Adventure of Jostan Ordomo 1

Cyberpunk·Jostan Ordomo

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The Cell Answers BackHospital Trauma Bay
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Daven
Daven

Jostan reaches the intake doors as a young man stumbles in behind him. His fitted charcoal pilot suit is layered with damaged dark armor, and one hand clamps around a scorched mechanical cell housing.

The housing gives a weak electrical whine. Inside Jostan’s private buffer, part of the damaged woman in the recording’s route marker decrypts, and the component answers with a brief matching pulse.

Daven

Daven

You saw that, right? The cell never responds to ordinary network traffic.

The young pilot steadies himself against the hospital wall. A cracked shoulder plate hangs loose, exposing scorched circuitry beneath, while his eyes remain fixed on Jostan’s cybernetic hand.

Daven

Daven

I’m Daven. My parents built the technology this cell belongs to. It should not be answering Helix Meridian data.

The cell pulses again, faintly synchronized with the route marker. The intake hall’s blue lights flicker across Daven’s damaged armor, and the hospital doors continue opening onto the rain.

Daven

Daven

Do you know why my parents’ technology is answering to Helix Meridian data?

“I study daven with the eye of anylasis and using the eye scanner, I say, to the father, the son and holy spirt, Amen. I look at him and gesture that i dont know”

SUCCESS (Good Perception, rolled +1)

Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

To the father, the son, and holy spirit. Amen.

Jostan raises the Eye of Anylasis and lets its scanner pass over Daven, the scorched cell housing, and the private route marker in his cybernetics. The scan resolves without resistance.

The Eye separates the signals cleanly: Daven’s cell technology is not Helix Meridian hardware, but its architecture is compatible with the route marker’s handshake. The pulse is a response, not remote control.

Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

I do not know.

Jostan gestures toward the cell, then opens his empty hand. The movement stays measured, avoiding the twist that would aggravate his ribs, while the scanner preserves its findings.

Daven

Daven

You scanned it and still do not know? Then the connection is older than Helix Meridian. My parents may have built the bridge without knowing where it led.

The cell gives one subdued pulse and falls quiet. The Eye records the result: shared compatibility, no command authority, and no evidence that Daven’s parents used Helix Meridian’s network willingly.

“what do you want I ask? and do you know how to treat almost broken ribs? pulling my shirt and exposing my brusied abodmen”

SUCCESS (Legendary Persuasion, rolled +4)

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Daven
Daven
Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

What do you want? And do you know how to treat almost broken ribs?

Jostan pulls up his shirt, exposing bruised skin across his abdomen. The movement tightens his breath, but he holds still and lets Daven see the damage.

Daven

Daven

I want the truth about my parents’ deaths, and I want to keep my friends alive. Your ribs need imaging, compression, and pain control. I can get you into the trauma bay without putting your cybernetics through another public scan.

Daven shifts the scorched cell housing under one arm and points toward the hospital’s triage corridor. His damaged pilot suit carries a maintenance access tag beneath the torn shoulder plate.

Daven

Daven

The access tag still works in emergency care. I can get you examined now, and I will tell you what I know about Finnick and Jijutoro while they stabilize you.

The hospital doors part behind Daven, revealing a marked trauma bay and a waiting diagnostic bed. His offer gives Jostan immediate treatment and a private route around the ordinary intake scan.

✓ Quest Accepted

Receive Daven’s account of his parents’ deaths

“I tell him Thank you Daven, my name is Jostan Ordomo, I reach my hand out to shake and take the help, before I do I scan him to see what I can find, seeing if hes lying about his parents death”

SUCCESS (Legendary Reasoning, rolled +1)

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Daven
Daven
Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

Thank you, Daven. My name is Jostan Ordomo.

Before taking his hand, Jostan raises the Eye of Anylasis. Its scan passes over Daven’s damaged suit, the scorched cell housing, and his biometric responses.

The scan finds no deception pattern in Daven’s account. His stress spikes around Finnick and Jijutoro, while the cell’s architecture confirms his claim about his parents’ technology.

Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

I believe you. Let me take the help.

Jostan reaches out and shakes Daven’s hand. The motion stays controlled around his ribs, and Daven answers with a firm grip before turning toward the trauma corridor.

Daven

Daven

Then stay close. The access tag should get us past ordinary intake, and the trauma staff can stabilize you before we talk about the rest.

Daven guides Jostan through the marked doors. The trauma bay recognizes the maintenance tag, unlocking a private diagnostic bed as rain glows across the hospital glass.

“As I see the hospital bed I cant help but let a tear out, then I knock out before I hit the bed”

SUCCESS (Good Health, rolled -1)

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Daven
Daven

The trauma bed waits beneath white surgical lights. Seeing it, Jostan’s eyes sting; one tear slips free before his knees give way.

He drops before reaching the bed. Daven catches him under the shoulders, but the sudden weight wrenches Jostan’s bruised ribs and crushes his breath into a sharp gasp.

Daven

Daven

I have you. Stay with me, Jostan.

Daven lowers him onto the diagnostic bed instead of letting him strike the floor. Jostan’s shoulder scrapes the edge, adding a hot sting to the collapse.

The bed accepts Jostan’s weight and activates its restraint-free medical cradle. Monitors bloom around him as his breath turns shallow and the trauma bay dims at the edges.

Daven

Daven

Trauma team, unconscious patient. Bruised ribs, withdrawal symptoms, and a cybernetic weapon secured. Start stabilization now.

The last thing Jostan hears is the diagnostic system answering Daven’s access tag. Then consciousness cuts out, with the bed beneath him and the pain held inside his ribs.

“Is my body being coorperative?”

NO (VeryUnlikely, rolled 80)

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Daven
Daven

The diagnostic cradle reports unstable respiration and irregular neural response. Jostan’s body does not settle into treatment; each assisted breath meets a shallow, resistant hitch.

Daven

Daven

His body is fighting the stabilization cycle. Lower the input and keep the ribs still.

The trauma system reduces the medication flow, but the monitors continue to climb and dip without rhythm. No sedative takes hold cleanly, and the cradle cannot make him cooperative.

Daven

Daven

Jostan, you are not failing. Your systems are rejecting the help. We need to work around you.

Daven braces the bed frame and watches the medical display recalculate. The scan confirms bruised ribs, withdrawal strain, and cybernetic interference, but offers no clean route through them.

Jostan remains unconscious beneath the surgical lights. His body is being kept alive and monitored, but it refuses to cooperate with the treatment meant to stabilize it.

Daven

Daven

Stay down, friend. I will keep them from forcing the system while you cannot answer.

“jesus christ daven let me tell you something, I then tell him why my ribs are hruting and how he should try some eolite with me sometime trying to make light of the sitution, I go to sleep”

SUCCESS (Legendary Persuasion, rolled +0)

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Daven
Daven

Jostan’s eyes open beneath the surgical lights. His breath catches against the bruising in his ribs, but the diagnostic cradle loosens its support enough for him to speak.

Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

Jesus Christ, Daven. Let me tell you something. My ribs hurt because I got caught in a buried-system mess, fought my way through it, and then collapsed. When we are both standing again, you should try working with some eolite with me sometime. It might make this whole disaster feel less ridiculous.

The joke costs Jostan a shallow breath and a tightening across his chest, but his voice reaches Daven clearly. The pilot’s guarded expression softens without losing its caution.

Daven

Daven

I understand the ribs now. And I will remember the eolite offer, but I am not touching it blindly. You have made that a promise, Jostan, which means I will expect answers when you wake up.

Daven’s acceptance gives Jostan the help he wanted, but turns the joke into a real obligation. The monitors settle as the cradle resumes its careful stabilization cycle.

Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

The lights are too bright.

Jostan lets his eyes close and goes to sleep. Daven remains beside the bed, watching the medical readouts and keeping the trauma staff from forcing the system.

