The Domini Saga :the Void War

Fantasy·Silthalis

8 scenes
Scene8
The Intruder’s Hidden MarkThe Hall of Welcome
The Intruder’s Hidden Mark
Bren
Bren

The circular chamber remains silent beneath the Hall of Welcome. Sil'Thalis stands before the unbroken witness seal, his marked hand raised, while Bren completes the wayfinder's gesture beside him.

At the base of the narrowed descending passage, the unfamiliar symbol answers. Red fire threads through its grooves, the same sign that waited beneath the crown's preserved crossing.

Bren

Bren

There. It was never a Domini remnant. It marks the power that reached for the crossing from outside.

The symbol unfolds into a shadow-impressed order, its lines matching the hidden command carried by Marek. The seal records the claimant without opening for it.

Bren

Bren

Marek served this order, knowingly or not. The crown was not calling House Domini. It was resisting an intruder.

A stone table rises from the chamber floor. Its surface fills with a single illuminated direction, pointing beyond the Hall, toward a route the old witness seal has kept concealed.

✓ Quest Accepted

Identify the outside claimant

"my dear, captain Marek is apart of house Xar" I tell her

SUCCESS (Superb Willpower, rolled +0)

The Intruder’s Hidden Mark
Bren
Bren
Sil'Thalis

Sil'Thalis

My dear, Captain Marek is part of House Xar.

Bren's extended arm drops. The red symbol answers with a sharp flare, as though the name has struck a hidden chord.

Bren

Bren

House Xar. Then Marek's order was not an old Domini command wearing a false face.

The stone table's luminous direction narrows into a single mark, a broken crown crossed by a hooked line. Beneath it, ancient script resolves into a verdict.

Bren

Bren

The claimant is Xar, reaching from beyond this hall through Marek and the crossing. It has identified you as the witness who can bar its return.

The hidden route opens in the wall as a narrow stair of pale stone. The red mark turns toward Sil'Thalis's bearer hand, and the table's inscription changes from direction to command: WITNESS, CHOOSE WHO MAY PASS.

✓ Quest Accepted

Bar House Xar's return

Quest Complete

Identify the outside claimant

" bar House Xar or any of their affiliates access" I say coldly

SUCCESS (Superb Willpower, rolled +1)

The Intruder’s Hidden Mark
Bren
Bren
Sil'Thalis

Sil'Thalis

Bar House Xar, and every affiliate acting in its name, from access.

The witness-mark accepts the command without flame or thunder. Its light passes through the red symbol and seals the broken crown beneath a line of white fire.

Bren

Bren

It heard you. The claimant's path is closed to Xar, Marek, and any hand carrying their authority.

The pale stair remains open, but the red mark withdraws from it. The route now recognizes only an unaffiliated witness and those he explicitly permits.

Bren

Bren

Then the gate is yours to guard, not theirs to command.

Beyond the stair, a muted pulse answers from the darkness below. The stone table etches a second line beneath its verdict: NAME THE NEXT PASSAGE.

Bren

Bren

The claimant has been barred, but the road remains. Will you descend alone, or allow me to stand witness beside you?

Quest Complete

Bar House Xar's return

" witnesses are needed" is all I say

SUCCESS (Superb Willpower, rolled +3)

The Intruder’s Hidden Mark
Bren
Bren
Sil'Thalis

Sil'Thalis

Witnesses are needed.

The words settle into the hall without command or challenge. The white mark answers by spreading a second, quiet line across the stone table.

Bren

Bren

Then I will witness. Not as keeper, claimant, or shadow. As Bren.

Her name appears beside the new line, written in the builders' script. The stair accepts it, and a second pale trace descends beside the first.

Bren

Bren

Kynes stood alone because he believed the burden demanded it. You do not have to repeat his mistake.

The table reveals one further advantage: every witness recorded here will be remembered beyond the vault's changing seals. Bren's testimony can no longer be erased with yours.

Bren

Bren

You asked for witnesses, and the hall has made my memory part of the record. Will you let me walk beside you?

"has this been a common occurrence with this Kynes, you as his witness?" I ask

FAILURE (Poor Diplomacy, rolled +0)

The Intruder’s Hidden Mark
Bren
Bren
Sil'Thalis

Sil'Thalis

Was this common with Kynes, you as his witness? I ask.

Bren's answer catches behind her teeth. The builders' script dims, as though the table itself refuses to make a simple pattern of an old wound.

Bren

Bren

No. Not common. Kynes made certain of that. He treated witnesses as people he could endanger by standing near them.

Bren

Bren

I witnessed him three times. Once at the western breach. Once when he refused the crown's command. The third time was not a rite at all. He came to me because he was afraid his memories were no longer his.

Her fingers hover above her name, stopping short of the luminous script. The confession leaves the hall quieter, but it gives the question a shape that does not belong to Sil'Thalis.

