
Astrid reaches the knight's keep as dusk stains the road violet. Six mailed guards, all young men with close-cropped hair and mud-streaked steel armor surround a toppled noble carriage, its splintered wheels sunk in mud and its horses gone.
At the center stands Brother Caldus, a gaunt elderly man in a torn brown cassock, white hair plastered to his sweat-darkened brow. His hands tremble above a blood-marked scrap.

Captain Veyra
Hold there. No one crosses this ring until the priest explains why raiders left every coin, blade, and captive behind.
A red message is nailed to the carriage door: A friend's vengeance is not yet spent. Beneath it, the noble crest has been scored away.

Brother Caldus
I have told you all I know. They came from the trees, spoke no names, and vanished before I could properly see them.

Captain Veyra
You knew enough to hide the message under your vest. Every witness says you know more, priest.

Brother Caldus
If I speak the name, the vengeance will find another road to blood.
✓ Quest Accepted
Establish whether Brother Caldus is telling the truth
✓ Quest Accepted
Discover the identity of the raiders
“brother caldus, we mean you no trouble, we just need help understanding the situation. I rest a gentle hand on his shoulder and smile warmly to steady his nerves”
FAILURE (Terrible Willpower, rolled +1)


Astrid
Brother Caldus, we mean you no trouble. We only need your help understanding what happened.
Astrid steps within the guarded ring and rests a gentle hand on Brother Caldus's shoulder, offering him a warm smile. His trembling worsens beneath her touch, and several guards tense around their drawn blades.

Brother Caldus
Please, no closer. I believe you mean kindness, but kindness will not make that name safe to speak.
Brother Caldus pulls the blood-marked scrap from his sleeve instead, keeping his eyes fixed on the scored crest. His fear defeats reassurance, but he extends the scrap toward Astrid.

Brother Caldus
Read what remains. The ink is mine, but the warning was copied from an older vow. The answer may lie in the keep's chapel records.

Captain Veyra
You will not take that scrap from the ring, priest. Astrid, step back and let him speak where I can hear him.
The offered clue hangs between them. Brother Caldus has not named the avenger, but the chapel archives provide a safer path to understanding than pressing him for the name.
“brother caldus, we mean you no trouble, we just need help understanding the situation. I rest a gentle hand on his shoulder and smile warmly to steady his nerves”
FAILURE (Terrible Willpower, rolled +1)


Astrid
Brother Caldus, we mean you no trouble. We only need help understanding what happened.
Astrid rests a gentle hand on Brother Caldus's shoulder and offers a warm smile. Instead of settling him, the contact makes his breath catch, and he recoils toward the carriage.

Brother Caldus
Forgive me. I cannot bear reassurance while that vow hangs over us. Do not ask me to name the avenger.
Captain Veyra's guards tighten their ring, but Veyra raises one gauntleted hand, holding them back. Caldus clutches the scrap against his chest.

Captain Veyra
Then give us what you can give us. What does the chapel record say?

Brother Caldus
The old vow is indexed beneath the chapel's ash register. It records the first grievance, not the avenger's name. That is the safer road.
Brother Caldus retreats from Astrid's touch, but the refusal opens a practical path: the keep's chapel archives may reveal the grievance without forcing him to speak the forbidden name.
“I smile warmly and thank him and then ask is there anything else that you know that can help us ?”
SUCCESS (Terrible Willpower, rolled +2)


Astrid
Thank you, Brother Caldus. Is there anything else you know that could help us?
Astrid's warm smile remains as she lowers her hand and gives him space. The guards' tension eases slightly, though Captain Veyra keeps watch over every movement.

Brother Caldus
There is one thing. The vow was renewed three nights ago, at the old saint's shrine beyond the eastern wall.

Brother Caldus
I found wax beneath the chapel ash, black as pitch, stamped with a broken crown. The seal belonged to the noble house before its crest was erased.
Caldus unfolds the scrap fully. Along its torn edge, a faint line of silver script catches the last violet light, forming a direction and a time.

Captain Veyra
The shrine, then. We can search it before midnight. Priest, you will show us the ash register and every mark you found.