“Im asleep when i start having flashbacks of the past, of europa....that fucking shithole, I dream of the pink haired girl and illrya ordomo, I dream that everything went right, I sleep for 3 days”

FAILURE (Good Health, rolled -4)

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Daven
Daven

Sleep takes Jostan beneath the surgical lights, but Europa rises inside it: colossal trees, wet heat, and a horizon swallowed by dinosaur-like silhouettes. The place feels like a shithole even in memory.

In the dream, the pink-haired woman stands beside the damaged woman from the recording. Everything went right. No alarms sounded, no one was hunted, and the route opened cleanly beneath the green towers.

The perfect scene fractures whenever Jostan reaches it. Europa folds into the trauma bay, the women become reflections in dark glass, and the same unanswered route marker pulses behind his closed eyes.

Three days pass in broken cycles rather than rest. Jostan jolts awake, gasping, then sinks back into the same memory before his body can recover its rhythm.

Daven

Daven

Jostan, wake up. You have been under for three days, but not asleep. The cradle keeps losing your breathing pattern.

Daven lowers the medical input and steadies the cradle manually. The prolonged failed rest leaves Jostan dehydrated and disoriented, while the trauma system marks his neural cycle as unstable.

Daven

Daven

You need water and a controlled wake-up now. If you force yourself back under, the system may not bring you out cleanly.

The dream of Europa finally recedes, but it leaves its route marker burning in Jostan’s private buffer. The three-day sleep is over, and the complication is no longer something rest can solve.

“I drink water and get myself in a upright sat position I look at daven with agsnt, a little irritated that I feel like shit and I notice a green light at the corner and realize its eolite”

FAILURE (Great Agility, rolled -1)

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Daven
Daven

Jostan reaches toward the trauma bay’s supply tray, but no water is within reach. The expected cup is absent, leaving only dry air and the faint hospital hum.

He braces both hands against the cradle and tries to sit upright. His breath catches as his ribs resist the twist, and he manages only a crooked half-rise before settling against the support.

Daven

Daven

Slowly. You need water, but the dispenser is on the other side of the bed. Do not tear yourself open reaching for it.

Jostan turns his head toward Daven, irritation tightening his expression as the failed movement leaves him upright only against the cradle’s support. Daven keeps one hand near the controls.

A green indicator glows at the corner of the trauma bay, partly hidden behind a diagnostic cabinet. Its color is too steady and too bright for an ordinary status lamp.

Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

That is eolite.

Daven

Daven

You saw the green light. I do not know what it is, but the hospital keeps it isolated from the trauma systems.

The attempt leaves Jostan upright but dependent on the cradle, thirsty and unable to reach either the missing water or the green-lit cabinet without help.

“Daven look at you, all strong and fit, and a sick man is in front of you, be a darling and hand me that water and strange green light, please get me some food while your on the move, I prefer meat, steak, eggs and avocado if possible”

SUCCESS (Legendary Persuasion, rolled +2)

Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

Daven, you look strong enough to carry the whole ward. Please bring me that water, the strange green light, and some food if you can. Steak, eggs, and avocado would be perfect.

Daven studies Jostan’s pale face and the steady green indicator. The request lands without resistance; he moves with careful confidence, keeping the trauma cradle and its cables undisturbed.

Daven

Daven

Water first, then the isolated module and whatever food the kitchen can spare. Stay supported, Jostan. I will be back before you try standing again.

Daven retrieves a sealed hospital bottle, then opens the diagnostic cabinet’s maintenance latch. He lifts out the green-lit module in a padded isolation sleeve, its glow contained behind transparent shielding.

He returns with the water and places it within Jostan’s reach, followed by the sleeved module. A short kitchen call secures hot steak, eggs, and avocado on a covered tray.

Daven

Daven

There. The green device is isolated, the water is yours, and food is on its way. Whatever this module is, it answered your route marker without taking control.

The bottle rests against Jostan’s hand, the isolated green module glows beside the cradle, and the promised meal arrives under a hospital cover. Daven remains close, watching both the monitors and the device.

