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Fantasy·Kenny Brewster

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Raiders Circle the Ditchbox-shaped clearing beneath the forest canopy
Raiders Circle the Ditch
the older raiders
The Older Raiders
the chonmage leader
The Chonmage Leader

Gnnamme remains concealed beside the open ditch as the tall grass parts in several places. Older teen and young adult men push through, broad-shouldered beneath crude armor, their exaggerated chonmage topknots tied badly above confused, determined faces.

The Older Raiders

The Older Raiders

Spread out! The horned stranger hides near the ditch! Circle him before he reaches the houses!

Bamboo spears and wooden blades rise above the stalks. Shields painted with crooked samurai symbols knock together as the newcomers form several noisy clusters instead of one line.

The Homeward Raiders

The Homeward Raiders

Take the ladder! Make them come down! No, hold it there, or they escape!

At the nearest stilt home, the woman grips the raised ladder with both hands while the old man braces beneath it. The child crouches behind their woven wall as boots crush grass below.

The Chonmage Leader

The Chonmage Leader

I am the strongest commander here! Everyone follow my plan! Wait, which group is mine?

The formations tighten around the ditch, but their shouting and crossed routes leave brief openings between them. Spears angle toward the concealed grass while the homes remain under pressure.

✓ Quest Accepted

Protect the stilt dwellers from the juvenile raiders

“I call to wilds chant for animal rally support”

SUCCESS (Mediocre Animal Handling, rolled +2)

Raiders Circle the Ditch
child
Child
woman
Woman
old man
Old Man
the older raiders
The Older Raiders
the chonmage leader
The Chonmage Leader
the homeward raiders
The Homeward Raiders
Gnnamme Wasa

Gnnamme Wasa

Wilds, hear this chant. Let the creatures of the green rise and answer.

Gnnamme’s chant rolls through the ditch and towering grass, deep enough to tremble in the stilt homes. The raiders falter as distant calls answer from every side.

Boars burst from the fern-dark beneath the trees, tusked adults leading a broad rush. Tree-dwelling lizards spill from branches, and huge moths whirl above the clearing.

The Chonmage Leader

The Chonmage Leader

The wild beasts are joining him! Hold the homes! No, hold the ditch! Someone tell me what to hold!

The animals surge between Gnnamme and the stilt houses, surrounding the raiders without striking. Spears lower, shields overlap, and the young attackers stumble backward.

The Homeward Raiders

The Homeward Raiders

The ladder is safe! Pull it up higher! Do not provoke the beasts!

The chant settles into the living wilderness. The gathered creatures remain arrayed as a protective barrier, while the villagers gain a clear, guarded refuge above the grass.

✓ Quest Accepted

Drive the raiders away

Quest Complete

Protect the stilt dwellers from the juvenile raiders

Skill Upgrade: Ranged Combat Mediocre→Fair

“I holler a warning and rallying roar”

SUCCESS (Great Willpower, rolled -1)

Raiders Circle the Ditch
the chonmage leader
The Chonmage Leader
Gnnamme Wasa

Gnnamme Wasa

Back from the homes! Lower your weapons, or the wild will drive you from this clearing!

Gnnamme’s warning becomes a rallying roar, rolling beneath the canopy and shaking seedheads loose. The force tears his throat raw, leaving a copper taste, but every raider hears him.

The Chonmage Leader

The Chonmage Leader

He commands the beasts and the clearing! Spears down! Nobody rushes the horned stranger!

The boars stamp and snort behind him while lizards cling to the trunks overhead. The raiders obey in fragments, lowering bamboo points and backing away from the stilt ladders.

The Homeward Raiders

The Homeward Raiders

We are leaving the houses! Keep the animals between us and him! Do not make him roar again!

Above, the woman cautiously lowers the ladder’s end without releasing her grip. The old man peers over the threshold, staring from Gnnamme to the living barrier.

The Chonmage Leader

The Chonmage Leader

Horned commander, name your demand! Food, tools, territory? We can bargain, if the beasts remain calm!

Quest Complete

Drive the raiders away

“You will build them a wall of nearby stones”

FAILURE (Great Willpower, rolled -3)

Raiders Circle the Ditch
child
Child
woman
Woman
old man
Old Man
the chonmage leader
The Chonmage Leader
Gnnamme Wasa

Gnnamme Wasa

Build a stone wall around the homes. Keep the villagers behind it, and leave your weapons lowered.

Gnnamme points toward a rough scatter of stones beneath the trees. The raiders glance at one another, then begin hauling them through the trampled grass while the beasts hold position.

The Chonmage Leader

The Chonmage Leader

You heard him! Stack the stones high! Make it strong enough to keep out anything in the green!

The first stones form a crooked line below the nearest stilt home. More raiders drag heavy slabs from the ditch edge, loosening roots and packing weight onto unstable soil.

The Homeward Raiders

The Homeward Raiders

The ground is shifting! Stop adding them! The wall is leaning toward the ladder!

The hurried wall slumps before reaching the second home, spilling stones across the ditch and pinning the lowered ladder beneath a jagged heap. The villagers remain above, but their escape is blocked.

The Chonmage Leader

The Chonmage Leader

Do not touch the pile! Horned commander, the wall failed, but the homes are still exposed. Tell us where to move the next stones!

✓ Quest Accepted

Free the pinned ladder

“I adjust the miss craft and command they continue”

SUCCESS (Mediocre Crafting and Enchanting, rolled +0)

Raiders Circle the Ditch
child
Child
woman
Woman
old man
Old Man
the chonmage leader
The Chonmage Leader
the homeward raiders
The Homeward Raiders

Gnnamme steps to the slumped stones and lifts the largest slabs aside, exposing the trapped ladder. He sets each piece into a broader, lower foundation.

A sharp edge scrapes his palm, and several stones crash loudly into the ditch. The boars grunt, but remain between the raiders and the homes.

Gnnamme Wasa

Gnnamme Wasa

Reset the wall low and wide. Clear the ladder, then continue stacking around the homes. Keep your weapons lowered.

The Chonmage Leader

The Chonmage Leader

You heard the horned commander! Clear the ladder first, then build where he placed the stones!

The raiders obey, dragging loose stones away from the ladder and packing them beneath Gnnamme’s new foundation. The crooked line becomes a solid, waist-high ring.

The Homeward Raiders

The Homeward Raiders

The ladder is free! The wall holds this time. Bring the next stones from the trees, not the ditch edge!

The woman lowers the ladder cautiously, and the old man helps guide the villagers behind the cleared stones. Above them, anxious faces watch the raiders continue their work.

Quest Complete

Free the pinned ladder

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