Brother Caldus
I will. But if the vow has truly been renewed, the shrine may already be watched.
“We all then began to travel in the direction he pointed us to go”
SUCCESS (Legendary Agility, rolled -1)

Astrid and the others leave the keep by the eastern gate, following the direction Brother Caldus indicated. Violet dusk deepens over the muddy road.
Astrid moves swiftly over the uneven ground, her exceptionally long red hair streaming behind her and blue battle paint stark against her skin. The guards struggle to match her pace.

Brother Caldus
The shrine lies beyond the wall, beneath the blackthorn ridge. We should reach it before the moon clears the clouds.

Captain Veyra
Keep formation. No one touches the shrine until Caldus confirms the marks.
The road bends through blackthorn and climbs toward a weathered stone arch. Beyond it, the old saint's shrine stands in a hollow, its candles extinguished and its door ajar.

Brother Caldus
The vow has been renewed. Someone came here tonight, and they may still be close.
The party arrives at the shrine together. Black wax glints on the threshold, stamped with the broken crown, while silver writing marks a fresh direction across the inner stone.
“I ask Caldus to interpret the shrine marks”
FAILURE (Terrible Reasoning, rolled -1)


Astrid
Brother Caldus, interpret these shrine marks for us.
Astrid points toward the fresh silver writing across the inner stone. The cramped symbols twist through older carvings, their edges blurred as though recently disturbed.

Brother Caldus
I can read the old hand, but this overlay is no vow I know. The first marks say, “Ash remembers the crown.” The rest has been turned against itself.
Brother Caldus kneels without crossing the threshold and raises a candle. In its weak light, the silver strokes shift, revealing three reversed characters and a jagged line pointing beneath the shrine door.

Brother Caldus
No, that is not a direction. It is an instruction to unmake the reading. Whoever wrote this expected an interpreter to fail.
His failed reading changes the clue from a path to a puzzle. The black wax seal softens in the candle heat, exposing a tiny iron key pressed into its underside.

Captain Veyra
Then stop reading it as a message. Caldus, tell us what that key opens, and keep your hands where I can see them.
“I ask Caldus to interpret the shrine marks”
FAILURE (Terrible Willpower, rolled +0)

Caldus studies the iron key, then angles the candle toward the reversed characters. His lips form the sequence twice, but the silver writing blurs into a single hooked mark.

Brother Caldus
I cannot tell what the key opens. The overlay defeats the old hand, and forcing a reading would make me guess.
As he admits failure, candlelight catches a narrow keyhole beneath the shrine door, hidden behind a ridge of blackened stone. The key's teeth match its uneven shape.

Captain Veyra
There. A lock, not a direction. Caldus, can you say whether turning it will seal this place or open it?

Brother Caldus
Not safely. But the lower carving shows an ash bowl beside the keyhole. The lock likely guards the shrine's records, or whatever replaced them.
The silver marks fade further, leaving only the hooked symbol and the concealed keyhole. The readable clue is gone, but the hidden lock offers a tangible way forward.
“I ask Caldus to interpret the shrine marks”
FAILURE (Terrible Reasoning, rolled -1)


Astrid
Brother Caldus, interpret the shrine marks for us.
Astrid indicates the fading silver strokes and hooked symbol. Brother Caldus bends close, holding the candle steady while the guards watch the threshold.

Brother Caldus
The old hand is gone. If I force meaning onto this, I may lead them into the wrong lock.

Brother Caldus
I cannot interpret the overlay. The old words have been twisted beyond my learning, and guessing would make this clue dangerous.
His admission changes the marks. The last silver strokes collapse into dull powder, slipping into the groove around the keyhole and filling it completely.

Captain Veyra
Then the writing is spent. No more readings. Caldus, tell me what the ash bowl is for.

Brother Caldus
I cannot know that from the carving. The lock is our evidence now, and opening it may reveal the records or destroy what remains.
“I ask Caldus to interpret the shrine marks”
FAILURE (Terrible Willpower, rolled +2)

Astrid’s request hangs over the threshold. Caldus studies the final silver traces until they crumble, unable to recover their meaning or safely guide the key.

