
In the lee of the great rock, the team pants in the thin mountain air. River stands at the front while the sled creaks behind her, snow still clinging to the runners. Harold edges close, head lowered in a show of deference.

Harold
I get it now, River. Your calls, your pace, all of it. I should have trusted you sooner.
The words sound humble. His eyes do not. They stay hard, measuring the fork ahead, the drop beyond it, the gap where a mistake would leave a dog behind.

River
His posture is wrong for the praise he is giving.

Mack
Well, that is a sight. Harold sounding polite.
Harold lets the jibe pass. He keeps his shoulders tucked and his tail low, as if he means every careful word.

Harold
I mean to stay in line. Just tell us where to set our feet, and I will follow.
Only River can see the truth of it, the man is not yielding, he is clinging to position. The next dangerous stretch has made obedience useful, and Harold knows it.
“"Just make sure to remember that when it's less convenient for you as well," she warns.”
SUCCESS (Good Inspiration, rolled -2)


River
Just make sure you remember that when it is less convenient for you as well.
The words land cleanly. Harold’s lowered head stiffens for a blink, then he smooths it back into place.

Harold
Of course. I am nothing if not dependable when it counts.
His praise stays polished, but the glance he flicks toward the fork is sharp enough to cut. River catches the resentment tucked under it.

Mack
That sounded almost sincere.
A breath of wind needles through the pass. Snow grains skitter over River’s paws and the sled’s front rail gives a small, tired groan.

Harold
I am sincere. I am also standing where I can do the most good.
The team keeps its rhythm. Even so, River’s warning draws a thin, annoyed set to Harold’s mouth, and the strain in the line shows plainly in the way he holds back a step.
“"Then let's leave the rest to the trail," she shifts her attention to Ally and TicTac "Well, how was it?"”
SUCCESS (Good Inspiration, rolled -1)

River turns from Harold and looks back along the team, letting the wind take the edge off the moment. Ally perks at once, ears forward, while TicTac hesitates, then lifts his head from the line.

River
Well, how was it?

Ally
Good. I stayed on the track this time.

TicTac
I did too. I mean, I think so. It felt steadier.
Mack huffs a quiet laugh, and Joseph’s grip eases a fraction on the rail. Above them, Banks remains a dark shape on the ledge, still only watching.

Ally
You pulled us through that fork cleanly, River.

TicTac
And nobody got dragged. Which is, um, better.

Harold
It was acceptable. The left-hand track was the wiser choice.
His tone stays smooth, but his jaw tightens on the last word. The praise sounds borrowed, and River can hear the strain under it.
“She approaches TicTac gently, "Yes, TicTac, no dragging. And from how the traces felt, you were very good, especially for still training."”
SUCCESS (Good Inspiration, rolled +1)

River eases up beside TicTac in the traces, close enough for him to hear without the whole team having to listen. The wind skims snow across their paws, but the line stays steady.

River
Yes, TicTac, no dragging. And from how the traces felt, you were very good, especially for still training.

TicTac
Oh. Thanks. I, um, really tried to keep my feet under me this time.

TicTac
His ears lift, and he glances down the line as if checking whether the praise is real.

Ally
He did better. We all did better, but he really did.

Mack
That kind of steadiness matters. River noticed it, so he should too.

Harold
Acceptable work is still work. The team benefits when everyone holds position.
Harold says it smoothly, but the words come a touch too fast. His eyes stay hard on TicTac, not on River, and the borrowed approval shows its seams.
“She turns to Ally "that's what I thought too," she says gently.”
SUCCESS (Good Inspiration, rolled +1)

River turns from TicTac and gives Ally the same steady look, letting the praise settle without making a ceremony of it.

River
That is what I thought too.

Ally
I knew it. He kept his feet under him, and he stayed with the line.
Ally’s ears perk and she straightens in her harness, pleased to have her read confirmed.

TicTac
I, um, did keep up. I did.

Mack
You did. River called it right, and that is worth trusting.
Harold’s muzzle tightens at that, his approval held in place too long to be warm. Banks remains only a shape on the ledge, watching without moving.

Harold
Trust is earned by consistency. I am simply pointing that out.
“"Yes, Harold, we know you've offered many trails of consistency." She lets the words sit, and Harold wonder whether she's referring to complaints or strength.”
SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +0)

River lets the silence sharpen before it breaks. Her words land lightly, but the meaning beneath them does not.

Harold
...Careful. Consistency is rarer than noise, and I have seen enough of both.
A thin crack shows in Harold's polished manner. His ears angle back, then forward again, as if he catches himself too late.

