The Burden Between Eight Voices

Fantasy·Kenny Brewster

3 scenes
Scene1
A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gateround sealed chamber beneath the archive foundations
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A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
the dwarf guard
the dwarf guard
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard

Huuuan Huanza arrives slowly from odd background realms, his tall black-and-red caster cape and dark ash body resolving at the edge of Hrrunmmua. The vast city rises beyond its walls, dwarven towers and human roofs meeting the green forest and pale desert.

He passes toward the gates beneath watchtowers crowded with banners. Nothing seems wrong until a cluster of children spots his horns, long neck, and fanged doglike face.

The children flee shrieking into the street. Their flight scatters a nearby handcart and draws heads from market stalls, while the gate guards reach for spears.

A stocky dwarf guard, an older man with braided copper beard, square iron helm, and a blue-marked shield, steps forward. Beside him, a young half-elf woman in a green cloak raises one steadying hand.

the dwarf guard

the dwarf guard

Hold there, stranger! By the gate law, state your name and purpose before this crowd panics further.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

Lower your weapons, everyone. He has not attacked anyone. You, traveler, remain where you are and speak plainly.

The gates stand open behind them, but every eye along the road now fixes on Huuuan Huanza. The guards wait, tense and watchful, leaving the next move to him.

✓ Quest Accepted

Gain permission to enter Hrrunmmua without restraint

“My name is Huuuan, I am an immortal and i wish to help arteris, i hold the keeper father postition to nearly all races”

SUCCESS (Great Willpower, rolled +0)

Huuuan Huanza

Huuuan Huanza

My name is Huuuan. I am immortal, and I wish to help Arteris. I hold the keeper-father position to nearly all races.

His voice rolls across the gate court, deeper than expected, and the final words echo against the watchtowers. The cost is immediate: every nearby banner trembles from the resonance.

the dwarf guard

the dwarf guard

Huuuan, then. Immortal claims are cheap beneath a gate, and keeper-father is a title broad enough to frighten any council.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

Yet he has given a name and a purpose. Lower those spears. Let him stand beneath the wardstone and be witnessed properly.

The guards do not bar his passage. The half-elf gestures toward a carved black stone beside the open gate, while the dwarf keeps his shield raised.

the dwarf guard

the dwarf guard

You may enter Hrrunmmua under watch, Huuuan. The wardstone will mark your declaration, and the city will hear that you came offering aid.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

Walk slowly, keeper-father. Help is welcome here, but immortality earns no exemption from our laws.

Quest Complete

Gain permission to enter Hrrunmmua without restraint

“I can attempt to take the form of a simple human if that would relax the city”

FAILURE (Fair Illusion, rolled -4)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
the dwarf guard
the dwarf guard
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard

Huuuan gathers his many forms inward beneath the black-and-red cape. Ash-dark limbs contract, horns sink, and his towering silhouette briefly resembles a simple man.

The transformation buckles before completion. One shoulder remains too long, the jaw stretches into a fanged wedge, and a second shadow moves half a breath behind him.

the dwarf guard

the dwarf guard

By the deep roads, stop that sorcery! You are not calming anyone.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

Hold your line. The wardstone is reacting to him, not merely witnessing him.

Black light crawls across the carved stone. Its mark splits into several branching sigils, and the open gate groans as unseen wards tighten around the court.

the dwarf guard

the dwarf guard

The gate seal is confused. If it closes, you may be trapped outside the city, or inside it with every alarm ringing.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

Do not attempt another change. Tell me what part of you answered the wardstone, and perhaps I can keep this from becoming a breach.

✓ Quest Accepted

Keep the gate open

“I relax and take my normal of many pale skinned human forms with black hair and short horns”

SUCCESS (Great Willpower, rolled +1)

Huuuan relaxes beneath the cape, drawing the unruly shapes inward without force. His body settles into his familiar pale-skinned human form, black hair framing his face and two short horns remaining above his brow.

The second shadow folds into him and vanishes. The wardstone’s branching sigils stop crawling, though their black light continues to pulse softly beneath the carved surface.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

There. That form holds. Keep it, and the ward may read your presence instead of wrestling with every shape within you.

the dwarf guard

the dwarf guard

A man’s outline with horns is still no ordinary traveler, but the gate is no longer choking on your declaration.