Brother Caldus
The old hand is gone. If I force meaning onto this, I may lead us into the wrong lock.
The powder slides into the keyhole, packing its narrow mouth. Beneath the shrine door, the carved ash bowl catches a faint gray sheen.

Captain Veyra
Then the writing is spent. Caldus, what is the bowl for?

Brother Caldus
I cannot know from the carving. But the ash has gathered there deliberately. It may preserve whatever the lock was meant to reveal.
Caldus points to a hairline seam around the bowl. It is not fixed stone, but a shallow socket, offering a second approach without forcing the clogged keyhole.
“I ask Caldus to interpret the shrine marks”
SUCCESS (Terrible Willpower, rolled +3)


Astrid
Brother Caldus, interpret the shrine marks for us.
Astrid indicates the fading silver traces and the ash bowl. Brother Caldus steadies his candle, then studies the seam with renewed care.

Brother Caldus
The marks were not meant to guide a hand to the keyhole. They direct the ash into the bowl, where the hidden script can be read.
He brushes a pinch of gray powder from the clogged keyhole into the shallow socket. The ash settles in deliberate lines, revealing a small crown split by a vertical stroke.

Brother Caldus
There. The broken crown is a warning, and the line beneath it means witness. The bowl preserves the record for anyone who knows to look.

Captain Veyra
Then read the record, priest. Tell us what this shrine witnessed.
Brother Caldus leans over the ash without touching it. Beneath the crown, a second pattern emerges: three figures entering, and one leaving toward the ridge.
✓ Quest Accepted
Get Brother Caldus to explain the witness mark
“Is the lone departing figure one of the raiders?”
YES (Likely, rolled 18)
The ash lines sharpen beneath the split crown. The lone figure bears the same hooked mark at its shoulder as the three who entered, then turns toward the blackthorn ridge.

Brother Caldus
Yes. The departing figure is one of the raiders. The shrine witnessed their arrival together, but only one carried the vow onward.
A fourth mark appears beside the departing figure, shaped like a small open eye. Ash gathers along its edge, pointing beyond the ridge toward the darkening eastern hills.

Captain Veyra
Then the raid was not an escape. One of them left with a purpose, and the others remained long enough to erase the noble crest.
Brother Caldus's candle gutters as a cold wind slips beneath the shrine door. The ash record holds, but its final line fractures before revealing where the lone raider went.

Brother Caldus
The witness mark confirms the old vow was carried beyond this shrine.
− Scene Quest Removed
Establish whether Brother Caldus is telling the truth
✓ Quest Accepted
Confirm Brother Caldus's account
“Can the ash record still reveal where the lone raider went?”
YES (Even, rolled 37)
The fractured ash line trembles in the cold draft, then draws itself together. Its broken end extends past the open eye, curving toward a narrow notch in the eastern hills.

Brother Caldus
It has not vanished. The witness mark was waiting for the wind to pass. The raider went through the ravine beneath the eastern notch.
A second trail forms beneath the first, three short strokes beside a crescent. The ash depicts a fallen standing stone, then a dark hollow beyond it.

Captain Veyra
The ravine is the old shepherd's cut. If the record is true, the raider crossed the ridge and took shelter beyond the fallen stone.

Brother Caldus
The vow was carried onward, but not blindly. Whoever left knew this shrine would preserve the route.
The final ash strokes settle into an arrowhead pointing east. At its tip, a tiny mark resembles a closed eye, warning that the trail ends beneath concealment.

Captain Veyra
We have a direction and a landmark. Move before the wind erases the rest.
− Scene Quest Removed
Get Brother Caldus to explain the witness mark
✓ Quest Accepted
Find evidence of the raider's purpose
“Can we reach the hollow before the wind erases the ash trail?”
YES (Likely, rolled 45)
The wind slackens as Captain Veyra leads the party from the shrine. The ash arrowhead remains intact, its closed-eye mark still pointing toward the eastern notch.

Brother Caldus
The trail holds. We have time enough to reach the hollow before the record is erased.
They climb through blackthorn under a moon veiled by cloud. Astrid keeps ahead of the guards, while Caldus shelters the candle flame against the restless air.