Bren

Bren

I cannot tell you whether he asked others to witness him. I can show you where I kept my account of those three meetings. It is beneath the old wayfinder, sealed in my hand.

Bren

Bren

You may read it yourself. Then you can decide what, if anything, Kynes's pattern has to do with you.

"was one of these iterations Teren ?" I ask

SUCCESS (Superb Willpower, rolled -2)

The Intruder’s Hidden Mark
Bren
Bren
Sil'Thalis

Sil'Thalis

Was Teren involved in one of those iterations?

The question lands softly, but the wayfinder's pale line snaps toward Sil'Thalis's marked hand. His palm tightens as the testimony answers through him, drawing a sharp thread of pain up his wrist.

Bren

Bren

Yes. Teren was there for the third. Not as the caster. He held the record while Kynes tried to determine which memories had been altered.

Bren

Bren

Teren recognized the pattern before either of us did. He said the changes were not meant to make Kynes forget. They were meant to make the crown accept a different witness.

The seal beneath the old wayfinder opens without a sound. A thin tablet rises from the stone, its surface bearing three names, Kynes, Bren, and Teren, beneath a red mark that does not belong to House Domini.

Bren

Bren

That mark was absent when I sealed the account. Someone has reached into it since then.

The pain in Sil'Thalis's palm fades, leaving his hand numb and the tablet fully exposed. Teren's name is crossed by a fresh line of scarlet light, pointing down the unopened route beneath the Hall.

Bren

Bren

The account can show us what happened to Teren, but the mark will know when we read it. Do you want me to break the seal?

✓ Quest Accepted

Discover what happened to Teren

I nod for her to break the seal" how old am I then?" I ask

SUCCESS (Superb Willpower, rolled +2)

The Intruder’s Hidden Mark
Bren
Bren
Sil'Thalis

Sil'Thalis

I nod for her to break the seal. "How old was I then?"

Bren places two fingers beside the scarlet line and speaks the builders' witness-word. The red mark recoils, and the tablet unfolds into a shallow fan of pale stone.

Bren

Bren

You were twenty-three when Teren witnessed the third iteration. Young enough to be changed, old enough to know something was being taken.

The opened account casts a memory into the air. Teren stands beside Kynes, gripping the record tablet while seven shadows overlap the crown behind them.

Bren

Bren

Teren found the alteration. He copied the true sequence into a hidden ledger, then carried it below the Hall when the red mark entered the account.

A final image replaces the first: Teren descending the pale route alone, the hidden ledger under his arm. At the bottom, the scarlet symbol turns toward the memory and forms a single word in the builders' script: GATEKEEPER.

Bren

Bren

It has seen you now. It names you the gatekeeper, Sil'Thalis. The account does not show whether Teren still lives, only where he went. Shall we follow before the route closes?

"Bren, the date on this is 75 years ago. The cycle seems to go , Kynes some else, me then Teren. " I pause " But I don't seem to age, so I ask again. Just how old am I?"

The Intruder’s Hidden Mark
Bren
Bren
Sil'Thalis

Sil'Thalis

Bren, this is dated seventy-five years ago. The cycle runs Kynes, someone else, me, then Teren. I do not seem to age, so tell me again: how old am I?

Bren

Bren

By the calendar, you are at least ninety-eight. By your body, twenty-three. I cannot make those truths agree, Sil'Thalis, and I will not let the crown choose which one defines you.

" so the reiteration ritual slows down ageing then." I say out loud to my self

The Intruder’s Hidden Mark
Bren
Bren
Sil'Thalis

Sil'Thalis

So the reiteration ritual slows aging, then.

Bren

Bren

It may have preserved the body, but not cleanly. Each passage changed something. You are not a relic of Kynes, Sil'Thalis. You are the person who survived him.

" we're all inherently the same though correct?. Dark elf, wizard, asshole"

SUCCESS (Superb Willpower, rolled +1)

The Intruder’s Hidden Mark
Bren
Bren
Sil'Thalis

Sil'Thalis

We're all inherently the same, though, aren't we? Dark elf, wizard, asshole.

The words settle over the opened account without ceremony. The scarlet mark remains, but it no longer seems to divide the names beneath it.

Bren

Bren

Yes. The blood, the titles, the damage, the mistakes, none of them make one person more real than another.

Bren

Bren

Kynes believed difference made him responsible for everyone. The houses believed difference made people useful. Both were wrong in the same way.

Bren steps around the tablet and traces the old scarlet line without touching it. It leads from Teren's name toward the pale route, preserving his choice but not his fate.

Bren

Bren

Teren saw the alteration and went down alone. That is what the account proves. It does not tell me whether he lived, whether he escaped, or whether the route kept him.

Bren

Bren

I should have followed him then.

Bren

Bren

But I will not turn you into Kynes by asking you to repeat either man's loneliness. If we continue, we do it as two witnesses, neither owned by the record.

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