+ New Item Acquired

Hospital Water Bottle

+ New Item Acquired

Green Module

+ New Item Acquired

Covered Food Tray

“I start crying as I start devoring the steak eggs and avocado, inmy head I didnt think they had quality food like this, Ive never had itr before in my life, I look at the green module and scan it for anything unusual, i state right then and there that i will get over this addiction and I put the green eolite in the bullets of my jimmy, chugging the water bottle last”

SUCCESS (Good Perception, rolled +0)

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Jostan tears into the steak, eggs, and avocado with shaking urgency. Tears slip down his face as each rich bite registers as something entirely new, while the water bottle waits beside him.

Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

I never knew food could taste like this.

Between bites, Jostan raises the Eye of Anylasis toward the sleeved green module. The scan identifies refined eolite energy material, compatible with the route marker and the Jimmy’s ammunition system, with no remote command signal.

Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

I will get over this addiction. I am going to get better.

Jostan opens the isolation sleeve and transfers the green eolite into the Jimmy’s prepared bullet channels. The material seats as an energy charge, leaving the ammunition loaded and the module’s response stable.

Daven

Daven

The charge took cleanly. That weapon is carrying the eolite now, but the module is still stable.

Jostan drains the water bottle in one long pull, then lowers it beside the empty plate. His breath remains rough, but the meal, scan, declaration, and loaded Jimmy are complete.

“Will my health get better?”

NO, AND WORSE (Likely, rolled 93)

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Daven
Daven

The loaded Jimmy gives a sharp electronic chirp. The eolite charge answers Jostan’s private route marker, then sends a pulse through his cybernetics and into the trauma cradle.

The monitors flash red. Jostan’s breathing turns shallow and uneven as the medical system withdraws its support, detecting a feedback loop it cannot isolate from his neural hardware.

Daven

Daven

Put the weapon down. The charge is not stable anymore, and your cybernetics are carrying the reaction into your body.

A containment shutter drops between the Jimmy and the isolated module, but the pulse has already spread. Jostan’s health readings fall below the trauma bay’s safe range.

Daven

Daven

Stay awake, Jostan. I am cutting the cradle’s power before it amplifies the feedback. This is worse than the withdrawal.

Daven reaches for the emergency controls as the eolite glow intensifies behind its sleeve. The weapon remains charged, Jostan’s condition worsens, and the trauma bay begins sealing itself from the hospital network.

“Hahahaah I start laughing, you think this will kill me? I shout hysterically, i grit my teeth and buckle down, I force my body to feel better exerting the reisdue of the eolite, scan myself for anything”

SUCCESS (Good Perception, rolled +0)

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Daven
Daven
Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

Hahahaah! You think this will kill me?

Jostan grits his teeth and braces against the cradle as the feedback surges through him. His bruised ribs seize under the strain, but he forces the eolite residue through his cybernetic channels instead of letting it scatter.

Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

I am not letting this thing decide what happens to me!

The Eye of Anylasis opens across Jostan’s vision. It maps the reaction from the Jimmy, through the route marker, and into the trauma cradle, isolating the residue as a temporary conductive bridge rather than a command signal.

Daven

Daven

The feedback is separating. Keep it contained. You are reading the reaction instead of feeding it.

Jostan’s scan completes: the eolite residue is compatible with his route marker, but the cradle amplified it through his neural hardware. He identifies the safe channel and diverts the excess into the isolated containment sleeve.

The red monitors settle into steady amber. Jostan remains hurt and breathing hard, but the feedback is contained, the Jimmy stays charged, and the scan’s findings are stored in his private buffer.

“Daven do you believe in god i ask? shes out there watching at all times, you think ill die? well I know I wont because she is on my side I force myself to throw getting everything out my system, call a doctor I need to get out of here today”

FAILURE (Good Health, rolled +1)

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Daven
Daven
Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

Daven, do you believe in God? She is out there watching all the time. Do you think I will die? I know I will not. She is on my side. Call a doctor. I need to leave today.