The unseen pressure eases from the gate court. Spears lower by inches, and the open gates cease their groaning as the wardstone records one stable presence.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

Now answer plainly, Huuuan. When the stone reacted, did it recognize a danger, a claim, or something older than either?

the dwarf guard

the dwarf guard

And do not change again while standing beneath my gate. I have had enough surprises for one watch.

Quest Complete

Keep the gate open

“I ask to visit their library”

SUCCESS (Great Willpower, rolled -1)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard
Huuuan Huanza

Huuuan Huanza

I ask to visit your library, so I can study what Arteris already knows and find where my help may be useful.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

Granted, under escort. The Hall of Records lies within the eastern quarter, and its librarians will decide what you may consult.

the dwarf guard:1

the dwarf guard:1

Your name and declaration go into the watch ledger first. That is the cost of entering our shelves as an unknown immortal.

The dwarf guard presses a charcoal stylus to a slate, recording Huuuan’s name beneath the wardstone’s pulsing sigils. The mark flares once, leaving a black stain across his glove.

the dwarf guard:1

the dwarf guard:1

There. Now the city knows where you are, and I know which gate to blame if your scholarship becomes thunder.

The half-elf gate guard leads Huuuan through the open gate and along a stone avenue. Watchful faces follow, but no spear rises as the eastern quarter’s tall archive tower comes into view.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

You have reached the library, Huuuan. Ask for Arteris’s histories, ward maps, or records of ancient powers, and keep that stable shape while you read.

✓ Quest Accepted

Learn where Huuuan’s help may be useful to Arteris

“I summon classy clothes so im not visually nude”

SUCCESS (Fair Illusion, rolled +1)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
the dwarf guard
the dwarf guard
the dwarf guard:1
the dwarf guard:1
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard

A muted shimmer gathers around Huuuan’s stable human shape. Cloth forms from the spell’s dark radiance: a tailored charcoal coat, high-collared ivory shirt, fitted trousers, polished boots, and a deep crimson sash.

The garments settle neatly beneath his black-and-red caster cape, concealing him completely while preserving the two short horns above his brow. Their fine stitching bears no crest or city mark.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

That is considerably more suitable for entering the archives. The librarians may still object to the horns, but not to your presentation.

the dwarf guard

the dwarf guard

A conjured wardrobe, is it? Hah. At least the library will not record an indecent immortal alongside its ancient kings.

The half-elf guard studies the clothing, then turns toward the archive doors. Two robed attendants inside pause beneath the tower’s carved lintel, watching the magic fade.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

Come along, Huuuan. State your request to the receiving clerk, and let the Hall decide which shelves your unusual history may enter.

✓ Quest Accepted

Gain admission to the Hall of Records

+ New Item Acquired

Tailored charcoal wardrobe

“I state that i would like to sense for a particular book, a plague on the city, hiding in the library”

FAILURE (Good Perception, rolled -2)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
robed attendant 1
robed attendant 1
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard
Huuuan Huanza

Huuuan Huanza

I would like to sense for a particular book, a plague hidden somewhere in this library.

Huuuan stills beneath the archive lintel and extends his preternatural awareness through the tower. Shelves, ink, dust, and warded parchment unfold as layered impressions.

The search reaches a blank place where knowledge has been deliberately folded away. A bitter chill clings to a sealed catalog mark, but the book itself slips beyond his grasp.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

You sensed something. Not the volume, perhaps, but a concealment. Tell me what you found without reaching again.

Huuuan Huanza

Huuuan Huanza

The warded absence is beneath the eastern catalog seal, not among the open shelves.

One robed attendant hastily closes a brass-bound index drawer beneath the receiving desk. Its lock bears the same cold signature Huuuan touched in the library’s hidden silence.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

The restricted index can be examined by permission. If that plague book exists, its trail begins there, not in the general stacks.

“I silence myself and sense for its rambling and cursing”

FAILURE (Good Perception, rolled -3)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
robed attendant 1
robed attendant 1
robed attendant 2
robed attendant 2
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard

Huuuan falls utterly silent. Beneath his stable human shape, awareness narrows from sight and scent toward the hidden volume’s rumored rambling and cursing.

