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A Cloak of Thorns

High Fantasy·Desdemona Blackwood

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The Trace Beyond the Lock
Corrin
Corrin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
the guild doorkeeper
The Guild Doorkeeper

The final binding thread around the accusation flashes a sharp blue, then dims. Warding along the stair and service lock gutters in sympathy, leaving the hall briefly washed in cold light.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

That was no ordinary settling. The report carried a magical trace into the guildhouse.

Mara tightens her grip on the newly bound testimony. Above them, the doorkeeper remains with the warded guest floor, while the service hall’s protective silver thread flickers like a failing star.

Corrin

Corrin

Then we have three possibilities. An intrusion, a flaw in the wards, or bait meant to pull our eyes from this exit.

Corrin crouches beside the service lock without touching it. He studies the dimmed runes, then the threshold, searching for changes that ordinary eyes would miss.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

Can you tell whether the trace entered through the report, the stair, or the lock itself?

Corrin

Corrin

Not yet. I can test the lock, but if someone wants us distracted, touching it may be precisely what they expect.

The blue afterglow fades from the binding, but a faint pulse answers somewhere beyond the service door. Corrin rises, keeping himself between the lock and the stair.

✓ Quest Accepted

Identify what caused the guildhouse wards to falter

Desdemona Blackwood's turn

“Desdemona bites her lip in frustration, realizing all at once just how badly she miscalculated. She takes in a deep breath and exhales, before giving her amulet a squeeze.”

SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +1)

The Trace Beyond the Lock
Corrin
Corrin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell

Desdemona bites her lip, then draws a deep breath through the frustration. Her clever schemes have tangled the possibilities, but she refuses to let calculation scatter her focus.

She squeezes the magic amulet. Arcane heritage answers as naturally as breath, and a contained warmth gathers beneath her palm, steadying her will instead of flaring wild.

The amulet’s warmth threads into the blue residue around the testimony and lock. Desdemona narrows her intent to one clear purpose: hold the magic in focus and read its direction.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

The trace is responding to you. Keep that focus, Lillia. The binding is no longer slipping.

Fire-born magic settles through the amulet in a disciplined pulse. The blue light stops guttering and forms a clean line from the bound report toward the service lock.

Corrin

Corrin

There. Your focus has separated the trace from the wards. I can test the lock without disturbing the testimony.

Desdemona exhales. The amulet remains warm and obedient in her grasp, while the accusation’s magic stands contained and legible beneath the guild’s cold lamps.

Desdemona Blackwood's turn

“Corrin.... Is it safe to proceed now?”

SUCCESS (Great Perception, rolled +2)

The Trace Beyond the Lock
Corrin
Corrin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
Desdemona Blackwood

Desdemona Blackwood

Corrin, is it safe to proceed now?

Desdemona keeps the amulet pressed to the bound testimony. Her arcane heritage lets the fire-born current answer as naturally as breath, sharpening the blue line without disturbing it.

The warmth guides her perception along the service lock. Beneath the wards, she catches the difference between a waiting mechanism and a hostile snare: the pulse beyond is steady, not advancing.

Corrin

Corrin

Yes. The trace is contained, and the lock is not baited. We can proceed.

Corrin sets two slender tools against the lock. Guided by Desdemona’s clear reading, he turns the hidden catch; the service door opens inward with only a muted click.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

Then go while the path is clear. I will keep the testimony and packet secured until the registrar arrives.

Beyond the threshold, a narrow passage descends toward the lower gardens. No alarm answers, and the clean blue trace continues ahead, confirming a safe route out of the guildhouse.

Desdemona Blackwood's turn

“Miss Vell.... I'm sorry to have involved you in this amount of danger. You as well Corrin.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Diplomacy, rolled +0)

Desdemona Blackwood

Desdemona Blackwood

Miss Vell, I am sorry to have involved you in this danger. Corrin, I am sorry to have involved you as well. Your protection has carried a cost, and I am grateful for it.

The apology is measured rather than ornamental, granting each their due without surrendering the practical urgency of escape. Her noble bearing lends the words formal weight, while her trained debate makes the gratitude precise and impossible to mistake for empty courtesy.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

You need not apologize for seeking protection, Lillia. You brought the guild defensible evidence, and we chose to stand behind it. I accept your gratitude, and I give mine in return.

Mara’s sternness eases. Desdemona’s careful acknowledgment has met the clerk as an equal partner, while the authority of her hidden lineage quietly reinforces the seriousness of the pledge between them.

Corrin

Corrin

Apology accepted, Lillia. I took this work because it mattered, and because you asked plainly. I will see you safely onward, without pretending the danger is yours alone.

Corrin’s sly grin returns, gentled by sincerity. He gestures down the descending passage, accepting the bond as willingly as the contract, and keeps his body angled toward the open way.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

Go, both of you. The guild will preserve the record, and your thanks are safely received. May the road prove kinder than the house you leave behind.

