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Alan Turing's schooldays; forbidden love in a 1920s British boarding school

Historical Fiction·Timothy

Alan Turing is a Tavern hero

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The School Concern
Patrick Mermagen
Patrick Mermagen
the senior prefect
The Senior Prefect

Patrick Mermagen brings Alan through School House’s side entrance, supporting his pace without touching the scraped knee. Behind them, the road toward the inn and Angel’s unanswered report remain unresolved.

The House corridor offers shelter from curious boys gathering near the quadrangle. Alan’s scraped palm stings when he braces against the stone arch, and Patrick immediately looks back toward the entrance.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

He needs a room and a basin, not an audience. The constable stayed behind, and Angel’s report proves only that he involved the authorities.

Footsteps cross the quadrangle. The senior prefect enters School House in immaculate uniform, broad shoulders squared, having received word of the constable, the sealed packet, and Angel’s accusation.

The Senior Prefect

The Senior Prefect

Turing, you will give me your account before you leave this house. A constable, a sealed packet, and Angel’s report make this a school concern.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

That report came from a private conversation and a disputed journey. You have not seen the packet, the damaged harness, or the constable’s findings. You cannot treat Angel’s word as proof.

The Senior Prefect

The Senior Prefect

I have not called it proof. I have called it a school concern. Turing may answer, refuse, or show precisely what my knowledge does not include, but he will not simply disappear again.

“I ask the senior prefect whether he agrees that I may remove all my clothes to bathe in the baths, while he observes.”

SUCCESS (Superb Reasoning, rolled +1)

The School Concern
the senior prefect
The Senior Prefect
Alan Turing

Alan Turing

Do you agree that I may remove all my clothes to bathe in the baths, while you observe?

The senior prefect studies Alan’s face, then gestures toward the bath corridor. Patrick remains near the side entrance, watchful but silent.

The Senior Prefect

The Senior Prefect

I agree, Turing. You will bathe under my observation, with no spectacle and no punishment. Mermagen may remain as your witness.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

I will witness it. The arrangement is clear, and nobody should turn an ordinary bath into another accusation.

The senior prefect leads them to the baths and keeps the door under his control. Alan removes his clothes as permitted, places them together, and steps into the warm water while the prefect observes from a respectful distance.

The Senior Prefect

The Senior Prefect

The permission is fulfilled. Wash properly, Turing. When you are dressed, we will record that this was a supervised bath and nothing more.

Steam gathers against the high windows. The senior prefect maintains his promised watch without comment, while Patrick stands outside the bathing area and the immediate dispute settles into quiet procedure.

✓ Quest Accepted

Show Mermagen my adolescent body

“I wash thoroughly while Patrick witnesses the supervised bath.”

Alan washes thoroughly in the warm bath, following the senior prefect’s instruction without haste. Patrick remains at the doorway, witnessing the supervised routine without entering or making it a spectacle.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

That is properly witnessed. He is washing, nothing more, and there is no breach to report.

Steam softens the hard lines of the bath corridor. The senior prefect keeps his promised distance and watches only to ensure that the permission is followed, while Patrick records the ordinary facts aloud.

The Senior Prefect

The Senior Prefect

Continue until you are clean, Turing. When you have finished, dry yourself and dress. This remains a supervised bath, not a disciplinary proceeding.

Alan completes the washing carefully, rinsing away the road dust before the water cools. No accusation interrupts him, and the senior prefect does not convert supervision into punishment.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

He has followed the instruction thoroughly. I witnessed the bath from the doorway, and the arrangement has remained exactly as stated.

“Does Mermagen find me attractive?”

NO, AND WORSE (Unlikely, rolled 97)

The bath is finished, but Patrick’s expression has changed. He looks at Alan with guarded discomfort rather than admiration, then steps back from the doorway.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

I do not find you attractive, Alan. I find this situation disturbing, and I do not want you testing that question on me again.

The senior prefect’s attention sharpens. Patrick’s words turn the supervised bath into a new concern, though no one treats the ordinary washing itself as misconduct.

The Senior Prefect

The Senior Prefect

Mermagen, state exactly what was asked and what you understood. Turing, you will not leave until this concern has been heard accurately.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

He asked whether I found him attractive. I do not. Worse, I think he is trying to make closeness and protection into another test of authority.

Patrick’s accusation leaves Alan facing a fresh account before he has dressed. The senior prefect orders Patrick to remain as witness and sends for a house authority, while the bath remains private and undisturbed.

“Will the house authority cane me for my inappropriate remark?”