Captain Veyra
Keep close. The ravine mouth should be beyond that rise, and concealment favors anyone waiting below.
At the eastern notch, the fallen standing stone emerges from the bracken exactly as the ash depicted it. Beyond lies a dark hollow beneath the ridge.

Brother Caldus
There. The witness led us true. Whatever the closed eye conceals, it is beneath that stone and not far ahead.
Behind them, the wind rises again across the shrine. The ash trail disappears, but the party has reached the hollow before its warning is lost.
− Scene Quest Removed
Confirm Brother Caldus's account
✓ Quest Accepted
Expose whether Brother Caldus's account is true
“Is the hollow occupied by anyone waiting below?”
YES (Likely, rolled 51)
The hollow is not empty. Beneath the fallen stone, a faint ember glows behind a screen of roots, and the smell of banked woodsmoke drifts uphill.

Captain Veyra
Stop. Someone is below us, waiting with a covered fire. No one advances until I see their hands.
The guards halt behind Veyra, shields rising. From the hollow comes the soft scrape of metal against stone, followed by a deliberate silence.

Brother Caldus
They heard us. That is no abandoned shelter. The closed eye warned of concealment, not safety.
A figure remains hidden beyond the roots, but its shadow crosses the ember's glow. A bowstring creaks once, measured and ready.
The Hidden Watcher
Leave the priest and turn back. The vow has already claimed what it was owed.

Captain Veyra
You are surrounded, hidden one. Show yourself and answer for the raiders, or remain in darkness and be treated as hostile.
− Scene Quest Removed
Find evidence of the raider's purpose
“2. • "I step out from cover with a booming voice and demand they lower their weapons, intimidating them into standing down and state if you know Brother caldus!"”
SUCCESS (Legendary Intimidation, rolled +1)
Astrid steps from the roots into the emberlight, her exceptionally long red hair spilling over her shoulders and blue battle paint bright against her skin. Her battleaxe hangs ready at her side.

Astrid
Lower your weapons! Stand down, and tell me whether you know Brother Caldus!
The command rolls through the hollow like thunder. Captain Veyra lowers her gauntleted hand, and six shields dip as bows and blades retreat from readiness.
A young adult elf woman steps from behind the roots, lean and weather-browned, with cropped black hair, a moss-green cloak, and a pale scar crossing one eyebrow. She lowers her bow.
The Hidden Watcher
I know Brother Caldus. I know the fear his silence carries, and I know the vow that follows him.

Captain Veyra
Weapons lowered, but not abandoned. Watcher, answer plainly. Why threaten the priest, and who sent the raiders?
The Hidden Watcher
No one sent them. They came to settle an old grievance. Caldus survived because the vow required a witness, not another corpse.
✓ Quest Accepted
Get the hidden watcher to explain the old grievance
− Scene Quest Removed
Expose whether Brother Caldus's account is true
“"Tell us everything you know right now!"”
SUCCESS (Legendary Intimidation, rolled -1)

Astrid
Tell us everything you know right now!
Astrid's demand cuts through the hollow. The elf watcher studies her for a long breath, then lowers her bow completely and steps into the emberlight.
The Hidden Watcher
The raiders were heirs and sworn blades of House Vauldren. Their house was ruined by a judgment Caldus helped deliver, though he was not the only hand upon it.
The Hidden Watcher
Three came to the shrine. They carried the broken-crown seal and renewed an older vow: one would bear the grievance onward, while the others erased Vauldren's crest and took the household's records.
Captain Veyra's expression hardens, but she keeps her sword lowered. Brother Caldus closes his eyes, his face tightening as the hidden history finally stands in the open.
The Hidden Watcher
The lone bearer went through the shepherd's ravine toward Vauldren's abandoned hall. I do not know whether vengeance means judgment, proof, or blood. I know only that the vow demands a witness.
The Hidden Watcher
I watched the shrine because Caldus was meant to follow the trail, and because someone else has been tracking the raiders. That pursuer left fresh bootmarks beyond the ravine, heading for the hall.
Confirm whether Brother Caldus's account is true
Quest Complete
Discover the identity of the raiders
Attribute Upgrade: Willpower Terrible→Poor
Quest Complete
Get the hidden watcher to explain the old grievance