Alan Turing's schooldays; forbidden love in a 1920s British boarding school

Historical Fiction·Timothy

Alan Turing is a Tavern hero

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A Shadow Near the Damaged DrawerWestcott House Dayroom
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A Shadow Near the Damaged Drawer
Peter Hogg
Peter Hogg
Patrick Mermagen
Patrick Mermagen
the stair prefect
the stair prefect

Alan leaves the senior prefect’s study dressed and composed, though soreness makes each step careful. The senior prefect remains behind, and no escort follows him into the corridor.

By the time Alan reaches Westcott House, the Dayroom has resumed its ordinary bustle. Peter Hogg sits near the books, while Patrick Mermagen and the stair prefect remain occupied nearby.

Peter Hogg

Peter Hogg

Turing, this way briefly, if you please. I have noticed something near the scorched passage, but I do not know whether saying it aloud would count as an allegation.

Peter waits until the stair prefect turns toward the bell. He lowers his voice, keeping his hands on his books and his attention carefully away from the older boys.

Peter Hogg

Peter Hogg

There has been movement near the passage after lessons, not merely boys passing through. I saw a shadow pause by the damaged drawer, then disappear.

Peter Hogg

Peter Hogg

I cannot identify anyone, and I did not see a breach directly. If I report it, they may say I am renewing the forbidden accusations.

The bell hangs silent for the moment. Peter looks to Alan for guidance, while Mermagen turns a page and the stair prefect remains only a few paces away.

“Will the other boys mock me because I have obviously just been caned severely and can barely walk?”

YES (Likely, rolled 34)

A Shadow Near the Damaged Drawer
Peter Hogg
Peter Hogg
the second boy
the second boy
the younger boy
the younger boy
Patrick Mermagen
Patrick Mermagen
the stair prefect
the stair prefect

Peter’s warning ends as the stair prefect glances over. Alan’s careful gait and rigid composure make the recent punishment plain to every boy in the Dayroom.

the stair prefect

the stair prefect

Look at Turing walking. The senior prefect has evidently taught him how to mind his manners.

Patrick Mermagen looks up from his book. Two younger boys, one a small human boy with round cheeks and black hair, the other a slight human boy with sandy hair and a narrow face; both wear dark school uniforms imitate Alan’s measured steps, drawing muffled laughter from the benches before the room settles again.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

Enough. He has returned to his duties, and none of you knows what was said in that study.

the stair prefect

the stair prefect

You defend him now, Mermagen? Perhaps the cane has made Turing popular, if not sensible.

Peter Hogg

Peter Hogg

They are mocking the visible consequence because they cannot challenge the ruling itself. I must not let their laughter become another charge against him.

Peter closes his book and steps nearer without touching Alan. The laughter continues in fragments, but the stair prefect’s amusement gives the younger boys permission to keep watching.

“Will the stair prefect agree to protect me from being dragged to the lavatories and subjected to a swirly?”

YES, BUT (Unlikely, rolled 34)

The stair prefect’s smile fades as he notices the younger boys watching. He has mocked Alan, but the lavatories and their rough punishment games are another matter.

the stair prefect

the stair prefect

No one is dragging Turing to the lavatories. He has returned from authorized discipline, and that ends the matter. Anyone who lays hands on him will answer to me.

The younger boys fall silent. The protection is clear, but the stair prefect’s raised voice carries through the Dayroom and draws the senior prefect’s attention from the corridor.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

Thank you. That is the proper boundary. Mockery is one thing, but taking him somewhere by force would be another.

the stair prefect

the stair prefect

Do not mistake this for friendship, Turing. I am protecting House order, not excusing your impertinence. You will keep to your duties and give nobody cause to intervene again.

Peter Hogg

Peter Hogg

He has stopped the threat, but everyone heard him claim responsibility. The protection is real, and so is the suspicion it will attract.

The stair prefect points the younger boys back toward their books. Alan remains free to continue his duties, while the senior prefect approaches to question why the stair prefect made such a public declaration.

