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Adventure of Kelnozz the Shiney 1

Fantasy·Kelnozz the Shiney

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The Sealed Treasure Arrivesmarket square
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The Sealed Treasure Arrives
Guard One
Guard One
Guard Two
Guard Two
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
The Wandering Swordsman
The Wandering Swordsman
The Baron's Representative
The Baron's Representative

At dusk, festival lanterns glow across the market square. A breathless shrine attendant hurries in from the shrine path, clutching a cloth-wrapped bundle to her chest.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

Please, wait. This was found beneath the festival shrine, under the boards where offerings are gathered. It matches the description of Hugh's missing treasure.

The Baron's Representative steps forward and reaches for the bundle. The Wandering Swordsman remains between Guard One and Guard Two, their grips fixed around his upper arms.

Guard Two

Guard Two

Hold. Fresh red wax is clinging to the cord.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

I saw it when I lifted the bundle. I did not break the seal. I brought it here so the truth could be witnessed, not hidden beneath the shrine.

The representative's hand stops inches from the cloth. Around the square, the watching crowd falls quiet as the red wax catches the lantern light.

✓ Quest Accepted

Secure the sealed bundle

✓ Quest Accepted

Determine whether the bundle contains Hugh's treasure

“I inspect the red wax seal and bundle without breaking it.”

SUCCESS (Fair Perception, rolled +1)

The Sealed Treasure Arrives
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
The Baron's Representative
The Baron's Representative

Kelnozz the Shiney leans close without touching the seal. His careful inspection follows the cord, the wax, and every fold of the cloth.

The wax bears the baron's crest, but its surface holds a second, fainter impression beneath the fresh red layer. The token's wax crest matches the impression on Hugh's locked chest.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

There is another mark under it. I did not see that in the shrine's lantern light.

The cord remains unbroken, and the cloth shows no tear or stain. From the bundle's shape alone, its contents cannot be confirmed.

The Baron's Representative

The Baron's Representative

Then the seal has been renewed. We open it here, before witnesses, or we carry this uncertainty into the night.

A murmur passes through the crowd. Mara tightens her hold on the bundle, while Hugh stares at the layered wax and the guards keep the swordsman in place.

“Is the bundle a dangerous substitution?”

NO (Even, rolled 89)

The bundle is not a dangerous substitution. Beneath the layered seal, its contents remain harmless and consistent with the recovered treasure, though the sealed wrapping still prevents confirmation without opening it.

“I question Mara about who entrusted it”

SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +1)

The Sealed Treasure Arrives
Hugh
Hugh
Guard One
Guard One
Guard Two
Guard Two
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
Kelnozz the Shiney

Kelnozz the Shiney

Who entrusted this bundle to you, Mara?

Mara studies Kelnozz's steady gaze. The question carries over the quiet square, asking for a name rather than an accusation.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

Keeper Odran of the Lantern Shrine. He placed it in my hands after finding it behind the shrine's old offering stone.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

He saw the baron's crest on the wax and sent me here, because witnesses matter more than a locked room.

The answer gives the bundle a clear chain of custody, while its layered seal and unbroken cord still leave its contents unopened.

The Baron's Representative

The Baron's Representative

Then Keeper Odran must stand as a witness. Shall we open it here, before the square, or carry it under guard to the shrine?

“I summon Keeper Odran before opening the bundle”

SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +1)

The Sealed Treasure Arrives
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
Keeper Odran
Keeper Odran

Kelnozz summons Keeper Odran with a calm authority that carries through the square, calling the shrine's witness into the open before any seal is touched.

The festival crowd parts along the shrine road. A lantern sways there, and measured footsteps approach beneath its glow.

Keeper Odran

Keeper Odran

I am Keeper Odran. I placed the bundle in Mara Vell's keeping, and I will witness what lies within it.

He enters the market's open space carrying only a ring of shrine keys. His arrival gives the gathered witnesses a clear chain from offering stone to sealed bundle.

The Baron's Representative

The Baron's Representative

Then the shrine keeper stands beside the claimant. No one opens it in secret.

Keeper Odran

Keeper Odran

Before these witnesses, then. Shall Mara place it on the market table, or shall I hold it while the seal is examined?

“Does the bundle contain Hugh's treasure?”

NO (Likely, rolled 79)

The bundle does not contain Hugh's treasure; beneath its intact wrapping lies only an unrelated substitute, leaving the recovered treasure still absent.

“I question Mara about the substitute's source”

SUCCESS (Good Reasoning, rolled -1)

The Sealed Treasure Arrives
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
Kelnozz the Shiney

Kelnozz the Shiney

Mara, where did this substitute come from?

Kelnozz's question cuts through the square's uneasy silence. The bundle remains on the table, its false contents exposed but untouched.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

From behind the old offering stone. Keeper Odran gave me the bundle exactly as he found it, sealed and bearing the baron's crest.

