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Adventure of Kelnozz the Shiney 1

Fantasy·Kelnozz the Shiney

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The Warning Beneath Skinstreambed beneath the cleft
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The Warning Beneath Skin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
the trapped voice
The Trapped Voice
the speaking lantern hook
The Speaking Lantern Hook

The eastern passage tightens into a cramped culvert. Black water threads over the stone above Kelnozz's ankles as Mara supports Edrin, while the speaking lantern hook is dragged close enough for its voice to carry. Hugh, the guards, Keeper Odran, and the Baron's Representative remain above with the witnesses and chest.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

The refuge lies farther east. The thieves used this culvert, but one of them reached the inner stones and never came back.

As Edrin speaks, dark beads rise beneath his skin along his throat and forearm. They arrange themselves into tiny, moving marks, like script written in ink beneath flesh.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

I recognize that pattern. It is a warning left by someone who reached the thieves' refuge and never returned.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

It was not on me before the chest opened. I have seen those marks once, carved beside the refuge door.

The script darkens, then shifts. Several beads crawl toward Edrin's wrist and halt at a single crooked symbol, while the culvert water trembles around their boots.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

Then the warning followed you out. Kelnozz, we should not advance until we know what that symbol means.

✓ Quest Accepted

Determine the source of the warning mark

✓ Quest Accepted

Keep the spreading mark from harming Edrin

“Not sure why the spirit was calling you a male, when your CLEARLY a female, but lets head to the spot that the thieves are at!”

SUCCESS (Mediocre Agility, rolled +2)

The Warning Beneath Skin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
the trapped voice
The Trapped Voice
the speaking lantern hook
The Speaking Lantern Hook

Kelnozz leads east through the cramped culvert, placing each foot on the submerged stones while Mara keeps Edrin upright behind him. The passage bends toward a low arch of pale rock.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

The refuge is beyond that bend. Stay low, Kelnozz. The ceiling drops without warning.

Kelnozz slips beneath the descending stone and reaches for the far wall. His boot skids on the slick floor, and his forearm scrapes hard across rough rock before he regains his footing.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The refuge lies ahead. I sense fresh disturbance beyond the arch, but not how many wait there.

Kelnozz presses onward despite the scrape. The culvert opens into a broad, dry chamber hidden behind the eastern wall, where abandoned packs, damp cloaks, and a cold fire mark the thieves' refuge.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

This is it. They were here recently. The inner tunnel beyond the fire leads deeper into the refuge.

Kelnozz reaches the refuge with Mara and Edrin behind him. His scraped forearm stings, but the chamber lies open before them, its cold ashes and scattered belongings showing where the thieves gathered.

“Will walk straight into the the refuge and look around with my sword and shield drawn at the ready!”

FAILURE (Fair Perception, rolled -3)

The Warning Beneath Skin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
the trapped voice
The Trapped Voice

Kelnozz steps straight into the dry refuge with his sword drawn, scanning between abandoned packs and cold ashes. His left arm remains empty: no shield is within reach.

The chamber offers too many broken lines and dim corners. Kelnozz's gaze passes over a dark cord half-buried beneath a damp cloak without recognizing its purpose.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

Kelnozz, wait. You have no shield, and the refuge is not as empty as it looks.

His advancing boot catches the concealed cord. A buried catch snaps, and the inner tunnel's stone door drops partway behind him, sealing the easiest retreat and stirring ash into the air.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

That catch was hidden beneath the cloaks. The thieves set it to close the refuge behind anyone who entered.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The passage ahead remains open, but the way behind is narrowed. I sense no living presence beyond the fallen stone.

Dust settles across Kelnozz's drawn blade. Mara and Edrin stand on the outer side of the dropped stone, while the inner tunnel waits before him in cramped darkness.

“Will Dragon SMASH the wall to allow his companions to come with him!”

SUCCESS (Legendary Strength, rolled +2)

The Warning Beneath Skin

Kelnozz turns from the inner tunnel and drives his shoulder and both fists into the stone barrier. The refuge wall bursts inward beneath his legendary strength, opening a rough passage beside the fallen door.

Blocks tumble into the empty chamber beyond, raising a brief veil of dust. Pale rock splits from floor to ceiling, leaving a broad opening through which Mara and Edrin can pass.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

That is a door no thief planned for. Edrin, stay close, and step where the stone is sound.