The library answers with a muffled storm of broken syllables, but the voices scatter through every sealed shelf. None belongs wholly to the book; each is a ward repeating fragments.

The brass-bound index drawer snaps open by itself. Ink crawls across its catalog cards, forming curses in several hands before smearing into meaningless black strokes.

the robed attendant

the robed attendant

No. That drawer is not to be heard. It only records what the plague makes people say.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

Step back from the index, Huuuan. Your sensing has stirred its echo, and the seal is now broadcasting instead of concealing.

The rambling abruptly collapses into one repeated phrase, audible throughout the receiving hall: “Below the eastern seal, below the eastern seal.” The hidden book remains unfound, but its containment has been exposed.

the robed attendant

the robed attendant

The lower catalog chamber must be closed before those words reach the reading rooms. Permission or not, we cannot leave the seal speaking.

Quest Complete

Gain admission to the Hall of Records

Attribute Upgrade: Perception Good→Great

“I cast disarm”

SUCCESS (Fair Illusion, rolled +1)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
the robed attendant
the robed attendant
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard

Huuuan directs the disarming spell toward the brass-bound index and the hidden seal beneath it. Pale force threads through the drawer’s black inscriptions, loosening each binding knot.

The repeated phrase stops at once. Beneath the eastern catalog seal, a concealed iron clasp springs free, and a narrow stairway is revealed behind the receiving desk.

The spell succeeds, but its release cracks through the hall like a struck bell. Several catalog cards burst into ash, and Huuuan’s right hand blisters beneath his conjured sleeve.

the robed attendant

the robed attendant

You disarmed it. By the old shelves, you actually disarmed it. The lower chamber is no longer bound to that speaking seal.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

And every librarian in the eastern quarter heard you do it. Keep your hand visible, Huuuan. I need to know whether the cost has altered you.

Huuuan Huanza

Huuuan Huanza

The hidden stair is open, and the ward’s voice has stopped.

the robed attendant

the robed attendant

We must descend before the released binding settles into another shape. The plague book is below, and now it has no seal to restrain its words.

✓ Quest Accepted

Stabilize the released plague book

“I detect trap and head down”

SUCCESS (Great Perception, rolled -1)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
the robed attendant
the robed attendant
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard

Huuuan studies the narrow stair before descending. Faint silver dust marks the edges of three steps, while a nearly invisible wire crosses the fourth, linked to the dead seal above.

Huuuan Huanza

Huuuan Huanza

The wire is newer than the stone, and the dust is meant to hide its trigger.

He steps over the wire and keeps to the inner wall, avoiding the dust. His injured right hand trembles, and the blistered skin splits, staining his sleeve with a thin line of blood.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

Trap detected. Stay where I can see you, Huuuan. I will follow your path exactly.

The half-elf guard descends behind him, one hand raised toward the robed attendant. Together they pass beneath the receiving desk as the hidden stair spirals into cold darkness.

the robed attendant

the robed attendant

The lower catalog chamber is open to us now. Whatever the plague book has been whispering, we will hear it without the eastern seal speaking for it.

At the stair’s foot, Huuuan reaches the chamber floor. Shelves of chained volumes surround a circular stone table, where one sealed black book rests beneath a fading web of silver wards.

“I look for a lattice and shock it”

SUCCESS (Mediocre Electric emission and lore, rolled +1)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
the robed attendant
the robed attendant
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard

Huuuan’s awareness traces the fading silver wards around the black book. Beneath their visible web, he finds a second lattice of interlocked sigils running through the table and chained shelves.

Huuuan Huanza

Huuuan Huanza

The hidden lattice joins the book to the chamber.

He extends his injured hand toward the stone table and releases a controlled shock. Pale arcs leap across the concealed lattice, illuminating every chain and ward without touching the book.

The lattice answers with a deep metallic hum. Its silver lines become visible, branching from the book into the floor, walls, and ceiling like roots of frozen lightning.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

You found the chamber’s true binding. Hold that current steady, Huuuan. The book is connected to the whole archive.

the robed attendant

the robed attendant

The lattice was never in the catalog records. It is older than this chamber, and the shock has forced it to reveal its structure.

