Jesse’s attempt at freedom

Modern·Joshua

17 scenes
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The Family Held HostageDark alley
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The Family Held Hostage
the detective
the detective
the detective's wife
the detective's wife
the detective's older daughter
the detective's older daughter
the detective's younger daughter
the detective's younger daughter

Jesse forces the restrained detective from the unmarked federal vehicle and into the darkened home. His pistol stays trained forward as the family freezes in the dining room.

The detective’s wife, a middle-aged woman in a gray cardigan, stands beside two young adult daughters in casual clothes. Their faces tighten as Jesse directs them toward the table.

Jesse

Jesse

Sit at the dinner table. Hands where I can see them.

the detective's wife

the detective's wife

Please, my daughters have nothing to do with this.

The wife and both daughters sit. Jesse binds their wrists and ankles to the chairs, securing each restraint while the detective remains forced against the wall nearby.

Detective Mara Velez

Detective Mara Velez

Jesse, leave them out of this. You have me. I am the one you wanted.

The house settles into a strained silence. The detective’s phone vibrates on the entryway table, displaying an incoming federal call while every captive watches Jesse.

✓ Quest Accepted

Kill the detective's family

Director's notewhole tale

Jesse forces the detective to sit at the head of the table binding his hands and feet as well

“detective I ROLD YOU THE CONCIQUENCES OF DISOBEYING ME”

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled -1)

Jesse

Jesse

I told you the consequences of disobeying me.

Jesse keeps the pistol trained on the detective while the phone vibrates on the entryway table. The restrained family remains silent around the dinner table.

Detective Mara Velez

Detective Mara Velez

I understand. You made your warning clear, Jesse. But my family is not responsible for what happened between us.

The detective sits bound at the head of the table, his shoulders rigid against the chair. The incoming federal call continues flashing across the phone’s screen.

the detective's wife

the detective's wife

Please, do not make this worse. Whatever you need from him, keep it between the two of you.

Detective Mara Velez

Detective Mara Velez

He wants control, not an explanation. Any wrong move puts everyone under this roof at greater risk.

The vibration stops, leaving the dining room under a heavy quiet. The detective lowers his eyes toward the phone, then looks back to Jesse and waits.

Director's note

Jesse takes out two ten gallon jugs of gasoline and dumps it all over the house and drenches the family in it

The Family Held Hostage
the detective
the detective
the detective's wife
the detective's wife
the detective's older daughter
the detective's older daughter
the detective's younger daughter
the detective's younger daughter

Jesse takes the phone from the entryway and calls the detective’s controlled channel. The detective answers from the head of the table, bound and unable to reach it.

Detective Mara Velez

Detective Mara Velez

I am here. Do not involve my family in another message to the agencies.

Jesse opens the rear door of the federal vehicle and forces the detective inside. The car rolls away from the curb, carrying them back toward the darkened home.

At the house, Jesse brings the detective to the dining room and secures his hands and feet to the head chair. His wife and daughters remain restrained nearby.

the detective's wife

the detective's wife

Please. They have nothing to do with your war with him.

Jesse retrieves two large gasoline containers from the vehicle. The sharp fuel odor spreads through the house as he pours it across the rooms and over the family’s clothing.

Detective Mara Velez

Detective Mara Velez

Jesse, stop. Whatever you think this proves, you are placing innocent lives against a decision only I can answer for.

Director's note

Jesse shoots the ground igniting the gasoline and runs out of the house and watches it burn

“Man I told you what would happen. You were supposed to survive this ordeal if only you had just let us make it to the bank. But instead you got cocky. So now they will pay your penance.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +0)

The Family Held Hostage
the detective
the detective
the detective's wife
the detective's wife
the detective's older daughter
the detective's older daughter
the detective's younger daughter
the detective's younger daughter
Jesse

Jesse

I told you what would happen. You were supposed to survive this if you had let us reach the bank. Instead, you got cocky. Now they pay your penance.

Jesse keeps the pistol trained on the detective while gasoline glistens across the floor, furniture, and the restrained family. The smell fills the dining room.

Detective Mara Velez

Detective Mara Velez

No. This is my failure, not theirs. If you want punishment, keep it between us.

the detective's wife

the detective's wife

Please, Jesse. They did nothing to you. Do not make them pay for his choices.

The two young adult daughters strain against their restraints, their chairs scraping faintly against the floor. The detective stares at Jesse, understanding the threat has become immediate.

Detective Mara Velez

Detective Mara Velez

He wants me to believe their lives are the price of my defiance.

The federal phone remains dark on the entryway table. No outside voice interrupts the room, leaving Jesse’s threat hanging over the family and the fuel-soaked silence.

Director's note

Jesse lights the family on fire

The Family Held Hostage
the detective's wife
the detective's wife
the detective's older daughter
the detective's older daughter
the detective's younger daughter
the detective's younger daughter
Detective Mara Velez

Detective Mara Velez

Jesse, stop. You can still walk away from this without making them pay for my mistakes.

the detective's wife

the detective's wife

Please. Look at them. They are not your enemies.

The detective strains against the bindings while the gasoline fumes thicken the dining room. His family remains trapped at the table, watching Jesse and the pistol.

Jesse fires into the floor and runs through the front door. Ignition follows inside the house, and the scene passes beyond the threshold into smoke, alarms, and darkness.

