Adventure of Max DrakeHall. 1

Space Opera·Max DrakeHall.

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Inspection Before Hard VacuumDock Seven — Veyra Salvage berth
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Mara Venn
Mara Venn

Forty minutes later, Max reaches Dock Seven with the contract advance secured in his account and a compact tool case strapped beside his prosthetic leg. The Veyra Salvage berth vibrates beneath his boots.

Mara Venn waits beside a battered construction mech. She is a lean middle-aged woman in a dark utility coat, with close-cropped silver hair and a bright scar crossing one eyebrow.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

DrakeHall. Good. The loading frame took a bad impact, and Veyra cannot depart until it holds under thrust.

Behind her, three crew members stand in pressure gear near the bay controls. The outer doors cycle open in warning bands, exposing darkness and a scatter of distant stars beyond the damaged frame.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

The bay is already cycling to hard vacuum. I need your assessment before we lock the doors and start cutting.

The battered mech's loader arms hang motionless over the fractured external assembly. Warning lights reflect across Max's cybernetic hand as the watching crew waits for his first inspection.

✓ Quest Accepted

Make the loading frame hold under thrust

“Max being an honest man and seeing how. Things are. Knows what the Mac is supposed to do. So what he does is he walks over. And starts running diagnostics. To attempt. To see what all is broken. And what all can be salvage?”

SUCCESS (Fair Engineering, rolled +1)

Max crosses to the battered construction mech and clips his tool case into the diagnostic socket. Its systems wake in layers, spilling fractured load maps across his visor.

Max DrakeHall.

Max DrakeHall.

The impact crushed the outer collar, but the main chassis is still true.

He runs actuator checks, power continuity, and structural stress projections. The forward lift assembly is unsalvageable, while both rear actuators and the control core remain serviceable.

A diagnostic filament overheats and fuses inside the socket. Max cuts it free, losing the probe but preserving the complete damage report and a workable salvage list.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

Tell me what stays useful, DrakeHall.

The report marks the rear actuators, control core, and hydraulic manifold for recovery. It also specifies a replacement forward collar and bracing sequence before the frame can take thrust.

The Crew Member at the Controls

The Crew Member at the Controls

If that collar is all it needs, we can keep the departure window.

✓ Quest Accepted

Obtain a replacement forward collar

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“is it Easy. to find? The replacement parts.”

YES, AND MORE (Unlikely, rolled 7)

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Mara Venn
Mara Venn
the crew member at the controls
The Crew Member at the Controls

The salvage manifest opens a maintenance cache aboard Veyra, listing a compatible forward collar, bracing struts, and sealed actuator couplings in a nearby cargo locker. The parts are already aboard, untouched and ready for recovery.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

That is more than I expected. The cache was logged as dead freight, and the collar is a higher-load model than the damaged one.

A cargo schematic highlights the locker beside the repair bay, only one pressure door from the damaged frame. Its inventory includes certified bracing hardware, eliminating the need to fabricate a temporary support.

The Crew Member at the Controls

The Crew Member at the Controls

I can cycle that locker open without delaying departure. We have the proper parts, and they are close.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

Crew, move the cache to the mech. DrakeHall, your salvage list just became a repair schedule.

The crew member by the mech breaks from the controls and joins the others at the pressure door. Warning bands continue to pulse, but the bay no longer feels stalled. The departure window remains intact.

“Max is a man of achievement. Unlike to go above and beyond for . Stuff like this. He does his work well. And he does it right. He continues running diagnostics going deeper into the systems. Resetting calibration. As needed.”

SUCCESS (Fair Engineering, rolled +2)

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Mara Venn
Mara Venn
the crew member at the controls
The Crew Member at the Controls

Max continues through the diagnostic tree, tracing load feedback from the surviving rear actuators into the control core. His prosthetic fingers make precise adjustments while the fractured maps resolve into clean readings.

Max DrakeHall.

Max DrakeHall.

The control core is compensating for a calibration drift, not structural damage.