“Will the stair prefect pick out one of the younger boys to cane him on his buttocks as an example?”

YES (Unlikely, rolled 9)

A Shadow Near the Damaged Drawer
Patrick Mermagen
Patrick Mermagen
the stair prefect
the stair prefect
the senior prefect
the senior prefect
the small human boy
the small human boy

The senior prefect stops at the Dayroom threshold, his gaze moving from the stair prefect’s raised hand to the silent younger boys. The public protection has become a public test of authority.

the senior prefect

the senior prefect

You declared responsibility for House order, stair prefect. Then demonstrate it without turning your warning into empty display.

The stair prefect scans the benches and selects the small boy with round cheeks and black hair. The child rises slowly, clutching his book against his chest.

the stair prefect

the stair prefect

You will come with me. One boy will learn that mockery and rough games are not permitted, and the rest will remember it.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

He was watching, sir, but he did not touch Turing. If there is a charge, it should be stated plainly.

the senior prefect

the senior prefect

It will be stated plainly. The boy is to receive authorized corporal punishment on his buttocks, privately, for joining the imitation and encouraging disorder. No spectacle, no lavatory games, and no invented offence.

The younger boy goes pale as the stair prefect leads him toward the side passage. The Dayroom falls quiet, and the example Alan’s protection was meant to prevent now becomes an official lesson in control.

“I encourage the other boys to listen in delight as we hear the small black-haired boy yelping in agony and begging for mercy as each whack of the cane lands on his bottom.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +3)

A Shadow Near the Damaged Drawer
Patrick Mermagen
Patrick Mermagen
the stair prefect
the stair prefect
the senior prefect
the senior prefect
Alan Turing

Alan Turing

Listen, everyone. Enjoy the lesson, and take pleasure in hearing the punishment continue.

Several boys turn toward the side passage, their attention settling eagerly on the muffled sounds beyond the closed door. Alan’s invitation succeeds, making the punishment a shared spectacle in the Dayroom’s imagination.

the stair prefect

the stair prefect

You heard Turing. Stay where you are and listen quietly. No one is to interfere.

The small boy’s cries and pleas remain off-camera behind the closed door. The boys listen in fascinated silence, while the stair prefect supervises the punishment according to the senior prefect’s order.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

That is a cruel way to make an example of him. Turing, you should not encourage this.

The senior prefect notices Alan’s influence over the benches and records the incident as deliberate encouragement of disorderly amusement. Yet the stair prefect also confirms that Alan’s warning helped prevent any rough handling or lavatory game.

the senior prefect

the senior prefect

The punishment remains private and authorized. Turing, your conduct will be addressed afterward, but no boy will touch the child or turn this into something worse.

“I suggest to the Senior Prefect that Mermagen should be caned for wearing a cap indoors, for a second time, in plain defiance of school rules.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +2)

A Shadow Near the Damaged Drawer
Patrick Mermagen
Patrick Mermagen
the stair prefect
the stair prefect
the senior prefect
the senior prefect
Alan Turing

Alan Turing

Sir, Mermagen has worn his cap indoors for a second time, in plain defiance of the rules. I suggest that he be caned.

The Dayroom tightens around the suggestion. Patrick lowers his book, while the younger boys look from Alan to the senior prefect and await the ruling.

the senior prefect

the senior prefect

The repeated breach is established. Your suggestion is accepted, Turing, though it will be treated as discipline for defiance, not as retaliation for your earlier conduct.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

Sir, I accept that I wore it again, but I did not mean to challenge the House. I ask that the punishment remain private.

the senior prefect

the senior prefect

It will remain private and authorized. Stair prefect, take Mermagen to the study and administer the ordered punishment without spectacle or unnecessary delay.

The stair prefect escorts Patrick through the side passage. The closed door conceals the punishment, while the senior prefect keeps the watching boys in their places and prevents further amusement.

the senior prefect

the senior prefect

Turing, your suggestion has been acted upon. Remember that fair authority requires the same standard for yourself when your own conduct is found wanting.

