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Marked Lanes, Watch the Skyway

Cyberpunk·Kenny Brewster

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Warren Draws on Marekshelter approach
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Warren Draws on Marek
Warren
Warren
Marek Voss
Marek Voss
the woman in the red coat
The Woman in the Red Coat

The apartment door opens onto a narrow hallway washed in failing violet tubes. Before the elevator, a gaunt young adult man in a stained silver jacket, with sallow skin, hollow cheeks, close-cropped dark hair, and a cheap chrome neural port at his temple grips a young adult woman by her red coat collar, jerking her toward him.

She is a pale young adult woman with cropped black hair, a bruised-looking smudge beneath one eye, and a torn white blouse beneath the coat, slim-shouldered with a narrow jaw and a small silver nose stud. Her hands clutch at his wrist as the elevator numbers crawl downward.

Marek Voss

Marek Voss

You said you were coming with me. Stop making a scene.

Warren moves before the hallway can swallow another second. His brown trench coat snaps around his legs as he steps between them, a pistol appearing in his gloved hand and aimed low.

Warren

Warren

Take your hand off her. Now. Walk away while you still can do it upright.

The drugged man freezes, pupils shining strangely beneath the flickering light. The woman slips sideways, still tense, putting the elevator call panel between herself and his reaching arm.

Marek Voss

Marek Voss

Who the hell are you supposed to be?

✓ Quest Accepted

Get the woman safely away from the drugged man

“I follow my uncles lead, letting him lead the control of the situation”

Warren Draws on Marek
Warren
Warren
Marek Voss
Marek Voss
the woman in the red coat
The Woman in the Red Coat

Venci follows Warren's lead, holding back as his uncle keeps the pistol trained low. The violet hallway hums around them, elevator numbers descending one dim floor at a time.

Warren

Warren

You heard me, Marek. Hands where I can see them, then back away from the elevator.

Warren shifts one measured step forward, placing his shoulder between the woman and Marek. Venci mirrors the movement without crowding him, leaving his uncle the clear line of control.

Marek Voss

Marek Voss

This is between me and her. You don't get to—

Warren

Warren

It became my business when you put your hand on her. Step away.

Marek's grip loosens completely. The woman retreats behind Warren, breathing hard, while the elevator gives a soft chime and opens on an empty, flickering car.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

Thank you. I am leaving now.

“I use my body to block the space between Marek as i get on with her”

SUCCESS (Great Agility, rolled +3)

Warren Draws on Marek
Warren
Warren
Marek Voss
Marek Voss
the woman in the red coat
The Woman in the Red Coat

Venci steps through the gap, turning his body into a solid barrier between Marek and the woman. He guides her into the empty elevator without giving Marek room to reach past him.

The woman crosses the threshold quickly. Warren holds his low-aimed pistol on Marek while backing toward the car, keeping the hallway under control.

Marek Voss

Marek Voss

You think your uncle's coat makes you untouchable?

Warren

Warren

No. The gun does. Stay exactly where you are.

Venci clears the doorway with the woman safely behind him. As the doors begin to close, Marek's dropped access chip flashes on the elevator floor, now within Venci's reach.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

Take it. He used that chip to get into my building.

The elevator seals them inside. The chip remains on the floor at Venci's feet, while Warren's silhouette holds Marek beyond the narrowing seam of violet light.

✓ Quest Accepted

Take Marek's access chip

Quest Complete

Get the woman safely away from the drugged man

“I ask, "have you two been together long, are you dependant on one another or can you manage to find shelter and stability from here on?"”

SUCCESS (Fair Willpower, rolled +0)

Warren Draws on Marek
the woman in the red coat
The Woman in the Red Coat
Venci

Venci

Have you two been together long? Are you dependent on one another, or can you find shelter and stability from here on?

The elevator sinks through violet-lit floors. Venci's question hangs in the cramped car, and the effort of keeping his voice steady leaves a visible pause before the woman answers.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

Not long. A few weeks, maybe. Long enough for him to learn where I sleep, not long enough for him to become my life.

She steadies herself against the rail, eyes fixed on the closing floor display. Her breathing slows, though one hand remains clenched around the torn edge of her coat.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

I can manage. There is a night shelter near the old transit loop, and I still have a friend who owes me a door. I do not need him to survive.

The access chip skitters when the elevator jolts. She catches it before it slides beneath the panel, then holds it out to Venci with a tired, deliberate certainty.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

But I could use a few minutes to reach that door without him finding me first.

“I accept it and guide her respectfully and gently to safety”

FAILURE (Fair Streetwise, rolled -1)

Warren Draws on Marek
the woman in the red coat
The Woman in the Red Coat

Venci accepts the chip carefully and gestures for her to stay close. He guides her from the elevator with a light touch at her shoulder, keeping his pace measured and respectful.

The lobby opens beneath a dead bank of security monitors. Venci steers her toward the old transit-loop signs, but the chip reader beside the exit rejects the access chip with a sharp red blink.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

No. That is not a door pass. It is a tracker tag. If we use it here, whoever issued it gets our location.

She gently catches Venci's wrist before he can try the reader again. The intended route is lost, and the lobby's public doors now feel like a marked funnel rather than shelter.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

But the tag has a maintenance code. There is a service passage beneath the laundromat across the street. It reaches the old loop without cameras.

She points through the lobby glass toward a shuttered laundromat under violet signage. Behind them, the elevator display continues descending, floor numbers glowing through the sealed car.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

Please keep beside me, not ahead. If anyone asks, I am choosing where I go.