NO (Likely, rolled 84)

The School Concern
Patrick Mermagen
Patrick Mermagen
Geoffrey O'Hanlon
Geoffrey O'Hanlon
the senior prefect
The Senior Prefect

Geoffrey O’Hanlon arrives at the bath corridor and listens before entering. The senior prefect remains at the door, while Patrick stands apart as witness and Alan waits to dress.

Geoffrey O’Hanlon

Geoffrey O’Hanlon

Mermagen, your account is heard. Turing’s remark was inappropriate, but it is not grounds for caning, and no punishment is authorized.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

Then please record the distinction accurately. I objected because I felt tested, not because the bath itself breached any rule.

The Senior Prefect

The Senior Prefect

The bath remains authorized and properly witnessed. Turing’s remark will be addressed as impertinence, not converted into a disciplinary charge.

O’Hanlon directs Alan to dry himself and dress, then orders Patrick to give his account once more in the dayroom. The senior prefect remains present, ensuring that neither boy is isolated or mocked.

Geoffrey O’Hanlon

Geoffrey O’Hanlon

Turing, there will be no cane for this remark. You will dress, hear Mermagen’s account, and learn that protection does not permit you to test another boy’s boundaries.

“I dress and hear Mermagen's account”

The School Concern
Patrick Mermagen
Patrick Mermagen
Geoffrey O'Hanlon
Geoffrey O'Hanlon
the senior prefect
The Senior Prefect

Alan dries himself and dresses carefully, gathering his clothes before leaving the bath. Geoffrey O’Hanlon waits in the dayroom, while the senior prefect keeps the corridor orderly.

Dressed once more in his Sherborne uniform, Alan enters the dayroom. Patrick Mermagen stands beside the table, with the senior prefect near the door and O’Hanlon ready to hear him.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

I will give it accurately. Alan asked whether I found him attractive. I said no, because the question made me feel tested rather than protected.

Patrick keeps his voice steady, though his shoulders remain tense. He does not describe the bath as wrongdoing, and nobody interrupts or turns his discomfort into a spectacle.

Geoffrey O’Hanlon

Geoffrey O’Hanlon

That distinction is understood. The bath was authorized; the question was impertinent. Turing, you will hear Mermagen without defending yourself or seeking punishment.

The Senior Prefect

The Senior Prefect

Mermagen’s account is recorded as given. Turing, respect the boundary he has stated, and do not make his protection another test of authority.

The hearing ends without punishment. Patrick’s objection remains separate from the supervised bath, and Alan is left dressed, witnessed, and expected to carry the distinction forward.

“Do I deserve a caning for my behaviour?”

NO (VeryUnlikely, rolled 48)

The dayroom remains quiet after the hearing. Alan stands dressed and unpunished, while Patrick’s boundary and the authorized bath remain distinct in everyone’s account.

Geoffrey O’Hanlon

Geoffrey O’Hanlon

No, Turing. You do not deserve a caning for this behaviour. You asked an impertinent question, but no punishment is authorized.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

That is what I wanted made clear. I was uncomfortable, Alan, but I did not ask for you to be hurt or displayed.

The Senior Prefect

The Senior Prefect

The answer is settled. Authority does not require a cane whenever someone speaks badly, and my supervision will not become a reason to impose one.

O’Hanlon’s ruling removes the immediate threat of punishment without excusing the impertinence. Patrick’s account remains believed, and the senior prefect’s presence serves as a safeguard rather than a spectacle.

Geoffrey O’Hanlon

Geoffrey O’Hanlon

You will carry both facts accurately, Turing: your conduct needed correction, but it did not deserve corporal punishment. The hearing is concluded.

“I ask Mermagen to come with me to compare our adolescent bodies in the changing rooms.”

SUCCESS (Superb Reasoning, rolled +2)

The School Concern
Patrick Mermagen
Patrick Mermagen
Alan Turing

Alan Turing

Patrick, come with me to the changing rooms. I want to compare our adolescent bodies, plainly and without turning it into a spectacle.

Patrick studies Alan for a moment, then leads him through the quiet corridor to the changing rooms. He keeps the door open and the arrangement ordinary, private, and nonsexual.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

I will come, Alan, but we compare height, build, and physical development with our clothes on. I will not be undressed for your experiment.

Inside, Patrick stands beside Alan before the long mirror. Their uniforms show the contrast clearly: Patrick is taller and sturdier, while Alan’s smaller athletic frame is narrow through the shoulders.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

There. You are smaller, but not weak-looking. I am broader and heavier, and neither fact tells us what either of us will become.

They compare their sleeves, shoulders, reach, and stance in the mirror, keeping the exercise factual. Patrick accepts the closeness because Alan has respected the boundary he stated.

Quest Complete

Show Mermagen my adolescent body

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