Mack
That is not what you meant, Harold.

Harold
No? Then perhaps you hear what you prefer.
Ally glances between them, her bright certainty dimming into uncertainty. TicTac swallows hard and keeps his feet planted.

Banks
You all speak loudly for creatures on a narrow trail.
From the ledge above, Banks only watches, still as carved stone, while the wind drifts snow over the left-hand track.
“She turns her attention to Banks, "Now's a better time than last. Was there something you wanted to say?" She hopes her confidence well keep the rest of her team inspired in front of a stranger.”
SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled -2)

River turns her muzzle toward the ledge and lets the wind carry her calm voice upward. The team stays still behind her, listening.

River
Now is a better time than last. Was there something you wanted to say?

Banks
Only that your pack is loud for a narrow trail.
Banks shifts his weight, one paw scraping loose snow from the rock beneath him. The motion is small, but it pulls every eye higher.

Harold
He means what he says, then. Some of us know when to keep our place.
Harold’s polite mask returns, but it sits thin over his irritation. Mack sees it too, and his ears pin back in disbelief.

Mack
No, Harold. You keep reaching for River’s lead, then pretending it is humility.
A beat of silence follows. The team holds steady, and River has the answer now, plain in Harold’s stiff shoulders and cold stare.
“"It is not often your kind approaches us unless there's something you want or fear. If it really is just the noise, it would do everyone well to keep it down."”
SUCCESS (Good Inspiration, rolled +2)

River’s words hang in the cold air, steady and plain. Banks’ ears tip forward, and the ledge goes still around him.

Banks
You think that is all it is, noise?

Harold
He was speaking for himself. Some of us are trying to help here.
Harold’s tone comes out smooth, but his tail stays rigid. Mack angles his head, unimpressed.

Mack
Help does not sound like correction every time someone else leads.
The silence after that is thin and sharp. Harold looks away first, and the motion gives him away more than a shout would.
River’s challenge settles the matter for everyone watching. The peace holds, but Harold’s resentment shows plainly now, no mask left to hide it.
“River let's the silence hang, and looks with her gaze to the wolf, as if to ask 'good enough?'”
FAILURE (Good Willpower, rolled -4)

River lets the cold stretch between them, and then looks up at Banks again. The wolf does not move, but his ears angle, catching the silence River offers him.

Banks
Enough for now, perhaps. But I hear what is under the voices.
Harold’s jaw tightens at once. He keeps his face forward, but the set of him sharpens, all patience stripped thin.

Harold
You hear only what you expect to hear.
Mack shifts beside him, slow and deliberate, placing his body between Harold’s line and the rest of the team without saying a word.

Mack
Then say it plain, Harold. Are you helping, or are you counting the moments until someone slips?
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Harold’s stare flicks to Mack’s planted stance, then away, as if the ground itself has accused him. For a heartbeat he says nothing, and the silence shows the shape of his irritation more clearly than any words.

Harold
If I sound sharp, it is because someone has to watch the team, not flatter it.

Mack
Watch it, then. Stop hiding behind compliments you do not mean.
Banks shifts on the ledge above, one paw scraping snow loose over the drop. The powder skitters between them like a quiet warning, and Harold’s ears twitch at it before he steels himself again.

Harold
Fine. The truth? I do not trust a team that lets one bad call become a habit.
That lands in the open. Not a challenge, not yet, but a crack in the mask, honest enough to change the air around the sled and the snow-bright track ahead.
“Sensing something more exposed, River approaches the matter more gently "Harold... it's not only my mistake that you mean, is it?"”
SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +1)


River
Harold... it's not only my mistake that you mean, is it?

Harold
No. It is not just that.

Harold
You keep taking the front as if the rest of us can simply follow a strong voice and call it skill.
The words come out stripped bare, and the slope around them seems to listen. Even now, Banks stays high on the ledge, still and watchful, while the team waits for Harold to either sharpen his point or swallow it.

Mack
Then say what you mean.

Harold
I mean I am tired of being asked to trust judgment that has already put us at risk.
That answer changes nothing on the trail, but it changes everything between them. Harold is not pretending anymore, and the pass feels narrower for it, the next move resting on River and the others.
“River plants her paws. "Before our musher brought me in, my previous human would yell at me and discipline me without ever, ever showing me what I was supposed to do, but he was still my human then." She takes a couple steps forward. "So don't ever, ever presume I don't know what it's like to be on the other side of a leader's mistakes."”
SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +1)

River plants her paws in the snow and steps into the space between accusation and excuse.