Mara guides Edrin through the new breach, one hand supporting his back while the other tests the rubble. The fallen barrier no longer separates them from Kelnozz or the inner tunnel.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

The thieves would not expect this route. I can lead you from here, if the deeper stones have not shifted.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The refuge is open to all three of you. I sense fresh air beyond the inner tunnel and no living presence nearby.

Mara joins Kelnozz inside the refuge, and Edrin follows with steadier footing. Dust drifts from the broken wall as the three face the dark tunnel together, their route forward clear.

“will follow closely to Edrin and keep watch for anything that will harm them all!”

FAILURE (Fair Perception, rolled -1)

The Warning Beneath Skin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
the trapped voice
The Trapped Voice

Kelnozz follows close behind Edrin, sword ready, while Mara keeps pace at the survivor’s side. He watches the tunnel floor, walls, and ceiling for anything that could threaten them.

The passage narrows between pale stone ribs. Kelnozz notices old scrape marks and damp dust, but the dimness conceals a hairline break beneath Edrin’s next step.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

The refuge should open beyond this bend. I do not remember the floor being split here.

Edrin steps onto the hidden break. The stone drops unevenly, throwing him against Mara, and a section of floor folds into a steep-sided pit between the group and the inner passage.

Mara catches Edrin before he falls fully, but the collapse leaves them stranded on the far lip. Kelnozz stands opposite, with the tunnel forward now separated by broken stone.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

The floor was disguised by the dust. We cannot cross this gap together without testing another route.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The break is old, but the collapse is fresh. A narrow ledge continues along the left wall, beyond Edrin and Mara.

“I will doing a running jump across”

FAILURE (Mediocre Agility, rolled +1)

The Warning Beneath Skin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
the trapped voice
The Trapped Voice

Kelnozz backs away from the pit, then runs and launches across the broken floor. His silver-scaled body clears most of the gap, boots reaching for the far lip.

His leading foot strikes loose stone instead of solid ground. The fragment shears away, and Kelnozz drops hard, catching the near edge with both hands as rubble plunges into darkness.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

Kelnozz! Hold fast. The far lip is crumbling, but I can reach your arm from here.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

Do not pull toward the passage. Beneath the fallen stones, I can see a lower shelf running beneath the gap.

Kelnozz hauls himself onto the near ledge as the last broken stones collapse. The pit is now wider and unsafe to jump, but a slanting shelf is visible below, leading beneath the inner passage.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The lower shelf is stable for three body lengths. It reaches a handhold beneath the far side, where the passage may be climbed.

“Will climb up to the rest of the group”

SUCCESS (Mediocre Agility, rolled +3)

The Warning Beneath Skin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
the trapped voice
The Trapped Voice

Kelnozz descends onto the lower shelf, plants his silver-scaled feet, and reaches the handhold beneath the far side. With a steady pull, he climbs through the broken floor and stands beside the others.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

There you are. The way forward is clear, and no one was lost to the collapse.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

The handhold reaches the inner passage. I remember a chamber beyond it, where the thieves kept their records and divided what they took.

Mara steadies Edrin as he steps away from the pit. Above them, pale stone ribs close around the route, while fresh air moves faintly from the darkness ahead.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

All three stand beyond the break. I sense old ink, hidden metal, and a ward that has not been disturbed since the thieves fled.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

Then we follow the evidence before the refuge gives us another secret.

Together, Kelnozz, Mara, and Edrin face the inner passage. The pit remains behind them, and the narrow route ahead slopes toward the thieves' abandoned chamber.

“I will take the lead, and watch VERY closely for any more traps!”

FAILURE (Fair Perception, rolled +0)

The Warning Beneath Skin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
the trapped voice
The Trapped Voice

Kelnozz takes the lead, lowering his gaze to the pale stones and studying every seam, dust drift, and irregular shadow before advancing into the inner passage.

His scrutiny catches a faint line beneath the dust, but the stone shifts before he can fully test it. A hidden plate sinks, and the passage floor folds open under his forward foot.

Kelnozz catches the wall and drives his weight sideways, avoiding the shaft below. The triggered mechanism seals the direct route with interlocking slabs, leaving no safe surface to inspect from this side.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

You saw it, but not soon enough. Do not test that passage again. The trap has changed the ground beneath us.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

Wait. When the slabs moved, they exposed a narrow opening behind the left wall. That was not part of the route I remember.

The failed trigger has cracked a concealed panel, revealing a cramped side passage descending toward a faint bronze glimmer. Dust spills inward, carrying the dry scent of old parchment.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The hidden route contains the old ink I sensed. Whatever the thieves left behind, it may reveal their movements without requiring another step across the trapped floor.