He resets the actuator zero points, balances hydraulic response, and reruns the stress projections. Each correction settles into the system without disturbing the salvage schedule.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

That is a clean report. Keep going until you are satisfied.

Max checks the coupling tolerances against the replacement collar, then locks the corrected values into the mech's maintenance memory. The repair sequence now carries verified alignment data.

Mike

Mike

The loader is responding better already. We can move the collar without fighting the arms.

Across the bay, the control displays turn from amber to green. The crew member at the controls begins the locker cycle while Mara studies Max's completed diagnostics.

“Max says." Like what you see"”

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Mike
Mike
Mara Venn
Mara Venn
Max DrakeHall.

Max DrakeHall.

Like what you see?

Mara glances from the stabilized diagnostic display to Max's tool case, then back to the mech as the locker seal releases with a heavy clang.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

I like a machine that stops arguing with its mechanic. More importantly, I like a repair that survives the first thrust burn.

The crew member by the mech guides a sealed collar from the cargo locker. Its reinforced ribs catch the bay lights, clean and undamaged beneath the dust of storage.

Mike

Mike

This collar is heavier than the old one, but the loader can handle it now.

Mara taps the repair schedule into the bay display. The departure countdown resumes, and the green status lights hold steady across the damaged frame.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

Then keep looking pleased, DrakeHall. We have a ship to make ready.

“" I'll see what I could do" Max was given an order, so he's going to. They keep it up. Looking deeper in. Into figuring out what all happed To the mech camera logs. Anything. What caused the Meck? To have a fractured collar. Is the answer I'm trying to figure out.”

SUCCESS (Fair Engineering, rolled +2)

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Max keeps the diagnostic socket live and drops into the mech’s archived camera feed. Damaged timestamps rebuild around the moment the collar failed, frame by frame.

The exterior view shows the loader braced against Veyra’s cargo frame. A sudden lateral jolt twists the assembly, but the collar fractures only after a maintenance tug clamps onto the wrong hardpoint.

Max DrakeHall.

Max DrakeHall.

The impact started it. The tug finished it.

Max isolates the tug’s telemetry and overlays it with the collar’s stress map. The force came from a misaligned recovery maneuver, not a hidden flaw in the replacement design.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

You found the failure point?

The finding populates the repair report: the original collar was compromised by an incorrect clamp placement during the last cargo transfer. The surviving frame and control core remain sound.

Mike

Mike

So nobody needs to replace the whole loader.

Director's note

And under his breath He says " An idiot Used this thing, last should get fired"

“" Yep."”

SUCCESS (Superb Reasoning, rolled -2)

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Mike
Mike
Mara Venn
Mara Venn

Max cross-checks the tug telemetry against the collar’s fracture geometry and the surviving load paths. The conclusion is firm: the loader’s main chassis, control core, and rear actuators do not require replacement.

The verification consumes eleven minutes as Max reconstructs the maneuver from overlapping sensor records. One timestamp block remains corrupted, leaving the exact instant of clamp misalignment uncertain, but not its consequence.

Mike

Mike

So the loader stays. We replace the collar, brace the frame, and leave the rest intact.

The repair display updates, deleting the full-loader replacement estimate and preserving only the collar, bracing struts, and coupling checks. The revised schedule still supports departure after the repair.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

Good. That saves the contract and keeps our departure window alive. Mark the old failure as handling damage, not equipment loss.

Mara signs the amended report. Beyond the bay, the damaged collar waits beneath its replacement, while the construction mech’s remaining systems hold steady under diagnostic power.

“"You know I. Been having trouble finding a job recently. Maybe we can Continue Working together in the near future"”

SUCCESS (Great Willpower, rolled +2)

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Mara Venn
Mara Venn
Max DrakeHall.

Max DrakeHall.

You know I’ve been having trouble finding a job recently. Maybe we can continue working together in the near future.

The offer settles into the quiet between warning tones. Max keeps one cybernetic hand on the diagnostic housing while the repaired loader waits under bay lights.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

That was already my intention, DrakeHall. Veyra Salvage needs someone who can tell damaged equipment from lost equipment.