River
Before our musher brought me in, my previous human would yell at me and discipline me without ever showing me what I was supposed to do. So do not presume I do not know what it is to stand on the other side of a leader's mistakes.
The pass goes quiet around her. Harold's ears flatten, and his hard set falters under the weight of a story he did not expect to hear.

Harold
That lands harder than my complaint.

Mack
...Aye. That is different from not caring.
Harold looks away first, the resentful line of his mouth loosening just enough to show discomfort instead of defiance.

Harold
I did not mean to dismiss that. I meant that I am tired of guessing where the line is with you.
“"Everyone else has found something that works for them, and Ally and TicTac aren't even done training yet." She sighs, "but if you really need it spelled out, keep it constructive at the time it's constructive. Moaning and whining doesn't count."”
SUCCESS (Good Inspiration, rolled +2)

River lets the silence sit for a breath, then speaks with calm that cuts cleaner than blame. The words land like a guideline in fresh snow, simple enough to follow.

River
Everyone else has found something that works for them, and Ally and TicTac are still learning. If you need to say something, say it constructively, when it helps. Moaning and whining does not count.

Harold
His jaw tightens, then eases. The complaint is still there, but it has nowhere honest to hide now.

Mack
Aye. That is the mark of it, then. Say the hard thing plain, or hold it until it means something.

Harold
...Fine. I can do that.
Harold does not look pleased, but the sharpness drains out of his posture. Even the air in the pass feels less tight, while Banks remains a wordless shape above, still watching.
“"As for you, wolf, what exactly is your business here?"”
SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +0)


River
As for you, wolf, what exactly is your business here?
River keeps her voice even. The question hangs in the cold air, aimed up toward the ledge where Banks watches without moving.

Banks
Travel. Territory. Survival. Same as yours, in a way.
He shifts his weight on the stone above, not retreating, not advancing either. The answer is plain, but the way he gives it says he is measuring River as much as the trail.

Mack
That is no idle wanderer. He is choosing his words.

Banks
I keep to the high ground because it sees farther. Your team made noise, then steadied. I wanted to know what kind of pack does that.
Below them, the team stays quiet, listening. Harold's ears angle back, while the drifting powder slips from the ledge in a pale sheet.

Banks
Now I know. That is enough for the moment.
✓ Quest Accepted
Learn whether Banks is a threat or ally
“"Glad we could teach you a valuable life lesson," she replies with some sarcasm, "if you're here to help, you haven't been helping."”
SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +0)

River lets the silence sit a heartbeat longer, then answers with dry calm. The words land cleanly in the cold, and Banks does not interrupt.

River
Glad we could teach you a valuable life lesson. If you are here to help, you have not been helping.
Banks blinks once, then huffs a short breath that might be amusement. His ears tip forward, not offended, just more interested.

Banks
Fair enough. I have not lifted a paw. I have only watched.
That answer leaves the old tension with Harold hanging in the air, but it does not deepen it. Instead, it makes Banks plain, a witness choosing distance over interference.

Banks
Watchers can still tell the difference between a loud pack and a steady one. Yours is steadier than it first sounded.
Below, the team remains quiet. Harold's posture stays stiff, while Mack keeps his attention on the ledge, waiting to see whether Banks speaks again.
“He means well, she'll give him that. But she's an athlete, and a leader. Under other circumstances, she might even appreciate his interest. She confirms she's out of earshot before speaking more frankly. "Look, I haven't missed the hints. But I have to take care of my team. If you really care, you need to give space."”
SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +3)

River waits until the pass feels empty enough for honesty, then she lays the point out plain. Her voice stays low, meant for Banks alone.

River
You mean well. But I have to take care of my team. If you care, give us space.
Banks lowers his gaze to the tracks, then back to her. The faint amusement leaves him, replaced by a thoughtful stillness.

Banks
That is fair. I was watching, not crowding. I can keep my distance.

Mack
That is the first sensible thing I have heard from him.
Banks flicks one ear toward Mack, but he does not bristle. Instead, he shifts his paws and makes room on the ledge, a clear retreat from the trail.

Banks
For what it is worth, your front runners hold their line well. Especially the nervous one.
Below, TicTac straightens at once, while Harold looks away, jaw tight. River has the answer she wanted, and one more thing besides, Banks is no longer just observing from above, he is giving ground.
Quest Complete
Learn whether Banks is a threat or ally
Attribute Upgrade: Willpower Good→Great