Jostan forces himself forward against the cradle and tries to empty his stomach. The effort becomes a dry, painful heave; his bruised ribs clamp down, and nothing comes up.

The attempt leaves his breath ragged and the amber monitors climbing again. The cradle tightens its support automatically, preventing him from standing or repeating the strain without assistance.

Daven

Daven

I do not know about God. I know you are alive, and I know forcing yourself like that could reopen the injury. I am calling the doctor now.

Daven uses the pilot access tag to open the trauma bay’s private medical channel. The system rejects immediate release, but displays a same-day discharge review once a doctor confirms Jostan can breathe and move safely.

Daven

Daven

There is a path out today, but it requires clearance. I can request the review and arrange a supported exit instead of letting you tear yourself apart getting up.

The monitors settle back to amber. Jostan remains held by the cradle, unable to force the matter physically, but the discharge review is now active and the hospital has a concrete route toward release.

✓ Quest Accepted

Secure clearance to leave the hospital

− Scene Quest Removed

Receive Daven’s account of his parents’ deaths

“Alright I say with a sigh, have the doctor check on my internal organs and I need to understand why I cant get better”

SUCCESS (Legendary Persuasion, rolled -1)

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Daven
Daven
Dr. Sera Vennick
Dr. Sera Vennick
Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

Alright. Have the doctor check my internal organs. I need to understand why I cannot get better.

Daven relays the request through the private channel. A middle-aged woman doctor enters, compact and steady, with dark braided hair, copper-brown skin, and a white coat threaded with diagnostic lights.

Dr. Sera Vennick

Dr. Sera Vennick

I am Dr. Sera Vennick. I will scan your organs, neural interfaces, and medication pathways, then explain every result plainly.

The cradle opens its internal scanner. Blue diagnostic bands pass through Jostan’s torso without pressure, mapping his ribs, organs, bloodstream, and cybernetic channels while Daven watches the display.

Dr. Sera Vennick

Dr. Sera Vennick

Your organs are functioning. The slow recovery comes from withdrawal stress, disrupted neural regulation, and the eolite feedback that overloaded your cybernetics. Nothing is silently failing.

The scan confirms the explanation in layered charts. Treatment has been fighting several systems at once, but the feedback is contained, and the doctor adjusts the plan toward hydration, monitored withdrawal care, and rib recovery.

Dr. Sera Vennick

Dr. Sera Vennick

You can improve. We will stop forcing your body to stabilize on its own and treat each cause separately. I am authorizing the discharge review with that plan documented.

“Thank you very much doctor, how long until I get better, if i have to I will stay here”

SUCCESS (Legendary Reasoning, rolled +0)

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Daven
Daven
Dr. Sera Vennick
Dr. Sera Vennick
Jostan Ordomo

Jostan Ordomo

Thank you, Doctor. How long until I get better? If I have to, I will stay here.

Jostan keeps one hand against the cradle while the diagnostic bands fade. His breathing remains guarded, but the results are clear, and Dr. Vennick reviews the discharge plan.

Dr. Sera Vennick

Dr. Sera Vennick

You should be medically stable enough to leave today with supervision. The withdrawal symptoms should ease substantially within three to five days, while your ribs should heal over roughly four to six weeks.

Dr. Sera Vennick

Dr. Sera Vennick

You do not need to remain hospitalized for the entire recovery. You do need hydration, monitored withdrawal care, medication as prescribed, and no strenuous movement until the ribs mend.

Daven watches the treatment schedule populate across the wall display. A supported discharge is approved, with follow-up checks arranged for the next three days and clear instructions for returning if his breathing worsens.

Daven

Daven

I can stay with you through the first checks and get you somewhere safe afterward. You will not have to manage the withdrawal or the recovery alone.

Dr. Sera Vennick

Dr. Sera Vennick

You are improving, Jostan. You may stay here if you prefer, but you are also cleared to leave today under Daven’s support. The choice is yours.

Leave the hospital safely

Quest Complete

Secure clearance to leave the hospital

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