Keeper Odran

Keeper Odran

That is true. I found no broken cord, no discarded wrapping, and no second bundle. Whoever placed it there meant the shrine to deliver the lie.

The answer identifies the substitute's immediate source, but not the hand that planted it. A murmur spreads through the witnesses, and several faces turn toward Mara as suspicion finds a new target.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

I did not make the substitution. Search me, search the shrine, search the stone. But do not let Hugh's missing treasure vanish behind another accusation.

Quest Complete

Determine whether the bundle contains Hugh's treasure

Attribute Upgrade: Willpower Good→Great

“I ask Mara to lead me to the shrine”

SUCCESS (Great Willpower, rolled -1)

Kelnozz the Shiney

Kelnozz the Shiney

Mara, lead me to the shrine.

Mara studies Kelnozz for a hard moment, then leaves the bundle on the table beneath the witnesses' eyes.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

Very well. Keeper Odran, keep everyone here from touching it.

Keeper Odran

Keeper Odran

By the shrine's law, it remains where it lies. I will guard the witnesses and the bundle.

Mara turns onto the shrine road, and Kelnozz follows. The square exhales as the investigation divides cleanly instead of collapsing into accusation.

At the old offering stone, dusk pools between the weathered carvings. Mara points to a narrow hollow behind it, where dust lies disturbed around a faint smear of red wax.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

That is where Odran found the substitute. If the true thief came here, this stone may still hold the next proof.

“Searches for any footprints or ways into this location”

SUCCESS (Fair Perception, rolled +0)

The Sealed Treasure Arrives
Mara Vell
Mara Vell

Kelnozz searches the dust around the offering stone, tracing heel marks, smudged grit, and the red wax smear without disturbing them. Mara waits in silence nearby.

He finds a partial trail of narrow-soled footprints leading from the shrine path to the hollow, then vanishing beneath the stone's rear edge. The marks are distinct enough to prove someone approached from outside.

Feeling along the carved base reveals a concealed gap behind a loosened slab, wide enough for an adult arm and opening into a cramped service passage beneath the shrine.

Inside the dust, a second trail turns toward the shrine foundations. The tread is blurred where the passage narrows, but a sharp crescent nick in one sole repeats twice.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

So the bundle was carried in through there. The passage gives whoever planted it a way to avoid the shrine door.

The search takes precious minutes, and dusk thickens before Kelnozz finishes mapping the marks. He has the entrance and a direction, but the softened tread cannot yet identify the person who made it.

“Demands for all present to show their shoe heels so he can see if anyone has a crescent nick in the sole of their shoes!”

SUCCESS (Legendary Intimidation, rolled +1)

Kelnozz the Shiney

Kelnozz the Shiney

Everyone present, show me the heels of your shoes. I am looking for a crescent nick in the sole.

Mara obeys at once, lifting one foot and then the other beside the loosened slab. Her worn leather soles are plain, their edges cracked but unmarked by any crescent cut.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

There. No crescent. I have walked these paths for years, and these shoes have never left the shrine grounds.

The faint red wax still stains the hollow, while the repeated crescent nick remains visible in the passage dust. Mara's soles match neither impression.

Keeper Odran is absent, still guarding the bundle in the market square. No other person stands with Kelnozz and Mara beneath the offering stone.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

Then the footprints do not belong to me. We should return with this proof before anyone decides the wrong person carried the lie.

Kelnozz the Shiney leaves Old offering stone behind and arrives at market square.

“Go back to the rest of the group and ask them to show their shoe soles to him.”

SUCCESS (Mediocre Agility, rolled +1)

The Sealed Treasure Arrives
Hugh
Hugh
Guard One
Guard One
Guard Two
Guard Two
Keeper Odran
Keeper Odran
The Wandering Swordsman
The Wandering Swordsman
The Baron's Representative
The Baron's Representative

The market square receives Kelnozz beneath swaying lanterns and watchful silence. Keeper Odran stands beside the sealed bundle, while Hugh, the baron's representative, the two guards, and the wandering swordsman wait near the table.

Kelnozz the Shiney

Kelnozz the Shiney

Everyone present, show me the soles of your shoes.

The request moves through the square with immediate force. Odran sets the bundle within the witnesses' sight, and each person steps forward, lifting a foot beneath the lantern glow.

Keeper Odran

Keeper Odran

Mine are plain shrine sandals. No cut marks, no crescent nick.

Hugh's boots and the representative's polished shoes show no matching damage. Guard One and Guard Two reveal broad, straight-worn soles; the swordsman's narrow boot bears ordinary travel wear only.

The Baron's Representative

The Baron's Representative

There is no crescent here. The mark must belong to someone who has not yet shown their shoes.

As the last boot lowers, a thin crescent-shaped bite catches the lantern light on the underside of one guard's heel. The matching mark is visible, and the square suddenly has a specific witness to question.