Quest Complete

Take Marek's access chip

Attribute Upgrade: Willpower Fair→Good

+ New Item Acquired

Marek's access chip

“I follow her instructions”

SUCCESS (Great Agility, rolled -3)

Warren Draws on Marek
the woman in the red coat
The Woman in the Red Coat

Venci stays beside her as they cross beneath the laundromat’s violet sign, matching her pace instead of taking the lead. At the shuttered entrance, his shoulder scrapes hard against a rusted service rail, leaving his jacket torn and skin stinging.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

That was right. You kept close without crowding me.

She ducks beneath the bent shutter and leads him into a narrow service corridor. Old dryers loom behind wire cages, their dead panels reflecting the pulsing street glow.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

The maintenance hatch is past the boiler alcove. Do not touch the cameras. They are old, but they still wake when they feel movement.

She moves shoulder to shoulder with Venci through the corridor, keeping him within arm’s reach. The access tag rests in his hand, its tiny indicator blinking against his knuckles.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

There. We can use the code at the hatch and reach the old loop from underneath.

She stops beside a dented maintenance hatch beneath the boiler pipes, and Venci arrives with her, still at her side. A recessed keypad waits under a film of dust.

✓ Quest Accepted

Escort the woman to shelter

“I keep a respectful manner and continue”

SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +1)

Warren Draws on Marek
the woman in the red coat
The Woman in the Red Coat

Venci keeps beside her, matching each careful step and leaving the keypad to her. The corridor’s stale air trembles with the distant hum of machinery.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

Good. Hold the tag out, but do not press it against anything. The code reads from a short distance.

She takes position at the hatch, keeping her shoulder aligned with Venci’s rather than stepping away. He extends the blinking tag while she works the dusty keypad.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

There. It accepted the maintenance code.

The lock clicks, and the hatch releases into a descending service stair. Cool air rises from below, carrying the metallic scent of the old transit loop.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

Stay with me down there. The passage is cramped, but it comes out beneath the loop, away from the cameras.

“I keep helping her to get to safety”

SUCCESS (Great Agility, rolled -1)

Warren Draws on Marek
the woman in the red coat
The Woman in the Red Coat

Venci descends beside her, one hand braced against the damp wall while the other keeps the blinking tag clear of the pipes. His boot slips on a wet step, and his knee strikes the metal edge hard enough to sting.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

You are hurt. Keep moving, but use my shoulder if you need the balance.

She catches Venci under the arm without pulling him ahead, matching his pace through the cramped stairwell. The impact leaves his knee sore, but his footing steadies and the descent continues.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

That door is the loop access. Once it opens, we are beneath the transit platforms and out of the building's camera grid.

At the bottom, she guides Venci through a low utility passage and keeps the tag raised. A sealed door unlocks with a muted clunk, opening onto the abandoned transit loop's shadowed maintenance platform.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

We made it. The shelter is two blocks from here, through the old concourse. Thank you for staying beside me.

“I continue with her, staying alert”

SUCCESS (Good Perception, rolled +2)

Warren Draws on Marek
the woman in the red coat
The Woman in the Red Coat

Venci follows her onto the abandoned platform, scanning the black tunnel mouths, dead signal lamps, and dust disturbed across the service tiles. His attention catches a faint electronic pulse beneath the station’s silence.

Venci

Venci

The pulse is repeating from the concourse, not the tunnel.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

You heard it too, didn’t you? The old station should be dead. Keep close, but let me see what is making that sound.

She moves toward the concourse entrance, keeping her red coat below the broken platform lights. Venci stays beside her, watching the ceiling corners and the dark glass of abandoned ticket kiosks.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

There. Under that kiosk. A maintenance repeater is still running, and its indicator is facing the access corridor.

A pinprick of blue light blinks beneath the kiosk, each pulse briefly outlining a wire leading toward the shelter route. No footsteps answer from the concourse, but the repeater’s lens has begun to turn.

“I ask her if she want me to use the key”

SUCCESS (Good Willpower, rolled +0)

Warren Draws on Marek
the woman in the red coat
The Woman in the Red Coat
Venci

Venci

Do you want me to use the key?

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

Yes. Use it on the repeater panel, not the lens.

She crouches beside the kiosk and exposes a narrow access slot beneath the blinking indicator. The wire disappears behind it, leading toward the shelter corridor.

Venci fits the maintenance key into the slot. The repeater accepts it with a soft chime, and its blue lens turns away from the corridor, revealing a green route light beneath the kiosk.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

That did it. The repeater is no longer watching the passage.

A concealed service door unlocks behind the ticket kiosks, opening onto a narrow concourse lined with dead advertisements and a clear path toward the shelter.

“I lead her”

SUCCESS (Fair Urban navigation, rolled -1)

Warren Draws on Marek
the woman in the red coat
The Woman in the Red Coat

Venci takes the lead through the concealed concourse, following the green route lights past dead advertisements and sealed ticket gates. The woman stays close behind him.

The route bends beneath a low service arch. Venci catches the safest turns by faded shelter markers, but his torn jacket snags on an exposed conduit and the sleeve rips farther.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

Keep going. I can still see the green lights.

Venci guides her around a collapsed advertisement frame and down a sloping access ramp. The shelter corridor opens ahead, its old emergency strips glowing steadily through the dust.

The Woman in the Red Coat

The Woman in the Red Coat

That is the concourse exit. You found the right way.

He leads her through the exit and into the shelter approach, away from the repeater’s turning lens. His sleeve hangs in tatters, but the route behind them remains clear and unobserved.

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