The shock settles into the lattice instead of breaking it. For one clear moment, the book’s fading silver wards open like a map, exposing a single dark sigil beneath its clasp.

“I drip my blood on the book”

SUCCESS (Great Willpower, rolled +1)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
the robed attendant
the robed attendant
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard

Huuuan steadies his injured hand above the black book. A bead of blood gathers at his fingertip, drops onto the dark sigil, and vanishes into the clasp.

The silver wards turn crimson around the point of contact. The lattice hums once, then bends inward, acknowledging his blood without breaking the chains or stone table.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

It accepted you. Huuuan, keep your hand there only if you intend to be recognized by whatever made this binding.

The clasp opens beneath his blood-marked fingertip. The plague book parts its covers, revealing pages of yellowed vellum covered in cramped script that shifts between several alphabets.

the robed attendant

the robed attendant

The first page is visible. No catalog hand recorded this volume, yet its opening names the eastern archive and the keepers who buried it.

Ink gathers into a single legible line: THE PLAGUE IS A VOICE THAT LEARNS THE SHAPE OF ITS WARDEN. Beneath it, Huuuan’s blood forms a new symbol.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

That mark is answering yours. Read it aloud, or tell us what it shows before the book changes its language again.

“I chant divinity into the books lyrics”

SUCCESS (Great Willpower, rolled +0)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
the robed attendant
the robed attendant
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard

Huuuan chants divinity into the plague book’s shifting lyrics, feeding the cramped alphabets with a steady current of sacred resonance. The pages answer in layered voices.

His blood-marked symbol expands across the vellum, threading luminous script through every verse. The words settle into one readable tongue, and the book’s hidden meaning becomes clear.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

It is translating for you. Do not stop yet. The chant has made the book recognize your divinity as a speaking authority.

The cost lands in Huuuan’s injured hand: the blistered skin opens again, and the book draws a thin, deliberate stream of blood into its illuminated letters.

the robed attendant:6

the robed attendant:6

The plague is not ink or illness. It is a divine echo, learning every warden’s voice and copying it into the archive’s living wards.

The final lyric resolves beneath the clasp: the book identifies the eastern lattice as its body, and Huuuan’s chant has granted him access to its complete memory.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

You have reached the whole record, Huuuan. Now tell us whether this echo serves a buried power, or whether it has begun choosing wardens for itself.

“I chant charity”

SUCCESS (Great Willpower, rolled -2)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
the robed attendant
the robed attendant
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard

Huuuan chants charity into the plague book, offering mercy through the shifting verses. The cramped letters soften, and the divine echo accepts compassion as its governing law.

The book’s black pages turn pale beneath his hand. Every copied warden-voice falls silent, replaced by a clear record of whom the lattice has harmed and how its burdens may be shared.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

It yielded. Charity has changed the record, not erased it. The archive’s wards now recognize relief as a lawful command.

The cost arrives in the blood-marked clasp: it draws warmth from Huuuan’s injured hand, leaving his fingers numb while a thin red line spreads through the page margins.

the robed attendant

the robed attendant

There, beneath the old names. The lattice has listed every keeper it consumed, and it names the next burden plainly: the archive must be fed a willing memory.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

Huuuan, the book now asks for a memory to distribute among the wards. Do not give it anything until we know whose suffering it intends to carry.

A fresh line writes itself across the vellum, naming a sealed chamber beneath the archive and marking its door with Huuuan’s blood-bright symbol.

✓ Quest Accepted

Provide a willing memory to the archive

− Scene Quest Removed

Stabilize the released plague book

“I chant chant”

SUCCESS (Great Willpower, rolled -2)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
the robed attendant
the robed attendant
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard

Huuuan chants over the plague book, sustaining the charitable cadence through its blood-bright margins. The pages resonate softly, and the sealed chamber named by the text becomes fully mapped in luminous script.