“Will search the new area”

SUCCESS (Fair Perception, rolled +2)

The Warning Beneath Skin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
the trapped voice
The Trapped Voice

Kelnozz enters the cramped side passage and searches its descending stones, feeling along the walls without disturbing the parchment dust. Mara and Edrin remain close behind.

The bronze glimmer resolves into a shallow niche containing a copper-bound ledger, three clay tablets, and a small key wrapped in dark cloth. None bears a fresh mark of tampering.

Kelnozz examines the ledger's clasp and pages, finding columns of dates, destinations, and payments. Several entries describe loads moved east beneath the shrine, while one recent line names the refuge.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

The records survived. If the refuge is listed, we can follow the thieves without guessing at every turn.

Beneath the ledger, Kelnozz finds a folded route sketch. It marks a dry exit beyond the inner chamber and a second descent toward the eastern watercourse.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

That lower descent is where they divided the stolen goods. The dry exit leads toward the road, but the watercourse reaches their hidden store.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The records name places and times, not every hand involved. The key matches a lock farther within the thieves' chamber.

The search yields a clear choice of routes, the key, and written evidence of the thieves' movements. The side passage ends at a stone doorway marked on the sketch.

“I will take everything there, as proof and loot and start to head to where the thieves are going to be!”

SUCCESS (Great Reasoning, rolled +1)

The Warning Beneath Skin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
the trapped voice
The Trapped Voice

Kelnozz lifts the copper-bound ledger, three clay tablets, and the cloth-wrapped key from the niche, keeping the parchment dust undisturbed. The route sketch comes with them.

Kelnozz the Shiney

Kelnozz the Shiney

The ledger records movement, while the sketch distinguishes the dry exit from the eastern watercourse.

He secures the tablets and ledger against his armor, then folds the sketch and keeps the small key in hand. Mara and Edrin make room in the narrow passage.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

Take the dry exit first. It leads toward the road, and the thieves may have left signs of their passage there.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

The lower descent reaches their hidden store, but the road route is where they carried the records and divided the loads.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The key is yours, and the evidence is preserved. The dry exit lies beyond the marked doorway; the thieves' route continues east.

Kelnozz turns toward the stone doorway marked on the sketch and starts along the passage, carrying the recovered proof and loot as Mara supports Edrin behind him. Fresh air moves through the cracks ahead.

+ New Item Acquired

Copper-bound ledger

+ New Item Acquired

Clay tablets

+ New Item Acquired

Route sketch

+ New Item Acquired

Small key

“I will put the new items in my backpack and lead the way to the theives!”

FAILURE (Mediocre Agility, rolled +1)

The Warning Beneath Skin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
the trapped voice
The Trapped Voice

Kelnozz reaches for the backpack that is not there. The ledger, tablets, sketch, and key remain in his hands as he turns toward the marked doorway, unable to stow them securely.

He tries to gather the recovered items against his armor and lead the way. The folded sketch slips loose, opening across the damp floor and exposing a tiny side mark beneath the dry-exit symbol.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

There is no pack to hold them. Let the sketch lie open; that mark may show a safer approach than the doorway.

Kelnozz steadies the ledger and tablets under one arm, then pins the sketch with the key. His attempt to lead remains awkward, but the newly revealed mark points to a narrow crawlspace beside the marked doorway.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

That mark was not on the route I remembered. It may bypass the thieves' door and join the dry exit farther ahead.

Mara supports Edrin while Kelnozz advances carefully toward the crawlspace, carrying the evidence in plain sight. The marked doorway remains unopened, but the side route offers a usable way forward.

“Goes towards the fresh air”

SUCCESS (Mediocre Agility, rolled +0)

The Warning Beneath Skin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
the trapped voice
The Trapped Voice

Kelnozz crouches into the narrow crawlspace and moves toward the fresh air, keeping the ledger and tablets tight against his armor while Mara guides Edrin behind him.

The stone pinches around his broad frame. His knee strikes a buried ridge and his knuckles scrape the wall, but he keeps advancing through the cramped darkness.

Cold daylight spills across Kelnozz's scales as he emerges at the dry exit beyond the thieves' refuge. Fresh air fills the passage, carrying distant road sounds.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

We are out. The road lies ahead, and the evidence made it through with you.

Mara helps Edrin from the crawlspace onto firmer ground. Kelnozz straightens carefully, flexing his scraped hand while the folded sketch remains secured beneath the key.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

This is the dry road exit. From here, the thieves carried their records toward the eastern track.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

Fresh air confirms the route. The hidden chamber remains behind you, and the road offers signs of their departure.

