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Space Opera·Villa Sol

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Unauthorized Probe Detectedcommunications spine
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Unauthorized Probe Detected
Iven Rusk
Iven Rusk

The exterior access frame cycles open. A broad-shouldered middle-aged man in a white pressure suit crosses onto the station hull, his visor reflecting the newly powered arrays. He carries a sealed payment case and an inspection tablet.

Iven Rusk

Iven Rusk

Villa Sol? Iven Rusk, station superintendent. Your installation passed the immediate power test.

Iven, his helmet’s narrow amber status strip glowing beneath the visor and a scarlet inspection seal marking one glove anchors one boot to the access rail and raises the tablet between them. The payment case remains magnetically secured at his hip while green diagnostics scroll across the screen.

Iven Rusk

Iven Rusk

The readings are clean. I can authorize the handover as soon as I finish the inspection record.

The tablet emits a sharp warning tone. A red trace cuts across the array controller feed, identifying an external command path that does not belong to the station's authorized network.

Iven Rusk

Iven Rusk

That is not my command. Someone is probing the controller right now.

Iven Rusk

Iven Rusk

Do not disconnect anything yet. If the probe reaches the power rail, we could lose the array, the station, or both.

Villa Sol

Villa Sol

The tether is still clipped to the service bracket.

✓ Quest Accepted

Stop the unauthorized probe

✓ Quest Accepted

Obtain the installation payment

““You work for Kinetica right? Are you sure it’s not a routine company sweep?” I look at the tablet to try to see if they’re signals I’ve encounter before”

SUCCESS (Good Perception, rolled +2)

Villa Sol

Villa Sol

You work for Kinetica, right? Are you sure this is not a routine company sweep?

Villa Sol angles her visor toward Iven's tablet without unclipping the tether. She studies the red trace, comparing its timing, handshake structure, and packet rhythm with patterns stored in her memory.

Iven Rusk

Iven Rusk

Kinetica owns the contract, yes, but I am not running a sweep. Their maintenance signatures identify themselves. This one is masking its origin.

The tablet's magnified telemetry resolves beneath Villa Sol's inspection. The probe repeats a narrow-band challenge sequence, then withdraws before authorization can answer. Its cadence is familiar from Atlas intrusion packages, though the routing has been altered.

Villa Sol

Villa Sol

The cadence matches an Atlas probe, but the routing has been rebuilt.

Iven Rusk

Iven Rusk

You recognize it? Then tell me whether we should isolate the controller or let the probe expose its relay.

The red trace remains contained at the controller interface. Green power telemetry continues across the station rail, while the tether holds Villa Sol firmly beside the array.

““It’s an atlas corporation probe. If you don’t have contract with them I’d isolate it immediately. It could be subterfuge””

SUCCESS (Fair Reasoning, rolled +1)

Unauthorized Probe Detected
Iven Rusk
Iven Rusk
Villa Sol

Villa Sol

It’s an Atlas Corporation probe. If you have no contract with them, isolate it immediately. It could be subterfuge.

Iven’s visor turns toward the controller housing. The red trace continues its narrow challenge cycle, contained at the interface while green telemetry holds steady across the power rail.

Iven Rusk

Iven Rusk

Agreed. No Kinetica authorization covers this. I’m isolating the controller now.

Iven anchors his tablet against the rail and selects the isolation command. The controller severs its external handshake, preserving the array’s local feed while the hostile trace collapses into silence.

Iven Rusk

Iven Rusk

External access is cut. The array is still supplying power, and the probe did not reach the station rail.

A sealed diagnostic partition records the final packet sequence before the channel closes. Iven’s tablet marks the controller isolated and flags the event for Kinetica security review.

Iven Rusk

Iven Rusk

You were right to call it out. I’ll preserve the trace, and the handover record will note the intrusion before payment clears.

Quest Complete

Stop the unauthorized probe

Attribute Upgrade: Perception Good→Great

““Just doin my job partner. Anythin else need doin while im out ‘ere? Kinetica has me on contract for two more days””

FAILURE (Mediocre Diplomacy, rolled +0)

Unauthorized Probe Detected
Iven Rusk
Iven Rusk
Villa Sol

Villa Sol

Just doin’ my job, partner. Anything else need doin’ while I’m out ’ere? Kinetica’s got me on contract for two more days.

Iven Rusk

Iven Rusk

I can’t expand the work order myself. Kinetica hired you for the installation, and this intrusion already puts me outside the routine handover.

Iven’s tablet refuses his first attempt to append a maintenance task. The preserved packet trace remains sealed, but a secondary diagnostic pane exposes an unverified relay farther along the station’s communications spine.

Iven Rusk

Iven Rusk

There is one thing I can document for Kinetica. The probe touched a relay segment that was supposed to be offline, and I cannot inspect it from here.

Villa Sol

Villa Sol

The relay is a concrete lead, and it lies on the station rather than the open hull.

Iven Rusk

Iven Rusk

If you check that segment while you’re here, I can attach your findings to the security report. Kinetica may convert it into authorized follow-up work, but I cannot promise payment today.

He rotates the tablet toward Villa Sol, highlighting a maintenance route from the isolated controller toward the communications spine. The tether still holds her beside the array, while the route offers a clear next inspection point.

““I’ll check it out for you” he transfers me the payment for the solar panel installation. “Cya back inside” I begin to make my way further down the exterior access point toward the maintenance route”

SUCCESS (Good Athletics, rolled +0)

Unauthorized Probe Detected
Villa Sol

Villa Sol

I’ll check it out for you. Cya back inside.

Iven Rusk

Iven Rusk

Payment transferred for the solar-panel installation. I’ll meet you inside, partner.

Iven’s tablet chimes as the payment clears into Villa Sol’s account. He secures the transaction record, then turns toward the access frame while the sealed intrusion trace remains preserved.

Villa Sol clips the emergency hull hook along the exterior access rail and advances with the tether still secured to the service bracket. The route carries her beneath the station’s lit maintenance spine.

Villa Sol

Villa Sol

The maintenance route is stable enough to cross without pulling against the tether.

She reaches the communications spine and finds the offline relay segment housed behind a rectangular service panel. Its status light is dark, but a faint diagnostic pulse travels through the neighboring conduit.

Quest Complete

Obtain the installation payment

Skill Upgrade: Diplomacy Mediocre→Fair

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