The lattice accepts the chant as a distributing law. Threads of pale light leave the book, touching each chained shelf and carrying fragments of the archive’s burden into balanced, waiting vessels.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

It is working. The wards are sharing the memory instead of consuming one keeper, but the book is taking payment from you.

Warmth drains from Huuuan’s blood-marked hand into the clasp. His fingers stiffen with numbness, while the crimson lines spread farther across the vellum and illuminate names buried beneath the record.

the robed attendant

the robed attendant

The burden is divided among the archive’s lawful vessels. Look there, beneath the keeper rolls. That is the memory it wants carried forward.

A sealed chamber appears in the book’s reflected light: a round room beneath the foundations, its door marked with Huuuan’s symbol and surrounded by seven empty stone basins.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

Your chant has opened the record and assigned the burden. We must reach those basins before the shared memory settles into the archive permanently.

“I cast recall”

SUCCESS (Great Willpower, rolled +0)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
the robed attendant
the robed attendant
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard

Huuuan casts recall through the blood-bright clasp. The book’s divided light gathers around his numb hand, then draws the assigned memory cleanly from the seven empty basins.

The memory arrives as a complete impression: seven former wardens surrendering fragments of burden, each basin preserving one lawful portion instead of letting the lattice consume them.

Huuuan Huanza

Huuuan Huanza

The memory is shared among seven vessels, and the sealed chamber is its proper archive.

The recalled chamber overlays the present room. Huuuan sees a stair beneath the circular table, concealed beneath a removable stone marked with his symbol.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

You have it. The memory shows the chamber’s entrance, and the burden’s original division. Tell me what the former wardens left behind.

The book supplies the answer through Huuuan’s recall: each basin holds a distinct testimony, while the central seal preserves the names of those harmed by the plague.

the robed attendant:6

the robed attendant:6

Then the basins are not merely vessels. They are witnesses. We must open the hidden stair and read every testimony before the archive alters them.

Quest Complete

Learn where Huuuan’s help may be useful to Arteris

Attribute Upgrade: Willpower Great→Superb

“I lead them there, trap checking while leading them”

SUCCESS (Great Perception, rolled +0)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
the robed attendant
the robed attendant
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard

Huuuan returns to the circular table and traces the recalled symbol around its edge. A concealed stone releases beneath his touch, revealing a narrow stair descending through the archive’s foundations.

Huuuan Huanza

Huuuan Huanza

The dust is settled, but the wall joints carry fresh pressure marks.

He leads downward, testing each tread with careful weight and studying the seams. Hair-thin silver filaments span one step, while a dull amber rune sleeps beneath another.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

Show us the safe path, Huuuan. I will keep the attendant behind me and ensure no one touches what you identify.

Huuuan guides them around the filaments and marks the rune with a raised claw. A concealed stone tooth shifts under the stair, but his warning halts the others before its mechanism engages.

the robed attendant

the robed attendant

The air is changing. The testimonies are below, and the old lattice is waiting for witnesses.

The stair ends in a round sealed chamber. Seven stone basins encircle a central name-stone, each bearing a different warden’s sigil beneath faintly glowing threads.

“I send the arcane energy for wind into it”

SUCCESS (Mediocre Arcana and occult magic, rolled +2)

A Stranger at Hrrunmmua's Gate
the robed attendant
the robed attendant
the half-elf gate guard
the half-elf gate guard

Huuuan extends his hand toward the sealed chamber and sends arcane wind through the doorway. A clean current coils around the seven basins, stirring dust without disturbing their stone sigils.

The wind enters the chamber fully, circling the central name-stone and passing through each faintly glowing thread. Stale air pours upward, carrying the scent of old rain and ash.

the half-elf gate guard

the half-elf gate guard

The chamber has accepted the current. The threads are responding evenly, and none of the basins is being favored.

As the wind completes its circuit, seven suspended sigils brighten above the basins. Each releases a whisper into the moving air, distinct and orderly rather than overlapping.

the robed attendant

the robed attendant

The testimonies are waking. Your wind has separated their voices, Huuuan. We can hear each former warden without the lattice blending them together.

The central name-stone opens a narrow vertical inscription, revealing seven names beneath the dust. The chamber’s threads hold steady in the circulating wind, ready to be read.

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