Desdemona Blackwood's turn

“Thank you. One day, I WILL repay you all. She then leaves, descending down the stairs.”

SUCCESS (Legendary Diplomacy, rolled +1)

The Trace Beyond the Lock
Corrin
Corrin
Mara Vell
Mara Vell
Desdemona Blackwood

Desdemona Blackwood

Thank you. One day, I will repay you all.

Desdemona’s promise carries the formal weight of noble blood and the precise balance of practiced debate. It honors Mara and Corrin as trusted allies without delaying the escape.

Mara Vell

Mara Vell

Then repay us by surviving, Lillia. That will be more than enough for today.

Corrin

Corrin

And when fortune gives you the chance, make the repayment worth remembering. Until then, keep moving.

Mara inclines her head with grave acceptance, while Corrin offers a softened grin. Desdemona turns from them and descends the narrow stairs beyond the service door.

The passage carries her beneath the guildhouse and toward the lower gardens. Behind her, Mara returns to the secured testimony, and Corrin remains above until the way is safely clear.

Desdemona Blackwood's turn

“I inspect the trace for Gideon’s signature”

SUCCESS (Great Perception, rolled +0)

Desdemona steadies the magic amulet against the blue trace and studies its rhythm, letting her arcane heritage make the fire-born current answer as naturally as breath.

Her first instinct is to sort the markings into an elegant scheme, but that cleverness muddies the pattern. She discards the attractive theory and examines the residue more plainly.

The amulet warms. Beneath the report’s binding, she finds a dry, impatient magical cadence threaded through the trace, carrying the unmistakable imprint of Gideon Blackwood’s will.

Desdemona Blackwood

Desdemona Blackwood

The trace bears Gideon’s signature, but another hand carried it into the guild’s wards.

The knowledge settles decisively, though extracting it costs several guarded minutes. The pulse remains contained, yet its secondary carrier resists identification beneath the layered report.

Corrin

Corrin

You found him in the trace, then. Gideon’s signature is enough to strengthen the accusation, even if the carrier stays hidden for now.

Quest Complete

Desdemona Blackwood

Determine whether Gideon’s reach has entered the guildhouse

Attribute Upgrade: Perception Great→Superb

New gift: Reads Hidden Alliances

Desdemona Blackwood's turn

“I leave through the garden passage with Corrin”

FAILURE (Mediocre Agility, rolled -1)

The Trace Beyond the Lock
Corrin
Corrin

Desdemona descends with Corrin through the narrow passage, the blue trace guiding them toward the lower gardens. Cold air and the scent of damp soil gather ahead.

The stair ends at a sunken stone arch, but the garden passage beyond is sealed by pale roots of light. They twist across the opening without touching the walls.

Corrin

Corrin

That was not here when I checked the route. The trace led us to a barrier, not an exit.

The amulet’s warmth tightens against Desdemona’s palm. Each pulse from the hidden carrier answers through the luminous roots, making the seal brighten but not break.

Corrin

Corrin

I can work the stonework around it, but forcing the arch may alert whoever planted this. We need another way through, or a way to quiet the ward.

Corrin kneels beside the arch and examines its joints without touching the shining roots. Behind them, the guildhouse remains silent, while the passage ahead refuses their advance.

Corrin

Corrin

The gardens are close, Lillia, but we are not reaching them yet. Give me a moment to find what this seal is guarding.

Desdemona Blackwood's turn

“I leave through the garden passage with Corrin”

FAILURE (Mediocre Agility, rolled -1)

Desdemona Blackwood's turn

“I leave through the garden passage with Corrin”

SUCCESS (Superb Perception, rolled +1)

Desdemona holds the magic amulet against the luminous roots. Her arcane heritage answers like breath, and a controlled warmth reveals the ward’s interwoven currents instead of merely brightening them.

Desdemona Blackwood

Desdemona Blackwood

The ward is a veil, not a wall. Its current can be folded aside.

Through the amulet, she follows the blue trace to a quiet knot beneath the archstone. She guides fire-born magic around it, separating the barrier’s strands without breaking their seal.

Corrin

Corrin

There. Hold it steady, Lillia. I can move the stone once the passage forgets to bar us.

The roots of light unwind soundlessly from the opening and settle along the walls, leaving the arch clear. Cold dawn air rolls in with damp earth and crushed leaves.

Corrin

Corrin

The garden passage is open. Keep the amulet close, and let us put this guildhouse between you and Gideon’s reach.

Corrin leads through the sunken arch beside Desdemona. Behind them, the pale ward closes into a harmless line, while the lower gardens open ahead beneath the paling sky.

✓ Quest Accepted

Get beyond the country's reach

“The safest route may be through Cressdale. If we cut through that village, we'll be well on our way to Azarune.”

SUCCESS (Great Agility, rolled -1)

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