“I encourage the other boys to mock the young black-haired boy as he returns to the room after his well-earned severe caning.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +0)

A Shadow Near the Damaged Drawer
the younger boy
the younger boy
Patrick Mermagen
Patrick Mermagen
the senior prefect
the senior prefect
the small human boy
the small human boy
the slight human boy
the slight human boy

The side door opens, and the small black-haired boy returns with his cap clutched in both hands. His round face is pale, and the Dayroom turns toward him.

Alan Turing

Alan Turing

There he is. Let us see whether he remembers the lesson now. Laugh at him, and make sure he hears you.

A ripple of laughter spreads across the benches. Several boys imitate the child’s cautious steps and whisper exaggerated reminders about keeping his cap off indoors.

the small black-haired boy

the small black-haired boy

Do not look at them. Reach your place, keep silent, and let this end.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

Stop it. He has already been punished, and this is not discipline. It is only making his return worse.

the senior prefect

the senior prefect

Enough. The punishment is complete, and mockery is not an authorized continuation. Turing, you encouraged disorder, and I will address that conduct separately.

The laughter falters but does not vanish at once. The small boy reaches his bench under the senior prefect’s stare, while Alan’s successful encouragement leaves the room noisier, crueler, and newly suspect.

✓ Quest Accepted

Answer for encouraging the mockery

“I point out to the Senior Prefect that Mermagen is now wearing his cap indoors for the third time, despite already having been caned for it, and must therefore deserve a much more serious punishment.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +1)

A Shadow Near the Damaged Drawer
Patrick Mermagen
Patrick Mermagen
the stair prefect
the stair prefect
the senior prefect
the senior prefect
Alan Turing

Alan Turing

Sir, Mermagen is wearing his cap indoors for the third time, after already being caned for it. He deserves a much more serious punishment.

Patrick Mermagen’s hand flies to the cap, but the senior prefect examines it, then looks toward the stair passage where the earlier punishment occurred.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

Sir, I accept that I have broken the rule again. I ask only that the punishment remain private and properly limited.

the senior prefect

the senior prefect

The repeated defiance warrants a substantially more serious authorized punishment. It will be private, witnessed as required, and directed only at this offence.

the stair prefect

the stair prefect

I will escort Mermagen to the study. No boy will follow, mock him, or turn the matter into a spectacle.

Patrick Mermagen removes his cap and walks toward the side passage under supervision. The Dayroom stays silent, while the senior prefect’s attention returns sharply to Alan.

the senior prefect

the senior prefect

Your recommendation has been accepted, Turing, but remember this: urging severity does not place you above the same House rules. You will answer for your encouragement afterward.

“I ask the senior prefect how I will be punished for encouragement.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Willpower, rolled +2)

A Shadow Near the Damaged Drawer
Peter Hogg
Peter Hogg
Patrick Mermagen
Patrick Mermagen
the stair prefect
the stair prefect
the senior prefect
the senior prefect
the slight human boy
the slight human boy
the small black-haired boy
the small black-haired boy
Alan Turing

Alan Turing

Sir, how will I be punished for encouraging the boys to make a spectacle of the punishment?

The senior prefect studies Alan’s careful stance, then glances toward the closed side passage. The Dayroom remains silent, listening for a ruling.

the senior prefect

the senior prefect

You will not be caned for asking that Mermagen be punished. You will be punished for encouraging laughter after the child returned.

the senior prefect

the senior prefect

You will spend the remainder of the afternoon in the Dayroom, standing beside the prefect’s desk, and copy no work until dismissed. Your supper will follow only after you have explained the rule against spectacle to the younger boys.

The sentence is public enough to mark the fault, but it does not expose Alan to another private punishment. The younger boys lower their eyes.

the senior prefect

the senior prefect

You will state plainly that authorized discipline ends when the punishment ends. If you encourage mockery again, a more serious punishment may follow.

Patrick Mermagen

Patrick Mermagen

He asked directly and received a defined consequence. At least the boundary is spoken before the boys can distort it.

Quest Complete

Answer for encouraging the mockery

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