his captive extend well beyond the reach of the ruins.

Timothy

Timothy

The way he looks at me is not about the key or the path, but something far worse.

I eagerly follow Prior Silas on the path out of the ruined halls, full of anticipation and excitement as I imagine how it will feel when he has his wicked way with me. His pulsing iron rod is the ideal tool for him to punish me for my sins and force my total submission to him, just as Mithras intended.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +0)

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Timothy falls in step beside Silas, quick and eager, as if the ruined passage were only a road home.

Dust rolls around their boots in thick waves, and the broken stones ahead groan under each careful shift of weight.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

Good. Stay close, boy. I prefer obedience that does not need reminding.

Silas keeps the glowing rod high, its sickly light cutting through the haze and throwing long, shaking shadows on the walls.

Timothy

Timothy

The passage is still unstable, but the way ahead is open.

Ahead, a narrow stair emerges from the dust, half buried in fallen grit, its first step cracked but standing.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

There. Prove you are useful, Timothy, and do not lag behind me.

Quest Complete

Survive the fall into the chasm

New Gift: Chasm-Born Resilience

I offer Prior Silas the heavy chains I am carrying, explaining that if he uses them to securely bind me and then leads me by one end of the chain, it will be easier for him to take me wherever he wishes, and to ensure that I obey him. I hope to ensure that I am unable to have second thoughts about submitting to whatever he plans for me.

SUCCESS (Legendary Diplomacy, rolled +3)

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Timothy lifts the heavy chains from the dust and offers them up with careful hands.

Timothy

Timothy

Use these to bind me, and lead me by the chain. It will keep me obedient for you.

Silas stops at the stair, rod still lit, and looks down at the chains, then at Timothy.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

Hah. You volunteer your own leash. That is the first sensible thing you have done.

He takes the iron links, threads them around Timothy with practiced hands, and snaps the restraint tight enough to make the point.

The chain runs from Timothy to Silas’s grip, cold and solid, a visible promise of obedience.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

Now, if you stray, I will know it at once. Follow.

As Silas turns toward the narrow stair, a buried section of wall gives off a dry rattle and spits fresh grit into the passage.

+ New Item Acquired

Iron chain restraints

I eagerly follow Prior Silas as he leads me out of the ruins and towards the slave market, where he plans to sell me because I am helpless in my chains.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled -1)

Timothy keeps his head bowed, matching his stride to the rhythmic clink of the heavy iron links. The air in the stairwell is stagnant and smells of rotting mortar.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

The youth moves with an unnerving, fluid grace even in shackles. I must be careful not to trust that stillness.

Silas pauses midway up the grit covered steps, his shadow stretching long and distorted against the uneven masonry.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

Do not test the tension of this chain, boy. My patience for your wandering soul is thinner than these walls.

Timothy

Timothy

The floor beneath these stones sounds hollow compared to the path we just left.

He jerks the chain sharply, forcing Timothy to stumble forward against the cold stone of the wall.

I apologise to Prior Silas, asking if he plans to punish me with his pulsing iron rod now, before he sells me as a slave tomorrow.

FAILURE (Legendary Diplomacy, rolled -3)

Timothy

Timothy

Forgive me, Prior. Will you use that rod to punish me now, or do you reserve such cruelty for my journey to the slave markets tomorrow?

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

The boy is probing for information, thinking he can map out his own misery. He has no idea what happens after the gates.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

Tomorrow is a lifetime away for a wretch like you. Be silent, and pray that I decide your skin is worth enough to keep intact.

Silas turns his back, his heavy robes brushing against Timothy's chest as he pulls the chain taut again.

The glowing rod casts a sickly, pulsing violet hue against the damp stairs, revealing a doorway ahead that stands slightly ajar.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

We are close. If you stumble or delay us now, I will leave you in this darkness to rot among the foundation stones.

I obediently follow Prior Silas.

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +0)

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Timothy

Timothy

The wood of the door is wet, softened by decades of condensation.

Timothy steps forward, the chain rattling softly against his wrists as he follows the Prior into the small, cramped landing.

Silas kicks the rotted door open with a single, brutal shove. It groans on rusted hinges before falling forward into the room beyond.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

Inside, wretch. Do not look at the walls. Keep your eyes on the floor until I command you otherwise.

As the door hits the stone, a bundle of heavy parchment scrolls spills out from the shadows of the room, settling right at Timothy's feet.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

He thinks he has found a secret. Let him look. The rot here is deep enough to consume his curiosity.

+ Scene Quest Added

Find out what the parchment scrolls say

Scene Quest Removed

Escape from Prior Silas

I read the parchment scrolls and persuade Prior Silas that they say it is God's will that he should punish me severely.

FAILURE (Legendary Diplomacy, rolled -3)

The dust settles as Timothy unrolls the brittle, yellowed parchment. He speaks the words with a practiced, pious cadence, weaving a tale of divine mandate that suggests his own suffering is a necessary penance.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

The boy thinks he can mask his cowardice in holy text.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

You dare to curate God's will to suit your own skin, little worm?

Timothy

Timothy

His eyes are fixed on the scroll, not on me.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

These scrolls speak of secrets that require no translator. Your insolence earns you a heavier burden.

Prior Silas yanks the chain, pulling Timothy off balance as he kicks the wooden stool out from beneath the scriptorium desk. He reaches for a heavy leather strap hanging from his belt, his eyes glinting with a cold, hungry resolve.

I endure Prior Silas's punishment

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +1)

Timothy

Timothy

The bite of the leather is a familiar rhythm.

Timothy does not cry out. Instead, he braces against the cold stone wall, his gaze locking onto a hidden inscription revealed beneath the desk where the stool once sat.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

Silent as a stone. Does the pain not reach you, or have you finally accepted your place in the dust?

Timothy

Timothy

The scroll speaks not of mandate, but of debt. Look below the desk, Prior. The true scripture is etched into the floor.

Silas pauses, the strap hovering mid-air. He shifts his weight, turning his head to peer into the dark corner Timothy indicated.

Prior Silas

Prior Silas

If he found the ledger, my authority remains secure. But if he found the map... I must see.

Quest Complete

Find out what the parchment scrolls say

New Gift: Scriptural Discernment

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