“Steps closer to the guard with the crescent mark so he can not run far, and ask them, why he has that mark on his shoe?”

SUCCESS (Legendary Intimidation, rolled -3)

The Sealed Treasure Arrives
Guard One
Guard One
Keeper Odran
Keeper Odran
The Baron's Representative
The Baron's Representative

Kelnozz steps directly toward the marked guard, his silver bulk closing the space before the guard can retreat far. The square stills around them.

Kelnozz the Shiney

Kelnozz the Shiney

Why is there a crescent mark on your shoe?

Guard One

Guard One

Because I cut it there myself. It marks a pair of boots I bought from a shrine porter three nights ago.

Guard One keeps his marked heel raised, but his face tightens under the public scrutiny. The matching tread now links him to the passage without proving he carried the substitute.

The Baron's Representative

The Baron's Representative

You have your answer, and you have made my guard a suspect before witnesses. He will not leave this square until the matter is tested.

Guard One

Guard One

I entered the shrine passage earlier, yes, but only to fetch a dropped lantern hook. I never touched the bundle.

The admission gives Kelnozz a concrete lead, but the guard's trust is spent: he folds his arms and demands that Keeper Odran confirm when the passage was used.

“Will check to see if there is any wax on the guard in question”

SUCCESS (Fair Perception, rolled +3)

The Sealed Treasure Arrives
Guard One
Guard One

Kelnozz examines Guard One without touching him, checking the raised boot, trouser cuff, fingers, and belt for traces of red wax. The guard holds rigid beneath the lanterns.

A thin crescent of softened red wax clings beneath the boot's upper edge, not the sole. Smaller flecks stain the guard's leather strap, matching the fresh layer on the shrine bundle.

Guard One

Guard One

That was not there when I entered the passage. I would have noticed wax on the floor.

Kelnozz's careful search also finds a faint smear inside the guard's lantern-hook pouch. The pouch has been opened recently, though its hook is still missing.

The Baron's Representative

The Baron's Representative

Then the passage was not merely visited. Guard One carried something sealed through it, and the missing hook may show where he went.

Guard One

Guard One

I fetched the hook, nothing more. Search the passage again if you doubt me, but do not call wax proof that I stole Hugh's treasure.

“Ask: First off I never said there was wax on the floor, and second off, why is wax on the TOP of your boot?”

SUCCESS (Good Reasoning, rolled +1)

Kelnozz the Shiney

Kelnozz the Shiney

First, I never said there was wax on the floor. Second, why is wax on the top of your boot?

The question lands precisely. Guard One lowers his raised heel, then looks down at the softened crescent clinging above the sole, where ordinary passage through dust cannot place it.

Guard One

Guard One

You are right. I cannot explain that by walking through the passage.

His fingers hover over the boot without touching the wax. The lantern-hook pouch hangs at his belt, its inner smear now visible to everyone nearest the table.

Guard One

Guard One

I carried the pouch past the bundle. I thought the wax would stay hidden beneath the upper edge, but I must have brushed the sealed wrapping.

The Baron's Representative

The Baron's Representative

Then your account changes before witnesses. You handled the route and the sealed object, though you still have not admitted taking Hugh's treasure.

Guard One's denial no longer covers the substitute's movement. The missing lantern hook and the wax-marked pouch become immediate points for him to explain, while the bundle remains untouched on the table.

✓ Quest Accepted

Have Guard One explain the missing lantern hook

− Scene Quest Removed

Secure the sealed bundle

“Then explain about the lantern, and why your story has changed?”

SUCCESS (Good Reasoning, rolled +2)

The Sealed Treasure Arrives
Guard One
Guard One
The Baron's Representative
The Baron's Representative
Kelnozz the Shiney

Kelnozz the Shiney

Then explain about the lantern, and why your story has changed.

Guard One

Guard One

I lied because I feared the baron's representative would blame me for losing the lantern hook. I entered through the shrine passage to retrieve it, then carried the sealed substitute back in my pouch. I said I touched nothing because I hoped the wax would remain hidden.

Guard One draws the missing hook from beneath his belt sash. Red wax marks its iron curve, matching the fresh layer on the bundle's cord, while his admission settles over the square.

Guard One

Guard One

I did not take Hugh's treasure. I found the substitute behind the offering stone, carried it through the passage, and placed it where the shrine keeper would discover it.

The Baron's Representative

The Baron's Representative

You concealed the route, the pouch, and the wax. Your first account was false, but this confession explains the change.

Guard One

Guard One

Yes. I changed my story when the wax made concealment impossible. I was guarding the square, not serving the thief, but I obeyed the person who paid me to plant the substitute.

The admission identifies a hidden payer, while Guard One's marked boot, wax-stained pouch, and lantern hook now form a connected chain from the passage to the false bundle.

Quest Complete

Have Guard One explain the missing lantern hook

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