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A Cloak of Thorns

High Fantasy·Desdemona Blackwood

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Descent from the Broken Shrine
Corrin
Corrin
Peter Fellows
Peter Fellows

Peter steps past the shrine’s broken threshold, clutching the old page. He glances toward the silent blue pines, then starts down a narrow descent marked by fading charcoal strokes.

Peter Fellows

Peter Fellows

Every moment we spend studying this breach gives watchers time to close the shortcut. We need to move while the path remains open.

Peter guides the party between blue-pine trunks, identifying each charcoal mark and crooked root from memory. Fiona and Maddie remain behind at the farmhouse, safely away from the shrine.

Corrin

Corrin

A hurried route can be safer than a magical breach, but only if Peter remembers the descent correctly.

Corrin crouches beside the first descent, studying scuffed needles, old hoofprints, and the gaps between the trees. He tests a loose stone with his boot, then watches the slope below.

Corrin

Corrin

The path is recently used, but I see no fresh snare or sign of someone waiting. Peter’s route is safer than lingering beside that breach, for now.

Peter continues downward, one hand brushing each charcoal mark as the shrine vanishes behind the trees. Corrin remains alert at the rear, leaving Desdemona the choice of whether to follow or pause.

Desdemona Blackwood's turn

“I'm starting to fear this all has to do with something larger than inheritance. I'm worried about what my family may actually be involved with..... And what I'm involving all of you in.”

SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +2)

Descent from the Broken Shrine
Corrin
Corrin
Peter Fellows
Peter Fellows
Desdemona Blackwood

Desdemona Blackwood

I fear this reaches beyond inheritance. My family's secrets may have endangered you both, and I am sorry for involving you in them.

The words leave Desdemona carefully measured, her scheming instinct turning even guilt into a controlled confession. Yet her noble bearing lends the admission unmistakable weight, and neither companion dismisses it.

Corrin

Corrin

You did not drag me anywhere, dearie. I chose this road after seeing what you were up against, and I am still choosing it.

Peter Fellows

Peter Fellows

And you protected Fiona and Granny by bringing us the truth instead of hiding it. That matters more than where the danger began.

Peter's voice trembles, but his meaning does not. Ahead, the charcoal marks continue down the slope, and the party's quiet understanding settles into a shared resolve to keep moving.

Corrin

Corrin

Whatever your family is tangled in, we will face the next piece together. Now keep walking, and let the forest worry about catching us.

Corrin gestures down the descent. Peter resumes leading, and the three companions leave the shrine's hidden breach behind without abandoning the question it raised.

Desdemona Blackwood's turn

“Without thinking, Desdemona reaches for Corrin's hand for comfort.”

SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +0)

Descent from the Broken Shrine
Corrin
Corrin
Peter Fellows
Peter Fellows

Without thinking, Desdemona reaches across the narrow path and finds Corrin’s hand. Her fingers close around his, a quiet appeal for comfort rather than a request for words.

Her noble bearing lends the unplanned gesture a delicate authority, making it feel less like a surrender than a privilege briefly granted. The success steadies her, but the effort costs her composure.

Corrin

Corrin

Easy, dearie. I have you.

Corrin’s hand closes around hers at once. Desdemona’s breath catches, and for one exposed moment she cannot resume walking or disguise how much the reassurance reaches her.

Peter Fellows

Peter Fellows

We can pause for a moment, if you need one. The marks continue down the slope, and no one is chasing us yet.

Peter looks away quickly, granting her privacy. Corrin does not release her hand until her breathing steadies, then guides her onward through the blue-pine shadows.

Desdemona Blackwood's turn

“No... I'm sorry. We should keep going.”

SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +2)

Desdemona Blackwood

Desdemona Blackwood

No... I'm sorry. We should keep going.

Desdemona releases Corrin’s hand and straightens her shoulders. Pride urges her to hide the lapse and refuse further comfort, but her noble discipline turns that impulse toward composure instead of denial.

Corrin

Corrin

That is all I needed to hear, dearie. I will walk beside you, not carry you.

Her breathing settles. Desdemona steps forward beneath the blue pines, her pace measured and steady, while Corrin keeps close enough to offer support without taking her choice from her.

Peter Fellows

Peter Fellows

The charcoal marks grow clearer below. We should reach the old track soon, if the descent keeps this direction.

Peter leads on, his ears lifting as the slope eases. Behind him, Corrin gives Desdemona a small, approving glance, and the three continue downward together.

Desdemona Blackwood's turn

“"What has come over me?", Desdemona thinks to herself, chastising herself for her sudden dependence on Corrin.”

SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +0)

Desdemona Blackwood

Desdemona Blackwood

What has come over me? I must regain control. Corrin's kindness does not make dependence acceptable.

Desdemona straightens beneath the blue pines, using the practiced dignity of her noble bearing to gather her scattered composure. Her pride resists accepting comfort, but discipline gives that resistance a useful shape.

The effort succeeds. She resumes her measured pace and keeps her hands to herself, though the strain leaves a faint tremor in her breath and a costly weariness behind her eyes.

Corrin

Corrin

There you are, dearie. I will not mistake your composure for a promise to manage everything alone.

Corrin's glance catches the hesitation she cannot entirely conceal, but he asks no more of her. Peter's charcoal marks continue ahead as the descent opens toward the old track.

Peter Fellows

Peter Fellows

The ground is leveling out. We should reach the track soon, and the route remains clear.

Desdemona keeps walking, composure restored and dependence suppressed, though each steady step costs a little more inward strength than she will admit aloud.

Desdemona Blackwood's turn

“"Thank the gods....", Desdemona thought, as they continued walking the path.”

Descent from the Broken Shrine
Corrin
Corrin
Peter Fellows
Peter Fellows
Desdemona Blackwood

Desdemona Blackwood

Thank the gods. The path remains clear, and we are still moving forward.

The descent levels beneath the blue pines. Desdemona’s pace steadies, and the lingering strain in her breath gradually eases as the charcoal marks lead them onward.

Peter Fellows

Peter Fellows

There is the old track ahead. We made it down safely, and the marks still point east.

Peter’s ears lift as the trees thin around a broad trail of packed earth. Beyond it, the forest opens toward a pale strip of sky and the distant eastern shoreline.

Corrin

Corrin

Good. Keep that pace, dearie. We have distance on our side now, and no need to borrow trouble from the trees.

Corrin falls into step beside her without crowding her, while Peter checks the next charcoal mark. Together they leave the hidden descent behind and follow the old track east.

Quest Complete

Desdemona Blackwood

Reach the charcoal-burner's path

Attribute Upgrade: Willpower Good→Great

New gift: Charcoal Pathfinding

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