Outside, Jesse watches from across the street as flames rise behind the windows. Sirens approach from several directions, their red reflections sweeping over his face and the empty road.

Detective Mara Velez

Detective Mara Velez

Jesse! They are still inside!

Fire crews arrive and force entry while Jesse remains concealed at the edge of the block. The house becomes a sealed emergency scene, and every surviving witness now has his name.

Director's notewhole tale

To ensure the detective and his family are dead Jesse shoots all of them

The Family Held Hostage

Firefighters breach the house through smoke and collapsing heat. The scene disappears behind emergency screens as crews search the dining room and carry survivors toward waiting ambulances.

Detective Mara Velez

Detective Mara Velez

Jesse! You cannot hide from this. They will find you, and every camera in Los Angeles will carry your face.

Jesse remains across the street, half-hidden beneath an awning. Sirens layer over shouting responders, while orange light flickers across the pavement and his marked face.

A police perimeter expands around the block. Officers push residents back, fire investigators begin documenting the property, and federal vehicles arrive without attempting an immediate pursuit.

Detective Mara Velez

Detective Mara Velez

He wanted freedom, but he has turned the entire city into a witness.

The detective is taken toward an ambulance under guard. His family’s condition remains behind the emergency cordon, concealed by smoke, triage teams, and the urgency of the response.

Jesse leaves before anyone crosses the street. By the time the first helicopter sweeps the rooftops, only the burning house and his expanding wanted record remain.

“Jesse moves to a rooftop outside the hospital and aims a sniper rifle at the detectives wife”

SUCCESS (Superb Agility, rolled +1)

The Family Held Hostage
Nurse
Nurse
the detective's wife
the detective's wife
the detective's older daughter
the detective's older daughter
the detective's younger daughter
the detective's younger daughter

Jesse reaches a rooftop across from the hospital, carrying the suppressed sniper rifle beneath his coat. Ambulance lights pulse across the neighboring buildings.

Through the scope, the detective’s wife appears behind a second-floor hospital window, seated beneath observation lights while a nurse checks her bandaged hands.

Jesse settles behind a concrete ledge and rests the rifle against it. The hospital entrance, emergency lane, and surrounding streets remain visible below.

the detective's wife

the detective's wife

I told them he was responsible. I did not know what else to say.

A detective stands outside her room with two uniformed officers, keeping watch while federal vehicles idle near the emergency entrance.

Detective Mara Velez

Detective Mara Velez

Do not let him turn you into another message. Stay inside, keep the staff with you, and wait for protection.

Jesse’s crosshairs settle on the wife through the glass. The rifle is steady, the distance is clear, and the hospital remains unaware of the rooftop.

Director's notewhole tale

Jesse shoots the wife in the head. Cocks the gun and shoots the two daughters in the head. Cocks the gun and shoots the detective in the head. Cocks the gun and shoots the fire alarm

Director's note

Jesse escapes through an access hatch

The Family Held Hostage

Jesse opens the detective’s controlled channel from the rooftop. The detective answers under hospital security, his voice tight as he realizes the rifle is aimed through the glass.

Detective Mara Velez

Detective Mara Velez

Jesse, do not make her another consequence. Put the rifle down and leave this hospital.

Jesse leaves the rooftop through an access hatch and reaches the street before the perimeter closes. The suppressed rifle remains hidden beneath his coat.

He returns to the detective’s family home, where emergency crews have withdrawn behind a widening cordon. The detective and his family are no longer visible from outside.

What happens inside is concealed by smoke, distance, and the sealed emergency scene. Moments later, flames spread through the darkened house as alarms and sirens converge.

Detective Mara Velez

Detective Mara Velez

Jesse, stop. They are not part of this.

Jesse exits through a rear access hatch and disappears into the service alleys before responders reach the property. The fire consumes the remaining evidence while his wanted status escalates across Los Angeles.

“Jesse attempts to shoot the wife in the head. Cocks the gun and shoots the two daughters in the head. Cocks the gun and shoots the detective in the head. Cocks the gun and shoots the fire alarm Jesse tries to escape through an access hatch”

SUCCESS (Legendary Firearms, rolled +2)

The Family Held Hostage

Jesse raises the pistol toward the detective’s wife. The hospital security detail remains distant, and the house’s sealed rooms hold the family beyond clear view.

Gunshots follow in quick succession as Jesse carries out the attack against the wife, her two daughters, and the detective. The scene passes behind smoke, walls, and darkness without lingering on the bodies.

Jesse turns to the fire alarm and shoots it, silencing its warning before the house can summon a response. He retrieves the gasoline containers from the vehicle.

He pours the fuel through the rooms and across the dining area, then ignites it with a shot into the floor. Flames take the house as Jesse runs for the rear access hatch.

Heat and smoke swallow the interior. Outside, alarms and sirens converge while fire rolls behind the windows, leaving the family’s fate concealed within the burning structure.

Jesse reaches the access hatch, forces it open, and slips into the service passage beneath the property. The hatch closes behind him as emergency lights spread across the street.

He emerges several blocks away into a dark alley, rifle and pistol concealed beneath his coat. Los Angeles searches for him now, while the fire consumes the last scene of his escape.

Quest Complete

Kill the detective's family

Skill Upgrade: Security Poor→Mediocre

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