Mara closes the amended report and opens a personnel contract beside it. The offer carries recurring repair work, travel between ports, and payment terms visible before acceptance.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

I can put you on the regular rotation, starting with this ship. No promises beyond the work, but the work is real.

The crew member by the mech secures the replacement collar against its transport cradle. Across the bay, the departure schedule accepts Max as assigned repair lead.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

Finish this repair, and the next berth is yours too. Welcome aboard, DrakeHall.

Mara extends the contract across the display. Its first assignment is confirmed, and the employment line continues beyond Veyra’s departure.

“Max Drake Hall. Cracks a smile. As he signs the contract. Reading through it a couple times. As a habit.”

SUCCESS (Superb Reasoning, rolled +4)

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Mara Venn
Mara Venn

Max cracks a small smile and takes the contract from the display. He reads every clause once, then starts again, checking payment dates, travel obligations, termination language, and assignment authority.

The second pass confirms the practical details without hiding any unpleasant surprises. His habit catches a favorable clause buried in the compensation schedule: each completed berth adds a certified housing allowance to his pay.

Max signs with his cybernetic hand. The display accepts the authorization, timestamps the agreement, and transfers the first assignment into his work profile as repair lead aboard Veyra.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

You read it twice. Good. That allowance is deliberate, and it starts with this berth.

Mara reviews the completed signature, then expands the personnel record. The housing allowance is marked active rather than discretionary, giving Max a steadier path through the leasekeeper's remaining balance.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

Welcome aboard. Finish the collar and bracing, and I will route you the next port before we break orbit.

“Max begins getting to work. Being proactive. With how things are set up. He gets the collar installed. Double checks, triple checks. And then runs another diagnostic.”

FAILURE (Fair Engineering, rolled +0)

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Mike
Mike
Mara Venn
Mara Venn

Max starts the repair sequence, isolates the loader hydraulics, and exposes the damaged collar seat. He mutters under his breath while checking the frame for distortion and debris.

He aligns the replacement schedule against the mounting geometry, then reaches the transport cradle beside the mech. The collar remains sealed inside its restraint frame, beyond his reach.

Max proceeds with the accessible work, cleaning the exposed seats and verifying the hydraulic isolation points. He checks the tolerances twice, then a third time, without the collar in place.

The mounting sequence halts at its hard prerequisite. The certified part is present in the bay, but its locked cradle prevents installation, leaving the loader unable to receive the final alignment checks.

Max runs another diagnostic on the incomplete assembly. The report confirms the frame is ready, then flags the absent installed collar and blocks the load test.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

Mike, release that collar and bring it to the mount. DrakeHall cannot finish the alignment without it.

The failure leaves a precise handoff instead of a finished repair: the loader is prepared, but the sealed collar must be released and positioned before Max can continue.

“Max is a hard worker. So he goes over there and helps him. Get the collar. He's not going to stand around and do nothing.”

SUCCESS (Good Strength, rolled +2)

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Mike
Mike

Max leaves the diagnostic station and crosses to the transport cradle. Under his breath, he condemns the idiot who last used the equipment and says they should be fired.

Mike

Mike

The restraint is locked harder than the manifest says. Give me a hand on the release bar.

Max braces his prosthetic leg against the cradle and grips the bar beside Mike. Together they shift the mechanism, his strength taking the load as the lock disengages with a hard snap.

The collar rolls free without striking the deck. Max catches its guide frame, steadies the heavy component, and helps Mike steer it across the bay toward the exposed mount.

Mara Venn

Mara Venn

Good. Set it on the alignment marks, then let DrakeHall take the final fit.

Mike and Max lower the collar onto the prepared seat. The reinforced ribs meet the marked geometry cleanly, and the loader display accepts the part, unlocking the alignment checks and load-test sequence.

Quest Complete

Obtain a replacement forward collar

Attribute Upgrade: Reasoning Superb→Legendary

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