“Take the eastern track to the thieves”

FAILURE (Mediocre Survival, rolled +0)

The Warning Beneath Skin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
the trapped voice
The Trapped Voice

Kelnozz takes the eastern track from the dry exit, following broken weeds and faint impressions toward the thieves. Mara supports Edrin behind him, while the speaking lantern hook's hook hangs at her side.

The trail crosses a stony wash where several paths converge. Kelnozz reads the ground carefully, but windblown grit and the thieves' overlapping passage erase the direction he needs.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

They divided the loads near a streambed like this. I remember the eastern track, but not which branch they used afterward.

Kelnozz follows one fading line until it ends at a dry ravine. The route has failed, and the narrowing ground makes pressing onward blind both unsafe and useless.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The eastern track is lost here. The refuge records named a watercourse below, and running water may preserve what the road has erased.

Mara studies the folded sketch beneath the key, then points toward a shallow cleft descending beside the ravine. Damp air rises from it, offering a distinct alternative route toward the thieves' hidden store.

“I will back track to the other path to get to the eastern track”

FAILURE (Mediocre Survival, rolled +2)

The Warning Beneath Skin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
the trapped voice
The Trapped Voice
the speaking lantern hook
The Speaking Lantern Hook

Kelnozz turns back along the eastern track toward the converging paths, retracing the broken weeds and stony wash while Mara keeps Edrin steady behind him.

The wash has shifted under the wind. Kelnozz chooses the branch he passed before, but loose stones slide beneath his boots and funnel him down a steeper spur toward the ravine.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

That is not the other path. The ground has turned you toward the cleft.

Kelnozz stops above the descending cleft. From this angle, damp stone shows a line of shallow impressions disappearing below, where the streambed begins beyond the ravine.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

Those marks lead toward the watercourse. The thieves may have used that descent after dividing the loads.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The lost branch cannot be recovered from here without crossing unstable ground. The cleft offers a safer route toward the eastern track's hidden continuation.

The backtrack fails to restore the erased branch, but it reveals a usable descent: damp impressions and running water lead below, toward the thieves' concealed store.

“Go towards the running water”

FAILURE (Mediocre Agility, rolled +1)

The Warning Beneath Skin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell

Kelnozz descends toward the running water, testing each damp stone before shifting his weight. Near the cleft's midpoint, the slope gives way beneath him.

He catches a jutting shelf, but loose rock pours around his boots and blocks the descent below. The collapse leaves the original slope too unstable to cross safely.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

Hold there. The cleft has broken beneath you, and the lower stones will not bear another step.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

The water is close. I can hear it beneath the fallen stones, but the streambed is sealed from this side.

As the dust settles, a narrow fissure opens along the cleft wall. Cool air rises through it, carrying the unmistakable sound of water and revealing a hand-wide passage beneath the collapse.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The descent is lost, but the fissure joins the watercourse below. It is narrow, yet it offers a way around the broken slope.

Kelnozz remains braced above the collapse, with the fissure open at his side. The running water is no longer reached by the cleft's descent, but the newly revealed passage gives the group a usable next route.

✓ Quest Accepted

Get Edrin safely beyond the collapse

− Scene Quest Removed

Keep the spreading mark from harming Edrin

“I will break the cliff down to make a makeshift way down to the water below”

SUCCESS (Legendary Strength, rolled +3)

The Warning Beneath Skin

Kelnozz plants both feet above the collapse and drives his strength into the cleft wall. Pale rock fractures under his blows, cascading into the sealed slope.

He widens the fissure into a rough descending chute, breaking ledges and packing the fallen stone into a firm staircase. Cool spray rises as the watercourse opens below.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

The passage holds. You made us a way down, and the stream is directly beneath it.

The Trapped Voice

The Trapped Voice

That watercourse joins the thieves' hidden store. I remember the bend ahead, beyond the first underground pool.

Mara helps Edrin toward the new descent while Kelnozz tests each rough step. The makeshift route reaches the water below without requiring the unstable cleft.

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The Speaking Lantern Hook

The fissure is open, and the water carries fresh traces east. The thieves' route continues beneath the stone.

Kelnozz reaches the streambed first, standing in cold running water as Mara guides Edrin down behind him. The broken cliff now forms a usable way into the hidden watercourse.

Quest Complete

Get Edrin safely beyond the collapse

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